2024高考英語書面表達(dá)一輪訓(xùn)練(3)附參考范文
2024高考英語書面表達(dá)一輪訓(xùn)練(3)附參考范文
??? 記敘文是以敘述人物的經(jīng)歷或事物的發(fā)展變化過程為主的一種文體,是寫作訓(xùn)練中最普遍、最基本的一種文體。記敘文要求學(xué)生根據(jù)所給情景,組織語言材料,編寫成文。一般說來記敘文有時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物、事件、原因和結(jié)果六要素,寫作時(shí)要表達(dá)清楚。記人時(shí),要注意介紹人物的身世、經(jīng)歷和事跡等;敘事時(shí)要描寫事情發(fā)生和發(fā)展的過程及前因后果等。 【寫作點(diǎn)撥】 ??? 敘事類記敘文以敘述事件為主,突出事件發(fā)生、發(fā)展和解決的過程。在寫這類記敘文時(shí)要做到: ??? 1. 重組材料,確定要點(diǎn)。敘事類記敘文寫作前要進(jìn)行立意、構(gòu)思和選材等一系列過程,高考中的書面表達(dá)一般為控制性寫作,通常會(huì)提供短文的主題和寫作內(nèi)容,考生要對(duì)提供的材料進(jìn)行再加工,確定寫作的順序、要點(diǎn)和重點(diǎn),擬定使用的句型和詞組。 ??? 2. 結(jié)構(gòu)完整、前后呼應(yīng)。寫記敘文必須有頭有尾,一般來說,記敘時(shí)要把與一件事有關(guān)的六要素都交代清楚。文章的主題和內(nèi)容要一致,文章的結(jié)尾與開頭要呼應(yīng)。 ??? 3. 人稱統(tǒng)一、線索明確。記敘文可用“你、我、他”三種人稱,但如果題目要求你使用某種人稱,則必須遵循要求;敘事類記敘文一般按照事件發(fā)展的前后順序進(jìn)行敘述。 【常見問題】 ??? 1. 要點(diǎn)不全。要點(diǎn)是否齊全通常決定文章的檔次。書面表達(dá)要上檔次,要點(diǎn)齊全是關(guān)鍵。要點(diǎn)提示類書面表達(dá)一般不會(huì)出現(xiàn)這樣的問題,看圖作文則常會(huì)由于學(xué)生觀察不細(xì)心等原因遺漏要點(diǎn)。 ??? 2. 線索不清。有些短文條理混亂,主要原因是沒有確定好寫作線索。敘事類文章一般按時(shí)間順序來寫。 ??? 3. 時(shí)態(tài)不明。敘事時(shí)時(shí)態(tài)混亂是學(xué)生常犯的錯(cuò)誤之一。敘事類記敘文所記的一般是過去發(fā)生的事,原則上用過去時(shí),有時(shí)也用現(xiàn)在時(shí)。 ??? 4. 主次不分。有些同學(xué)寫作時(shí)平均用力,面面俱到,寫出來的東西主題不突出,顯得呆板乏味。 【佳作賞析】 ?請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的要點(diǎn)敘述一次看馬戲的經(jīng)歷。 ??? 1. 期中考試后放了三天假,我看了一場(chǎng)馬戲。 ??? 2.?? 表演非常精彩。有小狗表演,獨(dú)輪車表演等。最刺激的節(jié)目是走鋼絲。一個(gè)男演 ????? 員手里拿著一根平衡杠,頭上坐著一個(gè)女孩,肩上的鋼杠上還挑著兩個(gè)女孩。當(dāng)他 ????? 小心翼翼走過鋼絲的時(shí)候,觀眾報(bào)以熱烈的掌聲。
??? 3. 馬戲是一種力與美結(jié)合的藝術(shù)。通過這次表演,我體會(huì)到了中國馬戲藝術(shù)的博大精 ?????? 深。 參考詞匯:馬戲表演circus show?? 刺激的thrilling?? ??? ?鋼絲tightrope?????? 平衡桿balancing pole?? ?鋼桿steel bar
???? Watching a circus show ? I had a three-day holiday after the mid-term examination, so I decided to relax myself by watching a circus show. ? A girl appeared on the stage. She rode a one-wheel bike on a small table with a lot of flowers on it. She didn’t knock down even one flower. Some little dogs also did a good job. The four little dogs did some amusing tricks and one of them could calculate the number! How clever they were! ? The most thrilling program was to see a young man walking on a tightrope. He stood on the very thin rope with a balancing pole on his hands. On his head sat a little girl. Another two girls sat on the ends of a steel bar on his shoulder. The young man took his first step with great care. The rope held. One step! Two, three.... Every viewer held his breath. All the people were anxious about his safety, because the young actor didn’t fasten a safety belt. Any little carelessness could cost his life! At last he succeeded in walking across the 8-meter-long tightrope. ? The performance lasted about two hours. I had a good time at the show. ? The circus is the art of combination of strength and beauty. The Chinese circus is so cool!
