考研英語(yǔ)小作文批改求職信0-4分例文2

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　　Dear sir or madam,

　　I am writing this letter to apply for a position of secretary.

　　I am a student of Beijing University. I will graduate from Business English major in June 2024.Because of my major, I have been studying English all the time. Now I could communication with foreigner fluently. Also I was past the test for English Majors-Brand eight. Moreover, I had past national computer test brand three before I enter university. I can skilled operate the majority of office software.

　　Please give me a(改為an) interview. Connect me with number 123456.I am looking forward to your reply.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　考研英語(yǔ)作文批改點(diǎn)評(píng)如下：

　　Dear sir or madam,

　　I am writting(拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤，改為writing) this letter(刪除) to apply for a position of(改為as) secretary.

　　I am a student of Beijing University. I will graduate from Business English major in June 2024.Because of my major, I have been studying English all the time. Now I could comunication(改為communicate)with foreigner fluently. Also I was past(改為passed) the test for English Majors-Brand eight. Moreover, I had past national computer test brand three before I enter university. I can skilled operate the majority of office software.

　　Please give me a(改為an) interview. Connect me with number 123456.I am looking forward to your reply.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　2分

　　同學(xué)你好，你的英語(yǔ)基礎(chǔ)比較薄弱，還是建議你多背模版，另外，你的應(yīng)聘職位最好能與你的專業(yè)和工作經(jīng)歷相關(guān)。

　　考研英語(yǔ)待批改作文：

　　0-4分

　　第二篇

　　Dear sir or madam,

　　I am writing this letter to apply for a position of secretary.

　　I am a student of Beijing University. I will graduate from Business English major in June 2024.Because of my major, I have been studying English all the time. Now I could communication with foreigner fluently. Also I was past the test for English Majors-Brand eight. Moreover, I had past national computer test brand three before I enter university. I can skilled operate the majority of office software.

　　Please give me a(改為an) interview. Connect me with number 123456.I am looking forward to your reply.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　考研英語(yǔ)作文批改點(diǎn)評(píng)如下：

　　Dear sir or madam,

　　I am writting(拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤，改為writing) this letter(刪除) to apply for a position of(改為as) secretary.

　　I am a student of Beijing University. I will graduate from Business English major in June 2024.Because of my major, I have been studying English all the time. Now I could comunication(改為communicate)with foreigner fluently. Also I was past(改為passed) the test for English Majors-Brand eight. Moreover, I had past national computer test brand three before I enter university. I can skilled operate the majority of office software.

　　Please give me a(改為an) interview. Connect me with number 123456.I am looking forward to your reply.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　2分

　　同學(xué)你好，你的英語(yǔ)基礎(chǔ)比較薄弱，還是建議你多背模版，另外，你的應(yīng)聘職位最好能與你的專業(yè)和工作經(jīng)歷相關(guān)。