作文專項(xiàng)訓(xùn)練:建議信
建議信寫(xiě)作三步走:
自我介紹,說(shuō)明寫(xiě)信目的提出建議以及改進(jìn)措施,忠告表達(dá)希望采納建議,或者期盼回復(fù)。
注意:
語(yǔ)言要委婉、禮貌,顧及對(duì)方感受。在提出缺點(diǎn)之前,最好先肯定其優(yōu)點(diǎn)。
范文解析:
Directions: Your friend Lucy asked you for some information about successful interview.
Write a letter of no less than 100 words to give her some advice. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use Wang Hua instead. Do not write the address.
Dear Lucy,
You asked me for some advice on how to prepare for a successful interview and I will try to offer some useful suggestions.
First of all, find out all the information you can about the company before you go to the interview. Secondly, practice your answers to common questions and make a list of questions to ask, too. It will make you feel more confident and relaxed. Thirdly, try to make the best impression: dress appropriately, sell your strengths, arrive early, be enthusiastic, shake hands firmly, be an active listener, sit up straight and maintain eye contact. Finally, do not forget to say thank you after the interview.
I hope you will find these suggestions helpful. Good Luck!
Sincerely yours,
Wang Hua
常用句式:
1、 You have asked me for some advice on/with regard toand I will try to give some useful suggestions.
您問(wèn)及我有關(guān)的事情,我會(huì)盡量給出一些有用的建議。
2、As a staff member of Sales Department/regular customer/student of Management School, I am writing to you to present my suggestions on
作為銷售部的職員/老主顧/管理學(xué)院的學(xué)生,我寫(xiě)信向您建議
3、I would like to suggest that
我建議
4、If I were you, I would
如果我是您,我會(huì)
5、I think it would be more beneficial if you could
我認(rèn)為您可以
6、I think it would be more beneficial if you could
我想如果您能,可能會(huì)更好。
7、I believe you will take seriously my advice into account.
我想您會(huì)認(rèn)真考慮我的建議的。
8、I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions/recommendations practical/useful/helpful.
我希望這些建議/意見(jiàn)對(duì)您有用。
9、I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard.
如果這方面有所改善我會(huì)非常開(kāi)心的。
10、 I hope that my suggestions are helpful for your decision-making.
希望我的建議能對(duì)您的決定有所幫助。
建議信寫(xiě)作三步走:
自我介紹,說(shuō)明寫(xiě)信目的提出建議以及改進(jìn)措施,忠告表達(dá)希望采納建議,或者期盼回復(fù)。
注意:
語(yǔ)言要委婉、禮貌,顧及對(duì)方感受。在提出缺點(diǎn)之前,最好先肯定其優(yōu)點(diǎn)。
范文解析:
Directions: Your friend Lucy asked you for some information about successful interview.
Write a letter of no less than 100 words to give her some advice. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use Wang Hua instead. Do not write the address.
Dear Lucy,
You asked me for some advice on how to prepare for a successful interview and I will try to offer some useful suggestions.
First of all, find out all the information you can about the company before you go to the interview. Secondly, practice your answers to common questions and make a list of questions to ask, too. It will make you feel more confident and relaxed. Thirdly, try to make the best impression: dress appropriately, sell your strengths, arrive early, be enthusiastic, shake hands firmly, be an active listener, sit up straight and maintain eye contact. Finally, do not forget to say thank you after the interview.
I hope you will find these suggestions helpful. Good Luck!
Sincerely yours,
Wang Hua
常用句式:
1、 You have asked me for some advice on/with regard toand I will try to give some useful suggestions.
您問(wèn)及我有關(guān)的事情,我會(huì)盡量給出一些有用的建議。
2、As a staff member of Sales Department/regular customer/student of Management School, I am writing to you to present my suggestions on
作為銷售部的職員/老主顧/管理學(xué)院的學(xué)生,我寫(xiě)信向您建議
3、I would like to suggest that
我建議
4、If I were you, I would
如果我是您,我會(huì)
5、I think it would be more beneficial if you could
我認(rèn)為您可以
6、I think it would be more beneficial if you could
我想如果您能,可能會(huì)更好。
7、I believe you will take seriously my advice into account.
我想您會(huì)認(rèn)真考慮我的建議的。
8、I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions/recommendations practical/useful/helpful.
我希望這些建議/意見(jiàn)對(duì)您有用。
9、I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard.
如果這方面有所改善我會(huì)非常開(kāi)心的。
10、 I hope that my suggestions are helpful for your decision-making.
希望我的建議能對(duì)您的決定有所幫助。