江蘇省啟東中學(xué)2024屆高考考前英語(yǔ)最后一講：書面表達(dá)

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　　Part Six: 書面表達(dá)部分

　　答題應(yīng)試技巧：

　　牢記“一式、兩頭、三寫、四關(guān)”的應(yīng)試要訣。一式，是關(guān)注文章體裁，寫對(duì)格式；兩頭，即寫好文章的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾；三寫，是大小寫、拼寫和書寫無(wú)誤；四關(guān)，也就是過(guò)好內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)關(guān)、行文邏輯關(guān)、語(yǔ)法規(guī)則關(guān)和習(xí)慣表達(dá)關(guān)。具體如下：

　　1. 注重審題，對(duì)寫的內(nèi)容做到心中有數(shù)。首先，應(yīng)通過(guò)審題明確文章的體裁。其次，應(yīng)注重時(shí)態(tài)及語(yǔ)態(tài)，認(rèn)真琢磨其內(nèi)容的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)方式，避免漢式英語(yǔ)。最后著手寫時(shí)要注意分段。

　　2. 內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)是否齊全；句子語(yǔ)法（包括：時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)、用詞、句法和結(jié)構(gòu)格式等）是否正確；詞匯是否準(zhǔn)確多樣；句式結(jié)構(gòu)是否豐富多彩；邏輯關(guān)系詞使用是否到位；是否合理使用連接詞和過(guò)渡性詞語(yǔ)；標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)、英語(yǔ)字母大小寫是否規(guī)范。

　　3. 在表達(dá)清晰明了的前提下適當(dāng)使用有把握的復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)和高級(jí)詞匯。

　　4. 注重英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，使所寫句子準(zhǔn)確地道，注意表達(dá)時(shí)的切換，避免漢式英語(yǔ)。

　　5. 注重開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾的技巧。

　　6. 新標(biāo)準(zhǔn)對(duì)寫作的要求增加了情感因素，所以發(fā)揮自己的觀點(diǎn)時(shí)注重思想性，力圖提高文章思想內(nèi)涵。

　　7. 注重書寫，追求卷面美觀。書面表達(dá)屬于主觀性試題，閱卷老師的主觀印象直接關(guān)系到考生的得分高低。

　　8. 通讀全文，檢查疏漏。

　　忌：書寫潦草、單詞模糊不清、左右明顯不齊、隨意涂改、缺乏分段、字?jǐn)?shù)太多或太少（應(yīng)在130-170間）

　　●寫作典型習(xí)題：

　　請(qǐng)根據(jù)對(duì)某校這段時(shí)間學(xué)生中擁有QQ號(hào)人數(shù)的調(diào)查寫一篇文章，要求描述變化、分析原因并談?wù)効捶ā?/p>

　　2008 2009 2010 2011

　　20% 40% 50% 60%

　　近些年, 由于各種原因, 對(duì)父母的孝順之心, 感恩之心, 在許多青年學(xué)生心中已經(jīng)大大折扣, 甚至越來(lái)越淡漠. 根據(jù)這種現(xiàn)象, 談?wù)勀愕目捶?

　　注意: 孝心filial piety

　　打折扣discount

　　近日某網(wǎng)站對(duì)人們外出旅游的頻率和目的進(jìn)行了一次問(wèn)卷調(diào)查，結(jié)果見(jiàn)下圖。請(qǐng)根據(jù)圖表提供的信息用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文，介紹此次調(diào)查結(jié)果，并談?wù)勀阕约和獬雎糜蔚哪康摹Ｔ~數(shù)150左右。文章的開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出。

　　表1

　　表2

　　One possible version

　　Recently an online survey on traveling has been conducted. ______________________________________________________________________________

　　請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面提供的漫畫所反應(yīng)的現(xiàn)象和問(wèn)題，

　　寫一篇題為 “Exam is coming”的短文, 你的短

　　文應(yīng)該包含：

　　1. 漫畫描述和反映的問(wèn)題及原因是什么？

　　2. 請(qǐng)聯(lián)系實(shí)際,就我們應(yīng)該怎樣正確面對(duì)這樣的

　　問(wèn)題發(fā)表自己的看法。

　　要求：1. 參照?qǐng)D及所給提示，作必要的發(fā)揮想象。

　　2. 詞數(shù)150 左右。作文中不得提及考生所

　　在學(xué)校和本人姓名。

　　3. 參考詞匯：失眠insomnia

　　假如你校最近就家長(zhǎng)應(yīng)該如何對(duì)待孩子的問(wèn)題進(jìn)行了調(diào)查，結(jié)果如下。請(qǐng)根據(jù)圖表1中提供的信息描述調(diào)查結(jié)果，并針對(duì)圖表2的其中一個(gè)數(shù)據(jù)所反映的情況寫出你的看法。

　　詞數(shù)150左右。開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

　　Recently our school has conducted a survey among the students about how parents treat their children.

