2024年高考英語(yǔ)高效書(shū)面表達(dá)專題卷：25（含解析）
1．
來(lái)自你市的中學(xué)生小記者最近進(jìn)行了一次采訪活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面表格中的內(nèi)容為你校的英語(yǔ)園地寫(xiě)一篇報(bào)道。
時(shí)間 2007年1月15日
地點(diǎn) 經(jīng)濟(jì)開(kāi)發(fā)區(qū)
采訪人 40名中學(xué)小記者
被采訪人 開(kāi)發(fā)區(qū)主任王慶海
采訪內(nèi)容 過(guò)去一年的成績(jī)
如何吸引投資
三年后開(kāi)發(fā)區(qū)的前景
其他 1．除了筆、本，還用了數(shù)碼相機(jī)、錄音筆等現(xiàn)代設(shè)備
2．對(duì)一流的設(shè)計(jì)、漂亮的綠化、現(xiàn)代的建筑留下了深刻的印象
：經(jīng)濟(jì)開(kāi)發(fā)區(qū)the Economic Development Zone；小記者teenage report；投資investment；數(shù)碼digital；錄音筆recording pen；
2．書(shū)面表達(dá)（滿分2分）
暑假來(lái)臨。你班同學(xué)討論了假期的計(jì)劃，提出了不同的看法。請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示寫(xiě)一篇有關(guān)討論的英語(yǔ)短文，并談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?/p>
優(yōu)點(diǎn) 缺點(diǎn)
待在家中 花費(fèi)少；方便舒適 不能親身了解外界
外出旅游 增長(zhǎng)見(jiàn)識(shí)；開(kāi)闊眼界 花費(fèi)多；旅途不便；擔(dān)心安全
假如你叫李華，最近收到好朋友Mike的來(lái)信，得知他染上了吸煙的習(xí)慣，你很為他擔(dān)心。請(qǐng)給他寫(xiě)一封信。
1．表明自己的看法； 2．談?wù)勎鼰煹奈：Γ膳e例說(shuō)明）； 3．提出至少兩條建議。
注意：
1、短文須寫(xiě)在答題卡的指定區(qū)域。
2、短文詞數(shù)不少于100。
3、內(nèi)容充實(shí)，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，語(yǔ)意連貫。
4、書(shū)寫(xiě)需清晰、工整。
5、首句已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Since I heard you have got into the habit of smoking,
4．假如你是李明，你發(fā)現(xiàn)部分同學(xué)每次遇到重要考試，都會(huì)出現(xiàn)一些焦慮癥狀。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一封信，向某學(xué)生英文報(bào)編輯反映該問(wèn)題。信的內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括下列要點(diǎn)：?
?焦慮癥狀： 頭暈、乏力、睡眠不好、食欲不振等
?建?議：
1．考前制定好合適的復(fù)習(xí)計(jì)劃
?
2．考試期間正常作息?
?
3．睡前洗熱水澡、喝熱牛奶等有助于睡眠
?其他建議：
(內(nèi)容由考生自己擬定2點(diǎn))?
?注意：
1.根據(jù)以上內(nèi)容寫(xiě)一篇短文，不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫。
2.要準(zhǔn)確使用語(yǔ)法和詞匯；使用一定的句型、詞匯，清楚、連貫地表達(dá)自己的意思；
3.?詞數(shù)：100個(gè)左右。開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)詞數(shù)。
參考詞匯：頭暈—dizzy(adj.)??
Dear?editor,??
? I’m?Li?Ming?of?Senior?Three,?Guangming?Middle?School.?I’m?writing?to?tell?you?about?some?
symptoms?of?anxiety?among?us?students?before?exams.?__________________________________?
?_______________________________________________________________________________?
?_____________________________________________________________________________?
Li?Ming? ??
5．假定你是李華，你的英國(guó)筆友Helen正在寫(xiě)一關(guān)各國(guó)中學(xué)生課外閱讀情況的調(diào)查報(bào)告。她給你發(fā)了一封電子郵件，想了解相關(guān)情況。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，給她回一封電子郵件。
2．原因分析；
3．你的看法。
注意： 1．根據(jù)所給提示，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮, 要求內(nèi)容充實(shí)，語(yǔ)意連貫。
3．郵件中不得提及考生所在學(xué)校及本人姓名。
Dear Helen,
Thank you for your email. Now I would like to tell you something about the extracurricular reading in our school. ______________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours
Lihua
參考答案
1．
Forty teenage reporters from different middle schools in our city paid a visit to the Economic Development Zone and had an interview with Wang Qinghai, head of the Zone, on January 15th, 2007.