??? 小作者敘述了一次看馬戲的經(jīng)歷。文章以時(shí)間為線索,敘述清楚,詳略得當(dāng),層次分明,描寫生動(dòng),過渡自然,顯示了作者相當(dāng)扎實(shí)的語言功底。在文章最后,小作者還談了自己的感想,深化了主題。難能可貴的是小作者使用了較多的高級(jí)表達(dá)方式,使文章增彩不少。如:復(fù)合形容詞(onewheel, 8-meter-long),with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)(with a balancing pole on his hands),倒裝句(On his head sat a little girl),感嘆句(How clever they were!)等。 【鞏固訓(xùn)練】 ?? 假定你在開學(xué)的第一周參加了軍訓(xùn),請(qǐng)按下面的提示用英語敘述你軍訓(xùn)第一天的情況。 ?? 1. 當(dāng)起床鈴響起的時(shí)候,我還在睡夢(mèng)之中。我迅速起床,穿好衣服,匆忙趕往操場(chǎng)。教官要求我們?cè)谖宸昼妰?nèi)完成準(zhǔn)備動(dòng)作。 ?? 2. 教官對(duì)我們要求非常嚴(yán)格。一個(gè)動(dòng)作要反復(fù)操練一直到他滿意為止,但休息時(shí),他和我們一起唱歌、跳舞、講故事。我們相處得非常融洽。 ?? 3. 訓(xùn)練非常艱苦。太陽很毒,我全身都濕透了,但我們還得繼續(xù)訓(xùn)練。其中還有位同學(xué)暈倒了。 ?? 4. 軍訓(xùn)既增強(qiáng)了我們的體質(zhì),也磨練了我們克服困難的意志。 注意: 1. 詞數(shù): 100-150左右 ????? 2. 參考詞匯: 軍訓(xùn) military training 教官 drillmaster ??????? (參考答案) Key1:
?????????????????? The first day of the military training
? Yesterday was the first day of the military training. I was dreaming when the bell for getting up rang. The moment I heard the bell, I rose immediately, dressed quickly and then rushed to the playground. The drillmaster asked us to finish preparations within only five minutes. ? The drillmaster was very strict with us. We had to drill an action again and again until he was satisfied. At break time, he joined us in singing, dancing and telling stories. We were getting along very well.? The sun was so strong that my clothes were all wet. But we still went on drilling. One of my classmates fell to the ground in a faint.? ? The life of the military training is very hard, but I think it is meaningful. Not only does it build up our bodies, it also strengthens our determination to overcome difficulties.
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假設(shè)你將要參加學(xué)校舉辦的英語作文比賽,請(qǐng)你根據(jù)右圖,寫一篇120詞左右的英語作文。內(nèi)容包括:
1.描述圖畫的主要內(nèi)容;
2.分析出現(xiàn)這種現(xiàn)象的原因;
3.談?wù)勎覀儜?yīng)該如何保護(hù)地球,拯救野生動(dòng)物。
參考詞匯:北極熊polar bear;企鵝penguin
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參考范文:
From the picture we can see a polar bear sitting on a small piece of ice with a penguin on its head.It shows that our environment is worsening day by day and some wild animals are in great danger.
In recent years,with the development of science and technology,the Earth is faced with a variety of environmental problems,including global warming.As a result,many animals have lost their natural habitat.
I think it is time that we took effective measures to protect the environment.We should avoid using fossil fuel to reduce green house gas,and we can plant more trees to take in carbon dioxide.
