2024屆高考一輪復習浙江省高三上學期英語分類匯編六：短文改錯
2024屆高考一輪復習浙江省高三上學期英語分類匯編：2024學年第一學期期中考試）
下面短文中有10處語言錯誤。請在有錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧)，并在其下面寫上該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。
注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改l0處，多者(從第ll處起)不計分。
例如：
It was very nice to get your invitation to spend ∧ weekend with you. Luckily
the
I was completely free then, so I'll say "yes". I'll arrive in Bristol at around 8 p. m.
am
on a Friday evening.
Though great progress has been made in science these years, but there?are still many people live
in poor conditions. They make their living?by collecting and selling used thing. Their children
cannot go to school?because they have not enough money to send their children to there. Why
you think so many people still suffer from poverty now?? The answer lies on the population
explosion. A president?of a developing country once say: “It is us who are to blame for?the
poverty because we used to ‘produce’ children without limit.”?Although this few words sound
simple enough, they have?clear pointed out one of the causes of the population explosion.?
66.去掉but? 67. lives----living?? 68. thing----things?? 69. 去掉第二個to?? 70. 在you前加do? 71on---in? 72. ?say --- said? 73. us---we
74.
this----these?? 75. clear----clearly
二、（浙江省北侖中學2024屆高三上學期期中考試）
文中共有10處語言錯誤，要求你在錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫上該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。
注意：1、每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2、只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。
Ask your friend that he can use a glass of water as a musical instrument. Of course, he
can’t. Then you take a glass of water. You put your finger in water and then move it slow round
the rim of the glass, as shown in the picture. Your finger must not be much wet, but it must not
be dry. So you must try many time. At last you will hear clear music which comes from the
glass. When your finger moves round the rim, it makes the glass to vibrate and the glass makes a
musical voice. The same principle makes the violin or its strings give music.
The America scientist Benjamin Franklin made a musical instrument out of glass bowls. He
used the different principle.
Ask your friend that he can use a glass of water as a musical instrument. Of course, he
if / whether
can’t. Then you take a glass of water. You put your finger in/water and then move it slow round
the
slowly
the rim of the glass, as shown in the picture. Your finger must not be much wet, but it must not
very / too
be dry. So you must try many time. At last you will hear clear music which comes from the
times
glass. When your finger moves round the rim, it makes the glass to vibrate and the glass makes a
musical voice. The same principle makes the violin or its strings give music.
sound
and
The America scientist Benjamin Franklin made a musical instrument out of glass bowls. He
American
used the different principle.
same
三、（浙江省蒼南中學2024屆高三上學期期中考試）
下面短文中有10處語錯誤。請在有錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧）,并在其下面寫上該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2.只允許修改10處，多者（從11處起）不計分。
One day, I went to the railway station to buy a ticket to my aunt. When I got there, I told that the
ticket had all been sold out. Just then a man came up and said with a strongly Zhejiang accent
that he had a spare ticket. I didn’t know that if I could believe him or not. After hesitate for a
while, I decided to take it. So as soon as the man left, I began to regret. If he was not honest, what
shall I do? On a third day, I went to the station to see my aunt away. As I was waving goodbye to
her, I saw the man sitting next to my aunt, smiling at me.
【改錯】
One day, I went to the railway station to buy a ticket to my aunt. When I got there, I∧told that the
for
was
ticket had all been sold out. Just then a man came up and said with a strongly Zhejiang accent
tickets
strong
that he had a spare ticket. I didn’t know that if I could believe him or not. After hesitate for a
去掉
hesitating
while, I decided to take it. So as soon as the man left, I began to regret. If he was not honest, what
But
shall I do? On a third day, I went to the station to see my aunt away. As I was waving goodbye to
should
the
off
her, I saw the man sitting next to my aunt, smiling at me.
四、（浙江省慈溪市2024屆高三上學期期中考試）
下面的短文中共有10處語言錯誤，請你在錯誤的地方增加、刪除或個性某個單詞。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（^），在該行右邊橫線上寫出該加的詞。
刪除：在多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，在該行右邊橫線上寫出改正后的詞。
注意：
1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞。
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從11處起）不計分。
Last Saturday the students of our class made a bike trip of Wanping, a small town by the Taihu Lake. We set off earlier in the morning. After getting to the town, we had visited some places of interest. At noon, we had picnic near the lake. Everybody was attracted with the beautiful scenery and we took a lot of picture. In the afternoon, some of them went fishing, some flew kites, and the others rowed boats on the water. We both had a wonderful time! It was a pleasant trio fir us, during which the boys were offered the girls a lot of help. We have learned to help, understand and sharing with others. In a word, we have got quite a lot from it.
五、（浙江省杭州市七校2024屆高三上學期期中聯考）
下面短文中有10處語言錯誤。請在有錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（︿），并在其下面寫上該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。
注意： 1.
