河北省2024高考英語(yǔ)二輪復(fù)習(xí)專題訓(xùn)練短文改錯(cuò)+書(shū)面表達(dá)（76）

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　　河北省2024高考英語(yǔ)二輪復(fù)習(xí)專題訓(xùn)練：

　　短文改錯(cuò)+書(shū)面表達(dá)（76）

　　短文改錯(cuò)

　　假如英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加，刪除或修改。

　　增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

　　修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

　　注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

　　2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

　　It has been years since the Chinese get plastic bags from supermarkets for free.

　　China has banned free plastic bags at shops and supermarkets, but people have to pay for

　　them. The Chinese once use about 300 million plastic shopping bags a day, which has

　　caused environmental pollution because plastic bags are not easily to break down. So the

　　Chinese is encouraged to take their own bags for shopping. Then what kind of

　　shopping bag is the best to carry? Some student in Chongqing have a extraordinary idea.

　　They use old clothes to make cloth bags, and then to ask their parents and friends to use

　　these cloth bags instead plastic ones. They do so because they think it is our duty to help

　　書(shū)面表達(dá)

　　現(xiàn)在，很多中學(xué)生每天長(zhǎng)時(shí)間用耳機(jī)聽(tīng)音樂(lè)、學(xué)英語(yǔ)。你的英語(yǔ)筆友李平也是如此。最近他在來(lái)信中提到感覺(jué)頭痛、注意力不集中、汜憶力減退。請(qǐng)你就此回信談?wù)勀愕挠^點(diǎn)和建議。

　　寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：

　　1．簡(jiǎn)述過(guò)度使用耳機(jī)的現(xiàn)象；

　　2．分析過(guò)度使用耳機(jī)的危害；

　　3．提出你的建議。

　　注意：

　　1．要點(diǎn)齊全，可適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

　　2．字?jǐn)?shù)100左右。開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

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　　One Possible Version

　　Dear Li Ping,

　　I received your letter yesterday. Nowadays many students listen to music and learn English with earphones. As for your trouble with ears and bad memory, I’m afraid you spend too much time listening with earphones. In fact, listening to music while doing your lessons may result in less concentration on your study. Besides, the overuse of earphones does harm to your hearing. There are many ways we can enjoy music and learn English. For instance, a recorder or a radio may be a good choice. However, if you do need to use an earphone, you should rest your ears for at least ten minutes every hour but do not use it more than 2 hours a day. I hope things will get better soon.

　　Best wishes.

　　Yours,

　　Lin Tao