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　　Your advertisement for a staff member in May 10,China daily interested me，because the position your provide(應該用過去時，因為廣告已經刊登) there exactly like the kind of job I am seeking for.

　　Accoring(拼寫錯誤providing)to your advertisement，you need a staff who is highly educated and has some related woking(拼寫錯誤) experience. I think I meet the requirements above. I graduated form(拼寫錯誤) ShangHai(h不用大寫) University with a(m的發音是以元音開頭，所以要用an) M.S.degree(最好不要用縮寫). And I had worked in a relevent(拼寫錯誤，relevant)company before. (這里可以再補充以下你有經驗)Whats more, I had passed , and I can communicate with the native speaker(建議用復數) freely in English. I am a very friendly person who can quickly built friendship with others of all ages.