12月英語(yǔ)四級(jí)作文改革趨勢(shì)解析
從2023年6月英語(yǔ)四級(jí)考試開(kāi)始，作文題型的命題特點(diǎn)向考研作文出題方式靠攏。這預(yù)示著國(guó)家希望更多的準(zhǔn)研究生英語(yǔ)方面的能力能達(dá)到四級(jí)水平，使四級(jí)考試和考研考試有個(gè)流暢的過(guò)度和銜接，充分將考研寫作與四級(jí)寫作結(jié)合，不同之處在于四級(jí)寫作字?jǐn)?shù)少，難度上低于考研寫作。
例如：
2023年6月四級(jí)考試作文漫畫簡(jiǎn)述：一個(gè)老師在黑板上教數(shù)學(xué)乘法口訣，如：2X2=4 2x3=6 學(xué)生在聽(tīng)課，其中一個(gè)學(xué)生說(shuō)：no offense, by the time in the job market, it is out of dated. 以此作文。首先簡(jiǎn)要描述，然后就the importance of learning basic skill 寫一篇more than 120 words but not more than 180 words. 圖畫反映的主題：大學(xué)生在校從商，創(chuàng)業(yè)，好不好?是學(xué)業(yè)重要，還是社會(huì)經(jīng)歷重要?
范文：
Nowadays, college students going in for business become more and more popular in campus, even many college students think that is very fashionable. As to this trend, different people have different views.
For me, every coin has two sides, thus college students going in for business has advantages as well as disadvantages, but advantages outweigh the disadvantages. As a college student, I think taking part in business when we still in college has following advantages. Firstly, doing business can develop our communication and management abilities. From purchase to sell, students must communicate with many different people, such as wholesalers and customers, so we can learn many communication skills from this process. Students also have to make some market researches to decide what we will go in for; we should find out wholesalers who can cooperate stably with us; how we set price; how we promote and so on. See, students communication and management skills can be developed from above things.
四級(jí)作文評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：
①本題所占卷面總分值15%。
②閱卷標(biāo)準(zhǔn)分為五等：
以2為首項(xiàng)，公差為3的等差數(shù)列。
公式為An=A1+3
2分，5分，8分，11分，和14分。
攻略：就一句話，在文章中，最關(guān)鍵的地方要埋伏著亮點(diǎn)，切忌犯愚蠢的錯(cuò)誤。
愚蠢的錯(cuò)誤包括：
時(shí)態(tài)，名詞單復(fù)數(shù)，主謂不一致
關(guān)鍵的地方包括：開(kāi)頭，結(jié)尾和段落首句。
如何才能的高分呢?
包含所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn);
使用豐富的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯;
語(yǔ)言自然流暢，語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤極少;
有效地采用了多種銜接手法，文字連貫，層次清晰;
格式和語(yǔ)域恰當(dāng)貼切。
對(duì)目標(biāo)讀者完全產(chǎn)生了預(yù)期的效果。
打動(dòng)閱卷人靠什么?
1. 文章脈絡(luò)清晰
1.1 觀點(diǎn)鮮明的開(kāi)頭
1.2 緊扣主題的結(jié)尾
1.3 由主題句引導(dǎo)的銜接自然的中間段落
2. 段落銜接暢順
2.1 重復(fù)詞：概括;直接;齊頭
檢驗(yàn)金子的是烈火，檢驗(yàn)女人的是金子，檢驗(yàn)?zāi)腥说氖桥恕?/p>
The proof of gold is fire. The proof of woman is gold. The proof of man is a woman。
南北戰(zhàn)爭(zhēng)前，美國(guó)稱邦聯(lián)南北戰(zhàn)爭(zhēng)后，美國(guó)稱聯(lián)邦。
Before the civil war, the United States are; After the civil war, the United States is。
2.2 序數(shù)詞
First of all,
To begin/ start with,
In the first place,
Furthermore,
Moreover,
What is more,
Finally,
Eventually,
Last but not least,
2.3關(guān)聯(lián)詞：遞進(jìn);轉(zhuǎn)折;因果
What is more,
in addition,
but,
because
3. 使用較高級(jí)的詞匯和語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)
3.1 愛(ài)心是情感的力量，不論我們周圍的世界多么黑暗，愛(ài)心都能支撐我們。
Love is emotional strength, which can support us no matter how dark the world around us becomes。
3.2 對(duì)于世界而講，你也許只是一個(gè)人;但對(duì)于我而言，你是我的整個(gè)世界。
To the world, you may be one person. But to me, you may be the whole world。
4. 書寫優(yōu)雅美觀
獎(jiǎng)勵(lì)分+基準(zhǔn)分
獎(jiǎng)勵(lì)分給分原則
4.1. 正確正規(guī)可讀
4.2. 非正規(guī)標(biāo)記不能寫
4.3. 避免縮寫
最后，祝同學(xué)們能在2023年12月英語(yǔ)四級(jí)考試中取得好成績(jī)!
