2024屆高考英語二輪復習熱點限時訓練：短文改錯系列3
短文改錯系列3
一、短文改錯
1．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線 （﹨）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1.每處錯誤及修改均僅限一詞；
2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。
Here are two types of cars may some day take place of today’s big cars. If all the people drive such cars in the future, there will be fewer pollution in the air. There will also be more space for parking cars in the cities, but the streets will be less crowded. Three such cars can fit in the space now need by one car of the usually size. The little cars will cost much less to own and drive. Drive will be safer, too, though these little cars can go only 65 kilometers per hour. But it will not be of any use for long trips.
【答案】
【小題1】cars之后加 which/that
take之后加 the
fewer改為 less
but改為and
in去掉
need改為needed
usually改為usual
Drive改為 Driving
though改為because
it 改為they
【小題1】which/that引導定語從句，在句中作主語，不可省略。
【小題2】take the place of代替。
【小題3】pollution為不可數名詞，故用less.
【小題4】此處是并列關系，不是轉折關系。
【小題5】fit是個及物動詞，fit sth. 故去掉in。
【小題6】needed by被…所需要的過去分詞作后置定語。
【小題7】形容詞修飾名詞
【小題8】動名詞作主語
【小題9】解釋駕駛更安全的原因，故用because.
【小題10】前面用的是復數cars，故用they來代替。
2．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線()劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。
Dear Sir，
How are you? As a exchange student，I am writing to tell you I would prefer to move into a single room in next term，
as I find
inconvenient to share a room with others. My roommate often held parties at night, made much noise.
Besides, his friends are always visiting him, that disturb me a lot. So I hope to draw your attentions to this problem. If
you think in my position，I am sure he will agree that the only solution for me is get a room of my own，one not in the
same building but as near to the school campus as possible. I would be gratefully if you could do me
favor.
Best wishes.
Yours sincerely，
Li Ming
【小題1】a改成an
【小題2】that—it
【小題3】held改成holds
【小題4】made改成making
【小題5】that改成which
【小題6】disturb改成disturbs
【小題7】Attentions改成Attention
【小題8】he改成you
【小題9】is后面加to，
【小題10】gratefully改成grateful
【解析】
【小題1】Exchange是以元音開始發音開頭的，使用an.
【小題2】it作為形式賓語，真正的賓語是后面的不定式。
【小題3】本文是以現在時為主的時候，這里用第三人稱單數形式的一般現在時。
【小題4】Making 這里是伴隨狀語，make與my classmate構成主動關系，使用現在分詞的形式。
【小題5】that不能引導非限制性定語從句，用which引導。
【小題6】Which指代前面一句話的內容在句中作主語，謂語動詞用單數
【小題7】Attention是不可數名詞，沒有復數形式。
【小題8】根據上下文可知你會同意…
【小題9】不定式在句中作表語。
【小題10】這里是形容詞作表語。
3．此題要求改正所給短文中的錯誤。對標有題號的每一行作出判斷，每一行都有一個錯，請按下列要求改正：
該行多一個詞：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉，在該行右邊的橫線上寫出該詞，也用斜線劃掉。
該行缺一個詞：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），在該行右邊橫線上寫出該加的詞。
該行錯一個詞：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，在該行右邊橫線上寫出正后的詞。
walking past a bank while suddenly I caught three men
77. ________
steal into the bank. They were tall and strong and they
78.________
were wearing black mask. The moment they entered
79.________
into the bank I heard women screaming . Immediately I
80._________
knew what had happened.
81._________
At once I stopped a man who had a mobile phone.
He telephoned the police station. In a short while the police
82._________
arrived by the car, rushed into the bank and caught the three
83.________
robbers, who were trying to rob the bank its money. They
84._________
were taken the police station and would be punished by law.