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假如你是新華中學(xué)的一名學(xué)生。你校擬招聘一名外籍教師。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的要求寫一篇招聘啟事。
對(duì)應(yīng)聘者的要求:1.母語是英語,大學(xué)畢業(yè);
2.身體健康,交際能力強(qiáng);
3.有教學(xué)經(jīng)驗(yàn)者優(yōu)先,工資面議。
工作條件:1.學(xué)校交通便利,環(huán)境優(yōu)美;
2.每周工作五天,提供住宿。
有意者請(qǐng)?jiān)诎嗽碌字奥?lián)系李老師。聯(lián)系電話:010-88663528或發(fā)郵件至:Mrli2011@sohu.com。
注意:1.詞數(shù)120左右;
2.參考詞匯:應(yīng)聘者applicant。
English Teacher Wanted
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English Teacher Wanted
Xinhua Middle School plans to invite a foreigner to work as a teacher of English.The applicant should be a native speaker of English and has graduated from university.He or she should be healthy physically and mentally,with great ability to communicate with students.Teaching experience is preferred.He or she has to work 5 days a week.
Xinhua Middle School lies near the center of the city,so the traffic is very convenient.There is an apartment for foreign teachers to live in.
If you are interested,please contact Mr Li at Mrli2011@sohu.com before the end of August,2024.The salary can be discussed during the interview.
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多使用過渡性詞語。這樣使文章更加連貫、更具有邏輯性。
(1)表示增加的過渡詞:also,and,and then,too,in addition,furthermore,moreover,again,on top ofthat,another,first second third等。
(2)表示時(shí)間順序的過渡詞:now,then,before,after,afterwards,earlier,lat er,immediately,soon,next,in afew days,gradually,suddenly,finally等。(3)表示空間順序的過渡詞:near(to),far(from),in frontof,behind,beside,beyond,above,below,tothe right left,around,outside等。
(4)表示比較的過渡詞:in thesameway,justlike,justas等。
(5)表示對(duì)照的過渡詞:but,still,yet,however,on theotherhand,onthecon trary,in spite of,even though等。
(6)表示結(jié) 果 和 原 因 的 過 渡 詞:because,since,so,as a result,therefore,then,thus,otherwise等。
(7)表示目的的過渡詞:forthisreason,forthispurpose,so that等。
(8)表示強(qiáng)調(diào)的過渡詞:in fact,indeed,surely,necessarily,certainly,withoutanydoubt,truly,torepeat,aboveall,mostimportant等。
(9)表示解釋說明的過渡詞:forexample,in fact,in thiscase,foractually等。
(10)表示總結(jié)的過渡詞:finally,atlast,inconclusion,asIhaveshown,inoth erword,in brief,in short,in general,on the whole,ashasbeen stated等。
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作文(***)
每年高三學(xué)生在高考結(jié)束后都會(huì)有一個(gè)近三個(gè)月的假期。對(duì)于如何度過這個(gè)假100詞左右的短文,簡(jiǎn)要陳述學(xué)生的意向,并說明你自己的觀點(diǎn)。
意向
45% 在家充分休息
28% 學(xué)習(xí)英語,為上大學(xué)做準(zhǔn)備
15% 到外地旅游
12% 其他
注意:為使行文連貫,可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。
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One possible version:
Recently a survey has been conducted among the students in Grade Three about what they will do during the 3-month holiday after the College Entrance Exam.Students have different decisions.
About 45%of the surveyed students intend to rest at home.They want to relax
thoroughly and get ready for college life.While 28%of them prefer to attend ErIglish classes for their future use.Meanwhile,15%of them choose to travel outside and the rest l2%say that they’d like to do other things.After all.it's really difficult to get such a long holiday again after tlley enter the college.
Personally,1 will be a little sad if I get away from my dearest parents and relatives,so’d like to stay at home and spend more time witlI my families.. 為紀(jì)念汶川大地震三周年,某英文報(bào)發(fā)起關(guān)于災(zāi)區(qū)新貌的征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下圖片提示,以“Great Changes”為題,用英語寫一篇短文應(yīng)征。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下:
1.某中學(xué)災(zāi)后三年來的變化,如教學(xué)與活動(dòng)場(chǎng)所,以及師生精神面貌等;
2.發(fā)生變化的原因;
3.你的感想。
注意:
1.短文標(biāo)題與開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);
2.可根據(jù)圖片提示適當(dāng)發(fā)揮
3.詞數(shù):120左右
Great Changes
I am deeply impressed by the great changes that have taken place in the school over the past three years.
laboratory buildings, and a library. There is also a newly-built standard playground. In the new environment, teachers and students are living happily and working hard. It is really amazing that the once-mined place has now been turned into a beautiful school, full of life.
Obviously, without the help of the whole society, there would be no new school today. It is love and concern that have brought about the great changes. Many hands make light work. We can work wonders if we unite as a family, caring for each other and helping those in need. Union is strength.
