考研英語(yǔ)復(fù)習(xí)資料考研英語(yǔ)作文范文的批改63
考研英語(yǔ)待批改作文：
Dear Sir：
I am writing to apply for the manager position of the human resources department in your company. I learned your advertisement from a friend of mine. I couldnt help but saying that I am pretty qualified for the position.
I graduated form Beijing University in 2004 as an English-majored undergraduate. After graduation, I have been working for a tourist agency for almost 2 years, during which I have accumulated a lot of experience in dealing with different kinds of people, especially foreigners. Its the two-year working experience that makes me believe I have the ability and confidence to fulfill the duty required by the manager position.
I would be grateful if you could grante me an interview. I am really looking forward for your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
考研英語(yǔ)作文批改點(diǎn)評(píng)如下：
Dear Sir(因?yàn)椴恢朗悄惺窟€是女士，所以用Sir or Madam)：(英語(yǔ)中用逗號(hào))
I am writing to apply for the manager position of the human resources department in your company. I learned your advertisement from a friend of mine. I couldnt help but saying that I am pretty qualified for the position.
I graduated form(from) Beijing University in 2004 as an English-majored undergraduate. After graduation, I have been working for a tourist agency for almost 2 years, during which I have accumulated a lot of experience in dealing with different kinds of people, especially(加介詞with) foreigners. Its the two-year working experience that makes me believe I have the ability and confidence to fulfill the duty required by the manager position.
I would be grateful if you could grante(拼寫錯(cuò)誤) me an interview. I am really looking forward for your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming 點(diǎn)評(píng)：5-6分第二段寫的不是很好，最好從你的學(xué)歷、經(jīng)歷和脾氣秉性方面寫，不要只寫一個(gè)方面。考試中的作文內(nèi)容是可以編造的，因?yàn)榭疾斓氖悄銘?yīng)用某種問題的能力。
考研英語(yǔ)待批改作文：
Dear Sir：
I am writing to apply for the manager position of the human resources department in your company. I learned your advertisement from a friend of mine. I couldnt help but saying that I am pretty qualified for the position.
I graduated form Beijing University in 2004 as an English-majored undergraduate. After graduation, I have been working for a tourist agency for almost 2 years, during which I have accumulated a lot of experience in dealing with different kinds of people, especially foreigners. Its the two-year working experience that makes me believe I have the ability and confidence to fulfill the duty required by the manager position.
I would be grateful if you could grante me an interview. I am really looking forward for your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
考研英語(yǔ)作文批改點(diǎn)評(píng)如下：
Dear Sir(因?yàn)椴恢朗悄惺窟€是女士，所以用Sir or Madam)：(英語(yǔ)中用逗號(hào))
I am writing to apply for the manager position of the human resources department in your company. I learned your advertisement from a friend of mine. I couldnt help but saying that I am pretty qualified for the position.
I graduated form(from) Beijing University in 2004 as an English-majored undergraduate. After graduation, I have been working for a tourist agency for almost 2 years, during which I have accumulated a lot of experience in dealing with different kinds of people, especially(加介詞with) foreigners. Its the two-year working experience that makes me believe I have the ability and confidence to fulfill the duty required by the manager position.
I would be grateful if you could grante(拼寫錯(cuò)誤) me an interview. I am really looking forward for your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming 點(diǎn)評(píng)：5-6分第二段寫的不是很好，最好從你的學(xué)歷、經(jīng)歷和脾氣秉性方面寫，不要只寫一個(gè)方面。考試中的作文內(nèi)容是可以編造的，因?yàn)榭疾斓氖悄銘?yīng)用某種問題的能力。
