沖刺六級寫作高分常見錯誤5

　　In the past the price of meat was so high that most families could not afford it.

　　2) Crowded traffic in some large cities is a big problem for city dwellers.

　　Heavy traffic in some large cities is a big problem for city dwellers.

　　十一、破句

　　1) Nowadays, if you want to find a job. Then you must pass the job interview.

　　Nowadays, if you want to find a job, you must pass the job interview.

　　2) First you should show good manners. Because the first impression you leave on others is important.

　　First you should show good manners, because the first impression you leave on others is important.

　　1. 最常見錯誤：從句連接詞缺失，最主要的是THERE BE句型：

　　There is a saying goes ... [應為There is a saying which goes ...]

　　There are many people think that... [應為There are many people who think that...或者直接說Many people think that...]

　　Its the major thing affects peoples friendship. [少了一個that]

　　When we have difficulty, someone helps you right away is the real friend. [少了一個who]

　　2. NO MATTER / WHETHER錯誤，這是英語專業學生最容易犯的另一類錯誤：

　　Friendship is important for no matter rich people or poor people. [宜改為Friendship is possible, whether for rich people or for poor people. no matter后面必須接一個小句(主語、謂語完整)]

　　3. C語類重復。所謂C語類是個句法用語，用于引導一個完整的小句，起標志作用，如that/whether等等：

　　People are not sure that whether... [that一詞多余]

　　In the past the price of meat was so high that most families could not afford it.

　　2) Crowded traffic in some large cities is a big problem for city dwellers.

　　Heavy traffic in some large cities is a big problem for city dwellers.

　　十一、破句

　　1) Nowadays, if you want to find a job. Then you must pass the job interview.

　　Nowadays, if you want to find a job, you must pass the job interview.

　　2) First you should show good manners. Because the first impression you leave on others is important.

　　First you should show good manners, because the first impression you leave on others is important.

　　1. 最常見錯誤：從句連接詞缺失，最主要的是THERE BE句型：

　　There is a saying goes ... [應為There is a saying which goes ...]

　　There are many people think that... [應為There are many people who think that...或者直接說Many people think that...]

　　Its the major thing affects peoples friendship. [少了一個that]

　　When we have difficulty, someone helps you right away is the real friend. [少了一個who]

　　2. NO MATTER / WHETHER錯誤，這是英語專業學生最容易犯的另一類錯誤：

　　Friendship is important for no matter rich people or poor people. [宜改為Friendship is possible, whether for rich people or for poor people. no matter后面必須接一個小句(主語、謂語完整)]

　　3. C語類重復。所謂C語類是個句法用語，用于引導一個完整的小句，起標志作用，如that/whether等等：

　　People are not sure that whether... [that一詞多余]