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2024高考英語書面表達(dá)一輪訓(xùn)練(3)附參考范文
??? 記敘文是以敘述人物的經(jīng)歷或事物的發(fā)展變化過程為主的一種文體,是寫作訓(xùn)練中最普遍、最基本的一種文體。記敘文要求學(xué)生根據(jù)所給情景,組織語言材料,編寫成文。一般說來記敘文有時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物、事件、原因和結(jié)果六要素,寫作時(shí)要表達(dá)清楚。記人時(shí),要注意介紹人物的身世、經(jīng)歷和事跡等;敘事時(shí)要描寫事情發(fā)生和發(fā)展的過程及前因后果等。 【寫作點(diǎn)撥】 ??? 敘事類記敘文以敘述事件為主,突出事件發(fā)生、發(fā)展和解決的過程。在寫這類記敘文時(shí)要做到: ??? 1. 重組材料,確定要點(diǎn)。敘事類記敘文寫作前要進(jìn)行立意、構(gòu)思和選材等一系列過程,高考中的書面表達(dá)一般為控制性寫作,通常會(huì)提供短文的主題和寫作內(nèi)容,考生要對(duì)提供的材料進(jìn)行再加工,確定寫作的順序、要點(diǎn)和重點(diǎn),擬定使用的句型和詞組。 ??? 2. 結(jié)構(gòu)完整、前后呼應(yīng)。寫記敘文必須有頭有尾,一般來說,記敘時(shí)要把與一件事有關(guān)的六要素都交代清楚。文章的主題和內(nèi)容要一致,文章的結(jié)尾與開頭要呼應(yīng)。 ??? 3. 人稱統(tǒng)一、線索明確。記敘文可用“你、我、他”三種人稱,但如果題目要求你使用某種人稱,則必須遵循要求;敘事類記敘文一般按照事件發(fā)展的前后順序進(jìn)行敘述。 【常見問題】 ??? 1. 要點(diǎn)不全。要點(diǎn)是否齊全通常決定文章的檔次。書面表達(dá)要上檔次,要點(diǎn)齊全是關(guān)鍵。要點(diǎn)提示類書面表達(dá)一般不會(huì)出現(xiàn)這樣的問題,看圖作文則常會(huì)由于學(xué)生觀察不細(xì)心等原因遺漏要點(diǎn)。 ??? 2. 線索不清。有些短文條理混亂,主要原因是沒有確定好寫作線索。敘事類文章一般按時(shí)間順序來寫。 ??? 3. 時(shí)態(tài)不明。敘事時(shí)時(shí)態(tài)混亂是學(xué)生常犯的錯(cuò)誤之一。敘事類記敘文所記的一般是過去發(fā)生的事,原則上用過去時(shí),有時(shí)也用現(xiàn)在時(shí)。 ??? 4. 主次不分。有些同學(xué)寫作時(shí)平均用力,面面俱到,寫出來的東西主題不突出,顯得呆板乏味。 【佳作賞析】 ?請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的要點(diǎn)敘述一次看馬戲的經(jīng)歷。 ??? 1. 期中考試后放了三天假,我看了一場(chǎng)馬戲。 ??? 2.?? 表演非常精彩。有小狗表演,獨(dú)輪車表演等。最刺激的節(jié)目是走鋼絲。一個(gè)男演 ????? 員手里拿著一根平衡杠,頭上坐著一個(gè)女孩,肩上的鋼杠上還挑著兩個(gè)女孩。當(dāng)他 ????? 小心翼翼走過鋼絲的時(shí)候,觀眾報(bào)以熱烈的掌聲。
??? 3. 馬戲是一種力與美結(jié)合的藝術(shù)。通過這次表演,我體會(huì)到了中國馬戲藝術(shù)的博大精 ?????? 深。 參考詞匯:馬戲表演circus show?? 刺激的thrilling?? ??? ?鋼絲tightrope?????? 平衡桿balancing pole?? ?鋼桿steel bar
???? Watching a circus show ? I had a three-day holiday after the mid-term examination, so I decided to relax myself by watching a circus show. ? A girl appeared on the stage. She rode a one-wheel bike on a small table with a lot of flowers on it. She didn’t knock down even one flower. Some little dogs also did a good job. The four little dogs did some amusing tricks and one of them could calculate the number! How clever they were! ? The most thrilling program was to see a young man walking on a tightrope. He stood on the very thin rope with a balancing pole on his hands. On his head sat a little girl. Another two girls sat on the ends of a steel bar on his shoulder. The young man took his first step with great care. The rope held. One step! Two, three.... Every viewer held his breath. All the people were anxious about his safety, because the young actor didn’t fasten a safety belt. Any little carelessness could cost his life! At last he succeeded in walking across the 8-meter-long tightrope. ? The performance lasted about two hours. I had a good time at the show. ? The circus is the art of combination of strength and beauty. The Chinese circus is so cool!
