考研英語(yǔ)作文批改范例5

　　Dear Sir（Sir or Madam）:　　I write this letter to ask whether you could do me a favour to find a candidate ,as I am really concerned with the Project Hope.　　The Project Hope ,from my own perspective ,is abviously （obviously）meaningful. Through the project, more and more children discontinuing their studies can be helped .The candidate I want to aid should be a diligent girl desiring for the study opportunity. The credit of her study may not be the best one,however,her attitude of life ,of study is critical. I will aid her with half of my salary until she could make her living.In addition,I am greatly convinced that through further communication between us, I also could give her some advice in all aspect.　　Thank you very much and look forward to your letter（I am looking forward to your letter）.　　Yours sincerely,　　Li Ming