　　近期某網(wǎng)站就校車安全問(wèn)題進(jìn)行了一次社會(huì)調(diào)查，結(jié)果見(jiàn)下圖。請(qǐng)根據(jù)圖示用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文，介紹調(diào)查結(jié)果并談?wù)勀愕目捶ǎ┯嘘P(guān)部門參考。

　　注意：150詞左右；文章的開(kāi)頭已給出；提示詞：報(bào)廢車abandoned vehicles

　　Recently a survey on school buses has been conducted on a website. The result is as follows.

　　書面表達(dá)Possible versions:

　　With the development of the Internet, nowadays many students own QQs. As is shown in the chart, the rate of students who owned QQs increased greatly from 2008 to 2011. Back in 2008, only 20% of the students had QQs; one year later, the rate became twice as large.

　　In 2010 half of them had QQs and the rate in 2011 rose to 60%. Clearly, it is tending to increase.

　　In my opinion, the increase can be accounted for two factors. For one thing, the widespread use of the Internet makes it convenient for students to communicate with each other. For another, QQ provides all kinds of entertainments, such as playing games and enjoying music. What's more, QQ has gradually become the main means for the public to know the latest news.

　　Personally, students should make proper use of and not be addicted to QQ, and only when we do so can it serve its purpose.

　　(155 words)

　　In recent years, many young students have forgotten some Chinese traditional virtues. Worse still, in many students’ minds, the idea of filial piety to their parents has been discounted and even lost.

　　As far as I’m concerned, there are different reasons leading to young students lacking the sense of thanksgiving to their parents. Firstly, they are often self-centered, considering themselves to be number ones in the family, forgetting thanks. Secondly, they always take their parents’ cultivation, teachers’ teaching and social offering for granted. Thirdly, it is related to the education of our society, family and school, where education focuses only on knowledge teaching, forgetting all about traditional good virtues.

　　Therefore, we should do something to change this phenomenon. We believe building harmonious school campus needs thanksgiving education. So schools should add virtue education to their routine while young students should learn to be respectful and grateful. It is essential in building a harmonious society and developing Chinese traditional goodness.

　　(159 words)

　　Recently an online survey on traveling has been conducted.

　　In the survey, people are asked about how often and why they travel, and the results are as follows.

　　Chart 1 shows that 33% of the people often go traveling, the reason for which lies in the fact that they have enough time and money. Nearly half of the people do it now and then, while those who seldom go out to travel account for 21%.

　　As is shown in Chart 2, people travel for different reasons. The largest percentage of people, about 48%, put enjoying beautiful natural scenery in the first place for their travel. Over a quarter of them enjoy learning about culture and customs and 20% prefer to visit places of interest. Also there are a small number of people who travel mainly for shopping

　　As for me, traveling is not only a good way to relax and enjoy myself but also a chance to broaden my horizons.

　　(151 words)

　　Exam is coming

　　As we can see in the picture, the boy is so worried about the coming exam that he feels dizzy, and even suffers from insomnia and mental illness.

　　It’s a fairly common phenomenon among us students. With the college entrance examination approaching, many students are suffering from exam anxiety. Some of the students feel nervous because they are not well prepared for the exam. Some feel dizzy because they stay up too late. Others just pay too much attention to the results.

　　If you have these symptoms, it’s time for you to take effective measures to deal with them. Firstly, make good use of time to fully prepare your lessons. Secondly, there is no need to feel nervous when you have some bad feelings. Taking a deep breath may be helpful. Thirdly, have enough sleep before exams and you will perform well in exams. Lastly, have the right attitude to exams and keep a calm state of mind.

　　I believe if you take these, success will be yours.

　　(167 words)

　　Recently our school has conducted a survey among the students about how parents treat their children.

　　According to Chart 1, three behaviors from parents are considered most welcome among the students 33.5% of the students feel happy that their parents trust them, laying a basic foundation for family communication. 31.7% are content to be in the equal position with their parents when they are talking with each other. Wheat’s more, 22.7% feel happy to receive constant praise or encouragement from their parents.

　　As is shown in Chart 2.32% of the students think their parents expect too much of them, especially in their studies, putting great pressure on them. While all parents love their children and want the best for them, with too much pressure, however, some children will feel they have failed if they are not accepted at a top school or university.