??? 小作者敘述了一次看馬戲的經(jīng)歷。文章以時(shí)間為線索,敘述清楚,詳略得當(dāng),層次分明,描寫生動(dòng),過渡自然,顯示了作者相當(dāng)扎實(shí)的語言功底。在文章最后,小作者還談了自己的感想,深化了主題。難能可貴的是小作者使用了較多的高級(jí)表達(dá)方式,使文章增彩不少。如:復(fù)合形容詞(onewheel, 8-meter-long),with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)(with a balancing pole on his hands),倒裝句(On his head sat a little girl),感嘆句(How clever they were!)等。 【鞏固訓(xùn)練】 ?? 假定你在開學(xué)的第一周參加了軍訓(xùn),請(qǐng)按下面的提示用英語敘述你軍訓(xùn)第一天的情況。 ?? 1. 當(dāng)起床鈴響起的時(shí)候,我還在睡夢(mèng)之中。我迅速起床,穿好衣服,匆忙趕往操場(chǎng)。教官要求我們?cè)谖宸昼妰?nèi)完成準(zhǔn)備動(dòng)作。 ?? 2. 教官對(duì)我們要求非常嚴(yán)格。一個(gè)動(dòng)作要反復(fù)操練一直到他滿意為止,但休息時(shí),他和我們一起唱歌、跳舞、講故事。我們相處得非常融洽。 ?? 3. 訓(xùn)練非常艱苦。太陽很毒,我全身都濕透了,但我們還得繼續(xù)訓(xùn)練。其中還有位同學(xué)暈倒了。 ?? 4. 軍訓(xùn)既增強(qiáng)了我們的體質(zhì),也磨練了我們克服困難的意志。 注意: 1. 詞數(shù): 100-150左右 ????? 2. 參考詞匯: 軍訓(xùn) military training 教官 drillmaster ??????? (參考答案) Key1:
?????????????????? The first day of the military training
? Yesterday was the first day of the military training. I was dreaming when the bell for getting up rang. The moment I heard the bell, I rose immediately, dressed quickly and then rushed to the playground. The drillmaster asked us to finish preparations within only five minutes. ? The drillmaster was very strict with us. We had to drill an action again and again until he was satisfied. At break time, he joined us in singing, dancing and telling stories. We were getting along very well.? The sun was so strong that my clothes were all wet. But we still went on drilling. One of my classmates fell to the ground in a faint.? ? The life of the military training is very hard, but I think it is meaningful. Not only does it build up our bodies, it also strengthens our determination to overcome difficulties.
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假設(shè)你將要參加學(xué)校舉辦的英語作文比賽,請(qǐng)你根據(jù)右圖,寫一篇120詞左右的英語作文。內(nèi)容包括:
1.描述圖畫的主要內(nèi)容;
2.分析出現(xiàn)這種現(xiàn)象的原因;
3.談?wù)勎覀儜?yīng)該如何保護(hù)地球,拯救野生動(dòng)物。
參考詞匯:北極熊polar bear;企鵝penguin
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From the picture we can see a polar bear sitting on a small piece of ice with a penguin on its head.It shows that our environment is worsening day by day and some wild animals are in great danger.
In recent years,with the development of science and technology,the Earth is faced with a variety of environmental problems,including global warming.As a result,many animals have lost their natural habitat.
I think it is time that we took effective measures to protect the environment.We should avoid using fossil fuel to reduce green house gas,and we can plant more trees to take in carbon dioxide.