85.__________
【答案】
【小題1】go—went
【小題2】while—when
【小題3】steal— stealing
【小題4】mask— masks
【小題5】去掉into
【小題6】去掉had
【小題7】he— I
【小題8】去掉the
【小題9】bank 后加of
【小題10】take后加to
【解析】
【小題1】昨天7點是過去的時間，使用過去時。
【小題2】walk past a bank是一個短暫性動作，when可以和短暫性動詞連用。
【小題3】固定詞組catch sb doing sth抓住某人正在做某事。
【小題4】前面的they是復數形式，應該是有很多人，那么應該帶著很多的面具。
【小題5】enter是及物動詞，后面不需要有介詞。
【小題6】這里使用過去時表示發生的事情，沒有必要使用過去完成時。
【小題7】根據上下文可知是我報警的。
【小題8】by car指汽車。
【小題9】固定詞組rob sb of sth搶劫某人某物。
【小題10】take sb to some place把某人戴到某地。
4．下面文中共有10處語言錯誤，要求你在錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（/），并在該句下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：
1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。
A Frenchman was once visiting London．He wished to take a walk to see a city．But he was afraid he might get lost because he knew no words of English．So before he left his hotel, he stopped in the first corner and carefully copied in his notebook the names of the street that he was staying．Then he walked on．At last, he got being lost．After several hours he found a policeman．The Frenchman tried his best to explain the policeman that he didn’t know the name of his hotel, and he knew the name of the street．He then showed the policeman that he copied in his notebook．It was read: “One-way street”．
【小題1】a改成the
【小題2】before改成after
【小題3】in改成at
【小題4】names改成name
【小題5】that改成where
【小題6】去掉being
explain后面去掉to
【小題8】and改成but
【小題9】that改成What
【小題10】改成去掉was
【小題1】前面已經提到London這個城市，故用the。
【小題2】在他離開賓館后，他在第一個拐角處停了下來。
【小題3】在外面的拐角處應用at.
【小題4】這條街道的名稱，不可能是復數。
【小題5】先行詞the street在定語從句中做地點狀語，
故用where。
【小題6】get lost迷路
【小題7】explain to sb. sth向某人解釋某事
【小題8】他不知道賓館的名字，與知道街道的名字是轉折關系，故用but。
【小題9】他給警察看他所記錄的東西，copy后面缺少賓語，故用what。
【小題10】筆記本上寫著什么，用read或say。且不能用被動。
5．此題要求改正所給短文中的錯誤。對標有題號的第一行作出判斷：如無錯誤，在該行右邊橫線上畫一個勾(√)；如有錯誤（每行只有一個錯誤），則按下列情況改正：
此行多一個詞：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉，在該行右邊橫線上寫出該詞，并也用斜線劃掉。
此行缺一個詞：在缺詞處加一個漏寫符號（∧），在該行右邊橫線上寫出該加的詞。
此行錯一個詞：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，在該行右邊橫線上寫出改正后的詞。
注意：原行沒有錯的不要改。
Many year ago a poor man grew an orange tree.
76. _______
On the tree there were many fine oranges. Some day he found
77. _______
one of them was so big as a football . He took it
78. _______
to the king . The king was so happy that he gave the
79. _______
poor man lots money. When a rich man heard of it ,
80. _______
he said for himself ,"I'll take my gold cup to the king 81. _______
and he will give me much money . The next day the king receive
82. _______
from the cup . The king was very fond of the cup and he told83. _______
the rich man, “I have an orange . It is beautiful than the cup, 84. _______
so I have decided to give it to you as the reward instead money”. 85. _______
【答案】
【小題1】year→years
【小題2】Some →One
【小題3】so→as
【小題4】正確
lots→lots of
【小題6】for→to
【小題7】receive→received
【小題8】from去掉
【小題9】beautiful→more beautiful
【小題10】instead→instead of
【解析】
【小題1】many后面接可數名詞復數形式。
【小題2】one day是指某一天。
【小題3】so用語否定句，as通常用于肯定句。
【小題4】正確
【小題6】say to sb心里想。
【小題7】本文是過去時。
【小題8】receive是及物動詞。
【小題9】后面有than，說明前面應該使用比較級。
【小題10】固定詞組 instead of代替，而不是…
6．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分
I couldn’t believe my ears when I heard my name calling. I was chosen to play the leading role in the play，that was my dream. As a shy and thin girl，I used to be quite afraid of speaking in the public. But my parents and teachers always encourage me to do so. Now I have changed great. In class，I am often the first one to stand up and answer questions even if I may take some mistakes. No pains，no gains. Now I am always brave enough overcome the difficulty in my heart and have changed in a lively girl. So my experience shows that we should not be afraid of losing face but only in this way can we make progresses.
【答案】
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7．假如英語課上老師要求同學們交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中有10處錯誤，要求你在錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧)，并在其下面寫上該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。
注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞。
2．只允許修改10處，多者(從11處起)不計分。
More and more parents send their kids to various training classes and people had different
opinions towards this. Some people think that attend training classes can help kids learn some
skills. Also their minds can be broaden. Besides, kids can make a plenty of friends there. Other
people think that different kinds of training classes can be really tiring. Kids should be given more chance to relax and do whatever they are interested ∧. In addition, unacceptable training classes
will certain be against the nature of kids, that may easily make them bored. Basing on the above
arguments, I think that parents should consider their children s interest first after making the decision to send them to training classes.
【答案】
【小題1】had 改成have
【小題2】attend改成 attending
【小題3】broaden改成broadened
【小題4】去掉a
【小題5】chance改成 chances