從2023年6月英語(yǔ)四級(jí)考試開(kāi)始，作文題型的命題特點(diǎn)向考研作文出題方式靠攏。這預(yù)示著國(guó)家希望更多的準(zhǔn)研究生英語(yǔ)方面的能力能達(dá)到四級(jí)水平，使四級(jí)考試和考研考試有個(gè)流暢的過(guò)度和銜接，充分將考研寫作與四級(jí)寫作結(jié)合，不同之處在于四級(jí)寫作字?jǐn)?shù)少，難度上低于考研寫作。
例如：
2023年6月四級(jí)考試作文漫畫簡(jiǎn)述：一個(gè)老師在黑板上教數(shù)學(xué)乘法口訣，如：2X2=4 2x3=6 學(xué)生在聽(tīng)課，其中一個(gè)學(xué)生說(shuō)：no offense, by the time in the job market, it is out of dated. 以此作文。首先簡(jiǎn)要描述，然后就the importance of learning basic skill 寫一篇more than 120 words but not more than 180 words. 圖畫反映的主題：大學(xué)生在校從商，創(chuàng)業(yè)，好不好?是學(xué)業(yè)重要，還是社會(huì)經(jīng)歷重要?
范文：
Nowadays, college students going in for business become more and more popular in campus, even many college students think that is very fashionable. As to this trend, different people have different views.
For me, every coin has two sides, thus college students going in for business has advantages as well as disadvantages, but advantages outweigh the disadvantages. As a college student, I think taking part in business when we still in college has following advantages. Firstly, doing business can develop our communication and management abilities. From purchase to sell, students must communicate with many different people, such as wholesalers and customers, so we can learn many communication skills from this process. Students also have to make some market researches to decide what we will go in for; we should find out wholesalers who can cooperate stably with us; how we set price; how we promote and so on. See, students communication and management skills can be developed from above things.
四級(jí)作文評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：
①本題所占卷面總分值15%。
②閱卷標(biāo)準(zhǔn)分為五等：
以2為首項(xiàng)，公差為3的等差數(shù)列。
公式為An=A1+3
2分，5分，8分，11分，和14分。
攻略：就一句話，在文章中，最關(guān)鍵的地方要埋伏著亮點(diǎn)，切忌犯愚蠢的錯(cuò)誤。
愚蠢的錯(cuò)誤包括：
時(shí)態(tài)，名詞單復(fù)數(shù)，主謂不一致
關(guān)鍵的地方包括：開(kāi)頭，結(jié)尾和段落首句。
如何才能的高分呢?
包含所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn);
使用豐富的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯;
語(yǔ)言自然流暢，語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤極少;
有效地采用了多種銜接手法，文字連貫，層次清晰;
格式和語(yǔ)域恰當(dāng)貼切。
對(duì)目標(biāo)讀者完全產(chǎn)生了預(yù)期的效果。
打動(dòng)閱卷人靠什么?
1. 文章脈絡(luò)清晰
1.1 觀點(diǎn)鮮明的開(kāi)頭
1.2 緊扣主題的結(jié)尾
1.3 由主題句引導(dǎo)的銜接自然的中間段落
2. 段落銜接暢順
2.1 重復(fù)詞：概括;直接;齊頭
檢驗(yàn)金子的是烈火，檢驗(yàn)女人的是金子，檢驗(yàn)?zāi)腥说氖桥恕?/p>
The proof of gold is fire. The proof of woman is gold. The proof of man is a woman。
南北戰(zhàn)爭(zhēng)前，美國(guó)稱邦聯(lián)南北戰(zhàn)爭(zhēng)后，美國(guó)稱聯(lián)邦。
Before the civil war, the United States are; After the civil war, the United States is。
2.2 序數(shù)詞
First of all,
To begin/ start with,
In the first place,
Furthermore,
Moreover,
What is more,
Finally,
Eventually,
Last but not least,
2.3關(guān)聯(lián)詞：遞進(jìn);轉(zhuǎn)折;因果
What is more,
in addition,
but,
because
3. 使用較高級(jí)的詞匯和語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)
3.1 愛(ài)心是情感的力量，不論我們周圍的世界多么黑暗，愛(ài)心都能支撐我們。
Love is emotional strength, which can support us no matter how dark the world around us becomes。
3.2 對(duì)于世界而講，你也許只是一個(gè)人;但對(duì)于我而言，你是我的整個(gè)世界。
To the world, you may be one person. But to me, you may be the whole world。
4. 書寫優(yōu)雅美觀
獎(jiǎng)勵(lì)分+基準(zhǔn)分
獎(jiǎng)勵(lì)分給分原則
4.1. 正確正規(guī)可讀
4.2. 非正規(guī)標(biāo)記不能寫
4.3. 避免縮寫
最后，祝同學(xué)們能在2023年12月英語(yǔ)四級(jí)考試中取得好成績(jī)!