每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。
例如：It was very nice to get your invitation to spend ︿ weekend with you. Luckily I was
the
am
completely free then, so I’ll to say “yes”. I’ll arrive in Bristol at 8 pm in Friday evening.
on
I was frightening on my first day of classes at an American university. It was my first time to sit with so many Americans in a classroom. Unlike many other classmate, I sat quietly by myself. My teacher spoke fast and I had a hard time understand him. English, without a doubt, is the hardest thing I experienced so far. Though I’m a Chinese student, communicating fluently with Americans can be really difficulty. Therefore, I have to struggle to understand that is being said in class. Reading and writing is equally as important as listening and speaking. When my classes started to get busy, the readings got longer. The papers also got harder, and that’s when real disaster struck.
longer. The papers also got harder, and that’s when real disaster struck.
六、（蕭山九中2011學年第一學期期中聯考）
下面短文中有10處語言錯誤。請再有錯誤的地方增加，刪除或修改某個單詞。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫上該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。
注意：1.每處錯誤及修改均僅限一詞；
2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I learned from the newspaper that your company needs a English secretary. I’m really interested in this position and hoped I can work for you.
I’m 18 years old and will be graduated from Xinxing Foreign Language School this July. I’m an excellent student, among the top 5 in my class of 50 students. I’m good at English, specially spoken English. I often use the computer and I type very fast. On my spare time, I read a lot of. Poems is my favorite. I enjoy music very much either. Being an active young person, I like sports and outdoor activities. However, I’m easy to get along and I like to make friends.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Li Hua
Dear Sir/Madam,[來
I learned from the newspaper that your company needs a English secretary. I’m
an
really interested in this position and hoped I can work for you.
hope
I’m 18 years old and will be graduated from Xinxing Foreign Language School
graduating
this July. I’m an excellent student, among the top 5 in my class of 50 students. I’m good at English, specially spoken English. I often use the computer and I type very
especially[來
fast. On my spare time, I read a lot of. Poems is my favorite. I enjoy music very
In
去掉
are
much either. Being an active young person, I like sports and outdoor activities.
too
However, I’m easy to get along∧ and I like to make friends.
Besides
with
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Li Hua
七、（浙江省南馬高中2011-2024學年第一學期期中考試）假如英語課上老師要求同學們交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的一篇作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，要求你在錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。
增加：在缺詞處加上一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。
注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從11處起）不計分。On Saturday afternoon, Li Hua and Wang Ping, members from “ Green Eyes”, was having an environmental protection activity near the riverside when they catch sight of a bird on the ground.
They picked it out and found it wounded. Thinking it might die without timely help, they took it to home. They made a nest for it but fed it with rice and water. Under their treatment and care, the lucky birds got recovered soon. When time came for them fly the bird back to nature, they felt a bit pity but very delighting. I think it’s worthwhile for him to do such a thing. Here I call on the public to show respect for nature. Only by changing the way we treat the environment can we get along good with it.
四：改錯：1. was---were
2. catch---caught
3. out---up
4. to home---home
5. but---and
6. birds---bird
7. fly---to fly
8. delighting---delighted
9. him---them
10. good---well
八、（衢州一中2011學年度第一學期期中檢測試卷）下面短文中共有10處錯誤，錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（∧），并在此符號下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。
It is important for everybody to obey traffic rules. This afternoon on my way to home from work, I saw an accident happening. A girl was crossing the street on a zebra crossing while a young man drove a motorbike towards her. The young man saw the girl and tries to stop, and he drove too fast to stop. He hit the girl and fell off her motorbike. The girl was badly injured and couldn’t move. The young man didn’t know how to do. I immediately ran to a phone box nearby and dialed 110. Soon the police reached. They sent her hospital at once. One of the policeman talked to the young man and wrote something down while he was talking. I think it is very dangerous to drive very fast.
to（去掉）;
happening—happen; while—when; tries---tried; and –but;
her—his; how—what; reached—arrived; hospital— to hospital;
policeman--policemen
I was only 12 when we moved to California. I remember that I enjoyed flying non-stop
across a whole country and that I wasn’t very happy about leave my friends. But Dad think it’d
be good for we all to live in a suburb (郊區) instead in the middle of a city. And Uncle Jeff, his
brother, who’d been living in California for about 20 years, were always telling us how wonderful
California it was. He said it would be easily for Dad to get a job driving a taxi, that had been
Dad’s job in New York. But we all agreed to try it for one year.
Now we’ve been here for four years, and we all love it.
a—the
leave --- leaving
think --- thought
we—us
instead^ of
were--- was
it 去掉 easily—easy
that --- which
But--- So/And
One day Tom and I were walking down the street while we saw an old man fall off his bike. He was badly hurt. Many people crowded around us. Someone suggested carrying the old man to the roadside, so Tom disagreed. He has learned first aid. He said that they ought to leave him where he was and checked him first. At that time the old man wasn't breathing. Tom asked me to call in the First Aid Center at once and he began to start the old man's breathing, use the mouth-to-mouth way. Within five minutes, the old man began to move little and doctors also arrived. They said that we had done was correct. I have learned from this experience that a knowledge of first aid can make a really difference.