At the interview, the reporters asked Mr Wang about what achievements they made last year, how they were to attract more investment and how the zone would be developing over the next three years. Mr Wang gave them satisfactory answers.
They used modern equipment, such as digital cameras and recording pens besides pens and note-books at the interview. They were deeply impressed by the first-class design of the zone, as well as beautiful trees and grass and modern buildings there.
【解析】
2．不唯一
Possible version:
The summer holiday is coming. Our class have had a discussion about what to do during the holiday.
Some are in favor of staying at home. They think it’s both convenient and comfortable. What’s more, they can save money for other purpose. But they will lose chance of getting to know the outside world.
However, others prefer to got out for traveling, because it can increase their knowledge. Besides, traveling can broaden their horizons. But they will spend more money and meet some difficulties while traveling. Above all, no one can be sure of their safety.
In my opinion, it would be much better to stay at home. I can do what I like, such as reading books, watching TV and helping my parents with the housework.
【解析】
試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，暑假來(lái)臨。你班同學(xué)討論了假期的計(jì)劃，提出了不同的看法。請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示寫(xiě)一篇有關(guān)討論的英語(yǔ)短文，并談?wù)勀愕目捶āＰ枰膬?nèi)容已經(jīng)，但是寫(xiě)作時(shí)不要僅僅對(duì)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來(lái)更充實(shí)，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括，缺一不可。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問(wèn)題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。
Since I heard you have got into the habit of smoking, I have been very worried.
You see, not only does smoking waste your money and time, but it is harmful to your health physically and mentally. As a high school student, you should study hard and stop smoking immediately. Although it is hard to get rid of smoking, I hope you will follow my advice.
First， choose a day when you feel relaxed to throw away all your cigarettes and make a list of all benefits you can get from stopping smoking. Then, reread the benefits to remind yourself when you want to smoke again. Finally, do some sports every day and you are sure to succeed.
I hope my advice will be useful.
Best wishes.
Yours sincerely
Li Hu
【解析】
試題分析：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，首先表明自己對(duì)這件事的看法，可從金錢、時(shí)間及其健康方面進(jìn)行闡述吸煙的危害，再舉例對(duì)其進(jìn)行說(shuō)明，寫(xiě)作中注意使用平時(shí)積累的“起承轉(zhuǎn)合”的連詞，使用萬(wàn)能句型造句，最后提出自己的建議。提建議時(shí)可使用firstly, secondly, finally等分開(kāi)闡述，以顯得層次分明。
4．
I am Li Ming of Senior Three, Guangming Middle School. I am writing to tell you about some symptoms of anxiety among us students before exams.
Most of us feel nervous whenever we’re taking an important exam. Some will feel dizzy or tired, some will suffer from lack of sleep, and some will lose their appetite. In fact, all these symptoms have terrible effects on our exams and we are all eager to get rid of them.
First of all, in my opinion, it’s important for us to have a fight attitude towards exams. They are only a means of checking how we are getting along with our studies, so there is no need to worry too much about the results. Study hard every day and make careful plans for every exam. In this way we can avoid suffering from the pressure of exams.?
Besides, enough sleep can make us energetic and enable us to perform well in an exam. Therefore, during the period of exams, we should not stay up too late. We can also try a warm bath or a cup of warm milk before going to bed. They might help us to have a sound sleep.
(We’d better go out for a walk or do some outdoor exercises before and during an exam so that we can keep ourselves relaxed and then concentrate ourselves on exams.)
【解析】
試題分析：本文的屬于提綱類寫(xiě)作，是關(guān)于考試焦慮癥的相關(guān)內(nèi)容，話題切合考生實(shí)際，與考生的生活非常貼近，考生有話可說(shuō)，有很強(qiáng)的可寫(xiě)性。要點(diǎn)是以提綱的形式給出的，要求考生有較強(qiáng)的整合能力，在寫(xiě)作時(shí)充分利用連接詞，高級(jí)句型和詞匯，如果可能在文章結(jié)尾運(yùn)用諺語(yǔ)，以使文章的層次更高。首先應(yīng)該用合適的連接詞把考試焦慮癥的癥狀寫(xiě)清楚，在發(fā)表個(gè)人建議的時(shí)候，可以適當(dāng)使用高級(jí)的句式和高級(jí)的詞匯來(lái)給文章增色。在自己的個(gè)人建議中可以加入諺語(yǔ)，讓文章更上一層樓。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】范文使用了很多詞組：suffer from 遭受，lack of缺乏，be eager to 渴望，get rid of消除，getting along with相處， in my opinion在我看來(lái), stay up熬夜，還使用了不少精典句式，如：Most of us feel nervous whenever we’re taking an important exam. 這句話用了讓步狀語(yǔ)從句， it’s important for us to have a fight attitude towards exams. 這句話用了it做形式主語(yǔ)， there is no need to worry too much about the results.這句話用了固定句型， We can also try a warm bath or a cup of warm milk before going to bed. 這句話用了省略句， (We’d better go out for a walk or do some outdoor exercises before and during an exam so that we can keep ourselves relaxed and then concentrate ourselves on exams.) 這句話用了結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句，還有文章還使用了First of all, Besides,這樣的關(guān)聯(lián)詞使文章更加連貫。
Dear Helen,
Thank you for your email. Now I would like to tell you something about the extracurricular reading in our school. I’m sorry to say that most of the students in our school haven’t realized the importance of reading, especially extracurricular reading, as a result, the time and energy students devoted to reading are very limited. Besides, some students prefer to read cartoons, magazines and newspapers rather than classic reading materials.
