四級考試寫作提高資料匯總28
103. Most important of all， apart from their hometown and parents， students couldnt catch sight of any familiar face and have to suffer from homelessness， which can cause certain serious mental disease.
更重要的是，離開了家鄉和父母，看不到任何熟悉的面孔，他們不得不忍受思家之苦，這可能會導致嚴重的精神疾病。
104. In the first place， school authorities should provide far more services to help freshmen to get used to the new life as soon as possible.
首先，學校應提供更多的服務，幫助新生盡快適應新的生活。
105. The senior and junior students could share their own experience about how to overcome the difficulty they have ever met， how to adjust to the new environment with the new students.
高年級學生可以與新生一起分享他們的經歷：如何克服遇到的困難，如何適應新的環境。
106. At the same time， young people should be encouraged to communicate with their peers and develop their interpersonal skills， which may help them greatly to reduce dependence on their parents and are essential in the maintenance of healthy mental condition.
同時，應該鼓勵年輕人和他們的同齡人交往，發展他們的交際能力，這將幫助他們極大地減少對父母的倚賴并且保持健康的精神狀態。
107. In conclusion， we must lay emphasis on this problem and make our maximum contribution to help them spend their first day on campus smoothly.
總之，我們應重視這個問題，盡最大努力幫助他們平穩度過他們最初的校園生活。
108. There is a general discussion over fashion in recent years. One of the questions under debate is whether a person should choose comfortable clothes， which he or she likes， regardless of fashion
近些年，關于時尚存在著廣泛的爭論。其中一個問題就是一個人是否應選擇他喜歡的舒適的衣服，而不管是否時尚。
109. This issue is becoming a matter of concern for more and more people， especially for parents and experts in education.
這一問題已被越來越多的人所關注，尤其是父母和教育專家
103. Most important of all， apart from their hometown and parents， students couldnt catch sight of any familiar face and have to suffer from homelessness， which can cause certain serious mental disease.
更重要的是，離開了家鄉和父母，看不到任何熟悉的面孔，他們不得不忍受思家之苦，這可能會導致嚴重的精神疾病。
104. In the first place， school authorities should provide far more services to help freshmen to get used to the new life as soon as possible.
首先，學校應提供更多的服務，幫助新生盡快適應新的生活。
105. The senior and junior students could share their own experience about how to overcome the difficulty they have ever met， how to adjust to the new environment with the new students.
高年級學生可以與新生一起分享他們的經歷：如何克服遇到的困難，如何適應新的環境。
106. At the same time， young people should be encouraged to communicate with their peers and develop their interpersonal skills， which may help them greatly to reduce dependence on their parents and are essential in the maintenance of healthy mental condition.
同時，應該鼓勵年輕人和他們的同齡人交往，發展他們的交際能力，這將幫助他們極大地減少對父母的倚賴并且保持健康的精神狀態。
107. In conclusion， we must lay emphasis on this problem and make our maximum contribution to help them spend their first day on campus smoothly.
總之，我們應重視這個問題，盡最大努力幫助他們平穩度過他們最初的校園生活。
108. There is a general discussion over fashion in recent years. One of the questions under debate is whether a person should choose comfortable clothes， which he or she likes， regardless of fashion
近些年，關于時尚存在著廣泛的爭論。其中一個問題就是一個人是否應選擇他喜歡的舒適的衣服，而不管是否時尚。
109. This issue is becoming a matter of concern for more and more people， especially for parents and experts in education.
這一問題已被越來越多的人所關注，尤其是父母和教育專家
