英語六級范文：如何促進畢業生的心理健康

作文題目：

How to improve the graduates’ mental health

Directions：For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic How to improve the graduates’ mental health. Your essay should start with a brief description of the picture. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

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Graduates’ mental health has been playing an increasingly important role in the daily life. Actually, it is widely accepted that it has gained growing popularity among persons in all walks of life. However, in the season of graduation, it’s reported some cases of self-killing or mental disorder still happened.

Obviously, graduates face various kinds of pressure. When graduates confront with great pressure, the best method is to communicate with friends or family members to unburden the feelings. And the universities and colleges should also pay more attention to graduates’ mental health and take effective action such as providing psychological service for students helping them to deal with mental problems. From the perspective of parents, they should care more about their kids’ mental health, too. Though the parents cannot write the dissertation for the graduates, nor can they find a job, they can communicate with their kids and help them to figure out the reasons for the difficulties.

From the factors mentioned above, we may safely draw the conclusion that we can free ourselves from mental illness by taking certain precautions. For example, if you have pains or puzzles in mind, finding a friend to express is a good way to release pressure. Certainly, there is no doubt that further attention will be paid to this issue.