I think the reasons behind that are various. First of all, quite a lot of students are burdened with too much homework. Still others haven’t formed a habit of reading. They would rather spend their spare time on TV or on the Internet.
However, reading has many benefits. Through reading we can learn more about the world. Reading can help us think better and make our life more colorful. So it is quite necessary for the students to take up reading and for the teachers to limit the amount of our homework so that we can have more time to read.
Best wishes!
Yours
Lihua
【解析】
試題分析：考查半開(kāi)放性作文寫(xiě)作。是關(guān)于中學(xué)生課外閱讀情況在保證內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)全部概括的基礎(chǔ)上可以充分發(fā)揮自己的想象，進(jìn)而用自己的語(yǔ)言來(lái)表達(dá)某種觀點(diǎn)或看法，增添了寫(xiě)作的靈活性，同時(shí)能較好地考生的想象能力和英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)言表達(dá)能力
1．
來(lái)自你市的中學(xué)生小記者最近進(jìn)行了一次采訪活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面表格中的內(nèi)容為你校的英語(yǔ)園地寫(xiě)一篇報(bào)道。
時(shí)間 2007年1月15日
地點(diǎn) 經(jīng)濟(jì)開(kāi)發(fā)區(qū)
采訪人 40名中學(xué)小記者
被采訪人 開(kāi)發(fā)區(qū)主任王慶海
采訪內(nèi)容 過(guò)去一年的成績(jī)
如何吸引投資
三年后開(kāi)發(fā)區(qū)的前景
其他 1．除了筆、本，還用了數(shù)碼相機(jī)、錄音筆等現(xiàn)代設(shè)備
2．對(duì)一流的設(shè)計(jì)、漂亮的綠化、現(xiàn)代的建筑留下了深刻的印象
：經(jīng)濟(jì)開(kāi)發(fā)區(qū)the Economic Development Zone；小記者teenage report；投資investment；數(shù)碼digital；錄音筆recording pen；
2．書(shū)面表達(dá)（滿分2分）
暑假來(lái)臨。你班同學(xué)討論了假期的計(jì)劃，提出了不同的看法。請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示寫(xiě)一篇有關(guān)討論的英語(yǔ)短文，并談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?/p>
優(yōu)點(diǎn) 缺點(diǎn)
待在家中 花費(fèi)少；方便舒適 不能親身了解外界
外出旅游 增長(zhǎng)見(jiàn)識(shí)；開(kāi)闊眼界 花費(fèi)多；旅途不便；擔(dān)心安全
假如你叫李華，最近收到好朋友Mike的來(lái)信，得知他染上了吸煙的習(xí)慣，你很為他擔(dān)心。請(qǐng)給他寫(xiě)一封信。
1．表明自己的看法； 2．談?wù)勎鼰煹奈：Γ膳e例說(shuō)明）； 3．提出至少兩條建議。
注意：
1、短文須寫(xiě)在答題卡的指定區(qū)域。
2、短文詞數(shù)不少于100。
3、內(nèi)容充實(shí)，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，語(yǔ)意連貫。
4、書(shū)寫(xiě)需清晰、工整。
5、首句已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Since I heard you have got into the habit of smoking,
4．假如你是李明，你發(fā)現(xiàn)部分同學(xué)每次遇到重要考試，都會(huì)出現(xiàn)一些焦慮癥狀。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一封信，向某學(xué)生英文報(bào)編輯反映該問(wèn)題。信的內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括下列要點(diǎn)：?
?焦慮癥狀： 頭暈、乏力、睡眠不好、食欲不振等
?建?議：
1．考前制定好合適的復(fù)習(xí)計(jì)劃
?
2．考試期間正常作息?
?
