考研英語(yǔ)復(fù)習(xí)資料考研英語(yǔ)作文范文的批改15

　　考研英語(yǔ)待批改作文：

　　Dear Sir or Madam:

　　Your sincerely

　　Li Ming

　　考研英語(yǔ)作文批改點(diǎn)評(píng)如下：

　　Dear Sir or Madam: I have got the message from internet(i大寫(xiě))which says your company needs a biologist. I wrote This(t小寫(xiě))letter to ask would I have the opportunity to have this job. I have graduated from GZ(不建議使用縮寫(xiě))University for two years, and I have got Yales P.D(不建議使用縮寫(xiě)) one month ago. All the above make me have the knowledge to cope this job. I worked as an experiment assistant for two years,(加連詞and) therefore I have the ability of use biological apparatus. If I am possible to get this job please contact me, my email address is XXX@yahoo.com. Thank you for your time. Your(Yours)sincerely(加逗號(hào)) Li Ming 點(diǎn)評(píng)：6-7分寫(xiě)的還可以的，注意一下大小寫(xiě)和信件的格式?？荚嚭秃?jiǎn)歷中為了表示誠(chéng)意，不建議使用縮寫(xiě)。