　　I think parents should have practical expectations for their children. This way, the children will feel more confident about themselves and really make a difference in the future.

　　Recently a survey on school buses has been conducted on a website. The result is as follows

　　As can be seen from the charts, only 36.13% of the interviewees trust school buses, while 40.34% show their distrust. The rest of them are not clear about it. Of those who show their disbelief in school buses, 35.29% are afraid of abandoned vehicles being used and nearly a quarter worry that school buses are often overloaded, which can cause serious traffic accidents. Over one fifth of them worry that school buses are not equipped with safety equipment like safety belts. Others blame drivers for breaking the speed limit.

　　As far as I’m concerned, effective measures should be taken to ensure the safety of school buses. More money should be invested to improve the quality of school buses. Besides, all the school buses should be examined regularly. Meanwhile, school bus drivers should take more responsibility for the safety of the students.

　　(159 words)

　　Part Six: 書面表達(dá)部分

　　答題應(yīng)試技巧：

　　3. 在表達(dá)清晰明了的前提下適當(dāng)使用有把握的復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)和高級(jí)詞匯。

　　4. 注重英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，使所寫句子準(zhǔn)確地道，注意表達(dá)時(shí)的切換，避免漢式英語(yǔ)。

　　5. 注重開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾的技巧。

　　6. 新標(biāo)準(zhǔn)對(duì)寫作的要求增加了情感因素，所以發(fā)揮自己的觀點(diǎn)時(shí)注重思想性，力圖提高文章思想內(nèi)涵。

　　7. 注重書寫，追求卷面美觀。書面表達(dá)屬于主觀性試題，閱卷老師的主觀印象直接關(guān)系到考生的得分高低。

　　8. 通讀全文，檢查疏漏。

　　忌：書寫潦草、單詞模糊不清、左右明顯不齊、隨意涂改、缺乏分段、字?jǐn)?shù)太多或太少（應(yīng)在130-170間）

　　●寫作典型習(xí)題：

　　請(qǐng)根據(jù)對(duì)某校這段時(shí)間學(xué)生中擁有QQ號(hào)人數(shù)的調(diào)查寫一篇文章，要求描述變化、分析原因并談?wù)効捶ā?/p>

　　2008 2009 2010 2011

　　20% 40% 50% 60%

　　注意: 孝心filial piety

　　打折扣discount

　　表1

　　表2

　　One possible version

　　Recently an online survey on traveling has been conducted. ______________________________________________________________________________

　　請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面提供的漫畫所反應(yīng)的現(xiàn)象和問(wèn)題，

　　寫一篇題為 “Exam is coming”的短文, 你的短

　　文應(yīng)該包含：

　　1. 漫畫描述和反映的問(wèn)題及原因是什么？

　　2. 請(qǐng)聯(lián)系實(shí)際,就我們應(yīng)該怎樣正確面對(duì)這樣的

　　問(wèn)題發(fā)表自己的看法。

　　要求：1. 參照?qǐng)D及所給提示，作必要的發(fā)揮想象。

　　2. 詞數(shù)150 左右。作文中不得提及考生所

　　在學(xué)校和本人姓名。

　　3. 參考詞匯：失眠insomnia

　　詞數(shù)150左右。開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

　　Recently our school has conducted a survey among the students about how parents treat their children.

　　注意：150詞左右；文章的開(kāi)頭已給出；提示詞：報(bào)廢車abandoned vehicles

　　Recently a survey on school buses has been conducted on a website. The result is as follows.

　　書面表達(dá)Possible versions:

　　In 2010 half of them had QQs and the rate in 2011 rose to 60%. Clearly, it is tending to increase.

　　Personally, students should make proper use of and not be addicted to QQ, and only when we do so can it serve its purpose.

　　(155 words)

　　(159 words)

　　Recently an online survey on traveling has been conducted.

　　In the survey, people are asked about how often and why they travel, and the results are as follows.

　　As for me, traveling is not only a good way to relax and enjoy myself but also a chance to broaden my horizons.

　　(151 words)

　　Exam is coming

　　As we can see in the picture, the boy is so worried about the coming exam that he feels dizzy, and even suffers from insomnia and mental illness.

　　I believe if you take these, success will be yours.

　　(167 words)

　　Recently our school has conducted a survey among the students about how parents treat their children.

　　I think parents should have practical expectations for their children. This way, the children will feel more confident about themselves and really make a difference in the future.

　　Recently a survey on school buses has been conducted on a website. The result is as follows

　　(159 words)