丁曉鐘2023年12月四級(jí)作文點(diǎn)評(píng)和范文
The approach of the Chinese Lunar New Year poses a national issue
concerning the necessity of holding the CCTV Spring Festival Gala. Its established
status is being challenged by a growing number of people, especially by
younger generations. It is increasingly difficult to cater for all tastes.
Some individuals deem that it should be canceled or replaced by other
programs. These young people focus their attention on other forms of
celebration instead of immersing themselves in TV. Despite that, the
majority of mid-aged people and senior citizens uphold the
importance of the traditional performance. The most striking feature of
this gala is its traditionally close link with ordinary peoples lives.
Most of people view this gala as an annual staple on the traditional
Chinese Spring Festival Eve. They all have a restless night and glue their
eyes on the television.
I am not supportive of the view that the grand gala should be abandoned. Undoubtedly, it
plays a vital role in the celebration of Chinese New Year. To increase its
appeal and meet young adults need, the upcoming performance should invite
some big names including super stars from Hongkong and Taiwan. We are all
eagerly anticipating this unforgettable evening show.
點(diǎn)評(píng):
本次四級(jí)考試作文總體上來(lái)說(shuō)并不是很難。但表現(xiàn)出兩個(gè)出人意料：一是體裁，二是題材。
對(duì)于體裁來(lái)說(shuō)，本次四級(jí)作文屬于正反對(duì)比論證類的文體。比較出人意料，又回到了老的考查模式。很多學(xué)生把考前死背的作文模板派上了用場(chǎng)。但是這只能得到最基本的分?jǐn)?shù)。雖然模板對(duì)于考查學(xué)生的語(yǔ)言表達(dá)并不益處，但還能測(cè)試出考生的語(yǔ)言基本功。從四級(jí)考試寫(xiě)作的測(cè)試目的來(lái)看，還是注重考查學(xué)生對(duì)基本語(yǔ)法、基本詞匯運(yùn)用能力的掌握情況。所以除了模板之外，考生還要在基本表達(dá)上狠下功夫，只有在平時(shí)多操練，在考場(chǎng)上才游刃有余。除此之外，學(xué)生還要在作文中多采用閃光點(diǎn)，這樣就會(huì)使作文在基本分?jǐn)?shù)上有所提升，有所突破。
對(duì)于題材，本次四級(jí)作文的話題是關(guān)于人們對(duì)于春節(jié)晚會(huì)的不同看法，屬于社會(huì)生活類話題，一反常態(tài)，沒(méi)有再次考查校園類話題。但是對(duì)于當(dāng)代大學(xué)生來(lái)說(shuō)，與大學(xué)生有關(guān)的社會(huì)話題也是需要關(guān)注的，這也說(shuō)明考試方向的變化：校園類話題與社會(huì)熱點(diǎn)話題同等重要,這一點(diǎn)對(duì)于未來(lái)考四級(jí)的學(xué)生的作文備考的方向有一定的指導(dǎo)意義。
The approach of the Chinese Lunar New Year poses a national issue
concerning the necessity of holding the CCTV Spring Festival Gala. Its established
status is being challenged by a growing number of people, especially by
younger generations. It is increasingly difficult to cater for all tastes.
Some individuals deem that it should be canceled or replaced by other
programs. These young people focus their attention on other forms of
celebration instead of immersing themselves in TV. Despite that, the
majority of mid-aged people and senior citizens uphold the
importance of the traditional performance. The most striking feature of
this gala is its traditionally close link with ordinary peoples lives.
Most of people view this gala as an annual staple on the traditional
Chinese Spring Festival Eve. They all have a restless night and glue their
eyes on the television.
I am not supportive of the view that the grand gala should be abandoned. Undoubtedly, it
plays a vital role in the celebration of Chinese New Year. To increase its
appeal and meet young adults need, the upcoming performance should invite
some big names including super stars from Hongkong and Taiwan. We are all
eagerly anticipating this unforgettable evening show.
點(diǎn)評(píng):
本次四級(jí)考試作文總體上來(lái)說(shuō)并不是很難。但表現(xiàn)出兩個(gè)出人意料：一是體裁，二是題材。
對(duì)于體裁來(lái)說(shuō)，本次四級(jí)作文屬于正反對(duì)比論證類的文體。比較出人意料，又回到了老的考查模式。很多學(xué)生把考前死背的作文模板派上了用場(chǎng)。但是這只能得到最基本的分?jǐn)?shù)。雖然模板對(duì)于考查學(xué)生的語(yǔ)言表達(dá)并不益處，但還能測(cè)試出考生的語(yǔ)言基本功。從四級(jí)考試寫(xiě)作的測(cè)試目的來(lái)看，還是注重考查學(xué)生對(duì)基本語(yǔ)法、基本詞匯運(yùn)用能力的掌握情況。所以除了模板之外，考生還要在基本表達(dá)上狠下功夫，只有在平時(shí)多操練，在考場(chǎng)上才游刃有余。除此之外，學(xué)生還要在作文中多采用閃光點(diǎn)，這樣就會(huì)使作文在基本分?jǐn)?shù)上有所提升，有所突破。
對(duì)于題材，本次四級(jí)作文的話題是關(guān)于人們對(duì)于春節(jié)晚會(huì)的不同看法，屬于社會(huì)生活類話題，一反常態(tài)，沒(méi)有再次考查校園類話題。但是對(duì)于當(dāng)代大學(xué)生來(lái)說(shuō)，與大學(xué)生有關(guān)的社會(huì)話題也是需要關(guān)注的，這也說(shuō)明考試方向的變化：校園類話題與社會(huì)熱點(diǎn)話題同等重要,這一點(diǎn)對(duì)于未來(lái)考四級(jí)的學(xué)生的作文備考的方向有一定的指導(dǎo)意義。
