考研英語復習資料考研英語作文范文的批改15

　　考研英語待批改作文：

　　Dear Sir or Madam:

　　Your sincerely

　　Li Ming

　　考研英語作文批改點評如下：

　　Dear Sir or Madam: I have got the message from internet(i大寫)which says your company needs a biologist. I wrote This(t小寫)letter to ask would I have the opportunity to have this job. I have graduated from GZ(不建議使用縮寫)University for two years, and I have got Yales P.D(不建議使用縮寫) one month ago. All the above make me have the knowledge to cope this job. I worked as an experiment assistant for two years,(加連詞and) therefore I have the ability of use biological apparatus. If I am possible to get this job please contact me, my email address is XXX@yahoo.com. Thank you for your time. Your(Yours)sincerely(加逗號) Li Ming 點評：6-7分寫的還可以的，注意一下大小寫和信件的格式?？荚嚭秃啔v中為了表示誠意，不建議使用縮寫。