2024屆高考英語一輪復習《全優課堂》寫作技能步步高寫作層級特訓：要訣4.4.滿分作文登場（新人教版含答案）

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　　第三部分　要訣四

　　(2024湖北)

　　請根據以下提示，并結合具體事例，用英語寫一篇短文。

　　Small things make a big difference.The small things we do can make us a responsible member of the society.

　　注意：

　　①無須寫標題；

　　②除詩歌外，文體不限；

　　③內容必須結合你生活中的具體事例；

　　④文中不得透露個人姓名和學校名稱；

　　⑤詞數不少于120，如引用提示語則不計入總詞數。

　　考場作文

　　From a thing some days ago, I knew that it isn't too hard to become a responsible member of the society.

　　I can still remember ①a incident which happened on a rainy Sunday afternoon.I was on my way to the bookstore and was ②waiting the green light at a crossing when a girl of about ten was knocked down by a passing car (1)and it drove off quickly.A man immediately rushed to the girl to give her first aid.I also joined in without hesitation.③Comparing with the escaped driver, I am proud of what I did.

　　As a member of the society, I realize that (2)responsibility plays a very important role in creating a better society.

　　1．錯誤聚焦：

　　(1)incident的首字母發元音音素，故應將①a改為______。

　　(2)wait是不及物動詞，故應在②waiting后加介詞____________。

　　(3)“與……相比”，屬習慣用法，故將③Comparing改為______________。

　　【答案】(1)an　(2)for　(3)Compared

　　2．高分靚句：

　　(1)將畫線(1)改為非謂語動詞作狀語的形式：________________。

　　(2)將畫線(2)改為強調謂語動詞形式：______________。

　　【答案】

　　(1)driving off quickly

　　(2)responsibility does play a very important role in creating a better society

　　參考范文：

　　During the last summer vocation I experienced many things but it was one small thing that was the most unforgettable.

　　On a sunny Saturday, I was taking a bus to visit my uncle.So many people were there on the bus that some persons had to stand, including an old woman.On seeing this scene, I offered my seat to her without hesitation because I thought respecting the old and helping others is a virtue in traditional Chinese culture.When seeing the smile on the woman's face, I felt very proud.

　　From this small thing I came to understand that small things make a difference to the world.Only when everyone places a high value on responsibility for the society can we create a better society to live in.

　　(2024湖南長郡中學高三第六次月考)

　　Share with others, and sadness will be greatly lessened/reduced while happiness will be doubled.

　　請根據以上的話寫一篇不少于120詞的英語短文，如引用提示語則不計入總詞數。

　　注意：

　　①無須寫標題；

　　②除詩歌外，文體不限；

　　③內容必須結合你生活中的具體事例；

　　④文中不得透露個人姓名和學校名稱。

　　________________________________________________________________________

　　【答案】

　　One possible version：

　　We are living in a world in which sharing is so important that we can never emphasize its importance too much.By sharing we can often greatly lessen our sadness and double our happiness.

　　When it comes to this topic, memories flood into my mind.There was a time when I was caught in the sadness of failing an important exam, my world turned grey and I lost interest in everything until my best friend came up to comfort me.Encouraged and moved by his kindness, I shared with him, which relieved me of troubles soon.Little by little, I regained confidence.The following months witnessed my efforts, and I finally made progress in another important exam.

　　As you can see, it was sharing with my friend that helped me out of the dark moment and brought back my confidence.Sharing is beautiful, not only physically but also psychologically.

　　第三部分　要訣四

　　(2024湖北)

　　請根據以下提示，并結合具體事例，用英語寫一篇短文。

　　Small things make a big difference.The small things we do can make us a responsible member of the society.

　　注意：

　　①無須寫標題；

　　②除詩歌外，文體不限；

　　③內容必須結合你生活中的具體事例；

　　④文中不得透露個人姓名和學校名稱；

　　⑤詞數不少于120，如引用提示語則不計入總詞數。

　　考場作文

　　From a thing some days ago, I knew that it isn't too hard to become a responsible member of the society.

　　As a member of the society, I realize that (2)responsibility plays a very important role in creating a better society.

　　1．錯誤聚焦：

　　(1)incident的首字母發元音音素，故應將①a改為______。

　　(2)wait是不及物動詞，故應在②waiting后加介詞____________。

　　(3)“與……相比”，屬習慣用法，故將③Comparing改為______________。

　　【答案】(1)an　(2)for　(3)Compared

　　2．高分靚句：

　　(1)將畫線(1)改為非謂語動詞作狀語的形式：________________。

　　(2)將畫線(2)改為強調謂語動詞形式：______________。

　　【答案】

　　(1)driving off quickly

　　(2)responsibility does play a very important role in creating a better society

　　參考范文：

　　During the last summer vocation I experienced many things but it was one small thing that was the most unforgettable.

　　(2024湖南長郡中學高三第六次月考)

　　Share with others, and sadness will be greatly lessened/reduced while happiness will be doubled.

　　請根據以上的話寫一篇不少于120詞的英語短文，如引用提示語則不計入總詞數。

　　注意：

　　①無須寫標題；

　　②除詩歌外，文體不限；

　　③內容必須結合你生活中的具體事例；

　　④文中不得透露個人姓名和學校名稱。

　　________________________________________________________________________

　　【答案】

　　One possible version：

　　We are living in a world in which sharing is so important that we can never emphasize its importance too much.By sharing we can often greatly lessen our sadness and double our happiness.

　　As you can see, it was sharing with my friend that helped me out of the dark moment and brought back my confidence.Sharing is beautiful, not only physically but also psychologically.