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假如你是新華中學(xué)的一名學(xué)生。你校擬招聘一名外籍教師。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的要求寫一篇招聘啟事。
對(duì)應(yīng)聘者的要求:1.母語是英語,大學(xué)畢業(yè);
2.身體健康,交際能力強(qiáng);
3.有教學(xué)經(jīng)驗(yàn)者優(yōu)先,工資面議。
工作條件:1.學(xué)校交通便利,環(huán)境優(yōu)美;
2.每周工作五天,提供住宿。
有意者請(qǐng)?jiān)诎嗽碌字奥?lián)系李老師。聯(lián)系電話:010-88663528或發(fā)郵件至:Mrli2011@sohu.com。
注意:1.詞數(shù)120左右;
2.參考詞匯:應(yīng)聘者applicant。
English Teacher Wanted
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English Teacher Wanted
Xinhua Middle School plans to invite a foreigner to work as a teacher of English.The applicant should be a native speaker of English and has graduated from university.He or she should be healthy physically and mentally,with great ability to communicate with students.Teaching experience is preferred.He or she has to work 5 days a week.
Xinhua Middle School lies near the center of the city,so the traffic is very convenient.There is an apartment for foreign teachers to live in.
If you are interested,please contact Mr Li at Mrli2011@sohu.com before the end of August,2024.The salary can be discussed during the interview.
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多使用過渡性詞語。這樣使文章更加連貫、更具有邏輯性。
(1)表示增加的過渡詞:also,and,and then,too,in addition,furthermore,moreover,again,on top ofthat,another,first second third等。
(2)表示時(shí)間順序的過渡詞:now,then,before,after,afterwards,earlier,lat er,immediately,soon,next,in afew days,gradually,suddenly,finally等。(3)表示空間順序的過渡詞:near(to),far(from),in frontof,behind,beside,beyond,above,below,tothe right left,around,outside等。
(4)表示比較的過渡詞:in thesameway,justlike,justas等。
(5)表示對(duì)照的過渡詞:but,still,yet,however,on theotherhand,onthecon trary,in spite of,even though等。
(6)表示結(jié) 果 和 原 因 的 過 渡 詞:because,since,so,as a result,therefore,then,thus,otherwise等。
(7)表示目的的過渡詞:forthisreason,forthispurpose,so that等。
(8)表示強(qiáng)調(diào)的過渡詞:in fact,indeed,surely,necessarily,certainly,withoutanydoubt,truly,torepeat,aboveall,mostimportant等。
(9)表示解釋說明的過渡詞:forexample,in fact,in thiscase,foractually等。
(10)表示總結(jié)的過渡詞:finally,atlast,inconclusion,asIhaveshown,inoth erword,in brief,in short,in general,on the whole,ashasbeen stated等。
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作文(***)
每年高三學(xué)生在高考結(jié)束后都會(huì)有一個(gè)近三個(gè)月的假期。對(duì)于如何度過這個(gè)假100詞左右的短文,簡(jiǎn)要陳述學(xué)生的意向,并說明你自己的觀點(diǎn)。
意向
45% 在家充分休息
28% 學(xué)習(xí)英語,為上大學(xué)做準(zhǔn)備
15% 到外地旅游
12% 其他
注意:為使行文連貫,可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。
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One possible version:
Recently a survey has been conducted among the students in Grade Three about what they will do during the 3-month holiday after the College Entrance Exam.Students have different decisions.
About 45%of the surveyed students intend to rest at home.They want to relax
thoroughly and get ready for college life.While 28%of them prefer to attend ErIglish classes for their future use.Meanwhile,15%of them choose to travel outside and the rest l2%say that they’d like to do other things.After all.it's really difficult to get such a long holiday again after tlley enter the college.
Personally,1 will be a little sad if I get away from my dearest parents and relatives,so’d like to stay at home and spend more time witlI my families.. 為紀(jì)念汶川大地震三周年,某英文報(bào)發(fā)起關(guān)于災(zāi)區(qū)新貌的征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下圖片提示,以“Great Changes”為題,用英語寫一篇短文應(yīng)征。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下:
1.某中學(xué)災(zāi)后三年來的變化,如教學(xué)與活動(dòng)場(chǎng)所,以及師生精神面貌等;
2.發(fā)生變化的原因;
3.你的感想。
注意:
1.短文標(biāo)題與開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);
2.可根據(jù)圖片提示適當(dāng)發(fā)揮
3.詞數(shù):120左右
Great Changes
I am deeply impressed by the great changes that have taken place in the school over the past three years.
laboratory buildings, and a library. There is also a newly-built standard playground. In the new environment, teachers and students are living happily and working hard. It is really amazing that the once-mined place has now been turned into a beautiful school, full of life.
Obviously, without the help of the whole society, there would be no new school today. It is love and concern that have brought about the great changes. Many hands make light work. We can work wonders if we unite as a family, caring for each other and helping those in need. Union is strength.
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