考研英語小作文批改邀請信5-7分例文2
考研英語待批改作文：
5-7分
第二篇
Dear Miss Yuan,
There will be a celebrity party for the new year in the activity room on the next Saturday. We would be honored to have you there with us.
The occasion will start at 6 oclock in the evening. This will be followed by a serious of wonderful performances played by our classmates. At around 8 oclock, we project some interaction activities to animate the atmosphere so as to promote the relationships of classmates. Whats more, we prepared some gifts to be presented to the winners.
I really hope you can make it. RSVP before the next Wednesday.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
考研英語作文批改點評如下：
Dear Miss Yuan,
There will be a celebrity(改為celebration) party for the new year in the activity room on the next Saturday. We would be honored to have you there with us.
The occasion will start at 6 oclock in the evening. This will be followed by a serious of wonderful performances played by our classmates. At around 8 oclock, we project some interaction activities to animate the atmosphere so as to promote the relationships of classmates. Whats more, we prepared some gifts to be presented to the winners.
I really hope you can make it. RSVP before the next Wednesday.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
7分
同學你好，寫作文的時候再細心一些，注意單詞的拼寫。背單詞時要把詞義背牢。
考研英語待批改作文：
5-7分
第二篇
Dear Miss Yuan,
There will be a celebrity party for the new year in the activity room on the next Saturday. We would be honored to have you there with us.
The occasion will start at 6 oclock in the evening. This will be followed by a serious of wonderful performances played by our classmates. At around 8 oclock, we project some interaction activities to animate the atmosphere so as to promote the relationships of classmates. Whats more, we prepared some gifts to be presented to the winners.
I really hope you can make it. RSVP before the next Wednesday.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
考研英語作文批改點評如下：
Dear Miss Yuan,
There will be a celebrity(改為celebration) party for the new year in the activity room on the next Saturday. We would be honored to have you there with us.
The occasion will start at 6 oclock in the evening. This will be followed by a serious of wonderful performances played by our classmates. At around 8 oclock, we project some interaction activities to animate the atmosphere so as to promote the relationships of classmates. Whats more, we prepared some gifts to be presented to the winners.
I really hope you can make it. RSVP before the next Wednesday.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
7分
同學你好，寫作文的時候再細心一些，注意單詞的拼寫。背單詞時要把詞義背牢。