3．睡前洗熱水澡、喝熱牛奶等有助于睡眠
?其他建議：
(內(nèi)容由考生自己擬定2點(diǎn))?
?注意：
1.根據(jù)以上內(nèi)容寫(xiě)一篇短文，不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫。
2.要準(zhǔn)確使用語(yǔ)法和詞匯；使用一定的句型、詞匯，清楚、連貫地表達(dá)自己的意思；
3.?詞數(shù)：100個(gè)左右。開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)詞數(shù)。
參考詞匯：頭暈—dizzy(adj.)??
Dear?editor,??
? I’m?Li?Ming?of?Senior?Three,?Guangming?Middle?School.?I’m?writing?to?tell?you?about?some?
symptoms?of?anxiety?among?us?students?before?exams.?__________________________________?
?_______________________________________________________________________________?
?_____________________________________________________________________________?
Li?Ming? ??
5．假定你是李華，你的英國(guó)筆友Helen正在寫(xiě)一關(guān)各國(guó)中學(xué)生課外閱讀情況的調(diào)查報(bào)告。她給你發(fā)了一封電子郵件，想了解相關(guān)情況。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，給她回一封電子郵件。
2．原因分析；
3．你的看法。
注意： 1．根據(jù)所給提示，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮, 要求內(nèi)容充實(shí)，語(yǔ)意連貫。
3．郵件中不得提及考生所在學(xué)校及本人姓名。
Dear Helen,
Thank you for your email. Now I would like to tell you something about the extracurricular reading in our school. ______________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours
Lihua
參考答案
1．
Forty teenage reporters from different middle schools in our city paid a visit to the Economic Development Zone and had an interview with Wang Qinghai, head of the Zone, on January 15th, 2007.
At the interview, the reporters asked Mr Wang about what achievements they made last year, how they were to attract more investment and how the zone would be developing over the next three years. Mr Wang gave them satisfactory answers.
They used modern equipment, such as digital cameras and recording pens besides pens and note-books at the interview. They were deeply impressed by the first-class design of the zone, as well as beautiful trees and grass and modern buildings there.
【解析】
2．不唯一
Possible version:
The summer holiday is coming. Our class have had a discussion about what to do during the holiday.
Some are in favor of staying at home. They think it’s both convenient and comfortable. What’s more, they can save money for other purpose. But they will lose chance of getting to know the outside world.
However, others prefer to got out for traveling, because it can increase their knowledge. Besides, traveling can broaden their horizons. But they will spend more money and meet some difficulties while traveling. Above all, no one can be sure of their safety.
In my opinion, it would be much better to stay at home. I can do what I like, such as reading books, watching TV and helping my parents with the housework.
【解析】
試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，暑假來(lái)臨。你班同學(xué)討論了假期的計(jì)劃，提出了不同的看法。請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示寫(xiě)一篇有關(guān)討論的英語(yǔ)短文，并談?wù)勀愕目捶āＰ枰膬?nèi)容已經(jīng)，但是寫(xiě)作時(shí)不要僅僅對(duì)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來(lái)更充實(shí)，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括，缺一不可。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問(wèn)題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。
Since I heard you have got into the habit of smoking, I have been very worried.
You see, not only does smoking waste your money and time, but it is harmful to your health physically and mentally. As a high school student, you should study hard and stop smoking immediately. Although it is hard to get rid of smoking, I hope you will follow my advice.
First， choose a day when you feel relaxed to throw away all your cigarettes and make a list of all benefits you can get from stopping smoking. Then, reread the benefits to remind yourself when you want to smoke again. Finally, do some sports every day and you are sure to succeed.
I hope my advice will be useful.
Best wishes.
Yours sincerely
Li Hu
【解析】
試題分析：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，首先表明自己對(duì)這件事的看法，可從金錢、時(shí)間及其健康方面進(jìn)行闡述吸煙的危害，再舉例對(duì)其進(jìn)行說(shuō)明，寫(xiě)作中注意使用平時(shí)積累的“起承轉(zhuǎn)合”的連詞，使用萬(wàn)能句型造句，最后提出自己的建議。提建議時(shí)可使用firstly, secondly, finally等分開(kāi)闡述，以顯得層次分明。
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I am Li Ming of Senior Three, Guangming Middle School. I am writing to tell you about some symptoms of anxiety among us students before exams.
Most of us feel nervous whenever we’re taking an important exam. Some will feel dizzy or tired, some will suffer from lack of sleep, and some will lose their appetite. In fact, all these symptoms have terrible effects on our exams and we are all eager to get rid of them.
First of all, in my opinion, it’s important for us to have a fight attitude towards exams. They are only a means of checking how we are getting along with our studies, so there is no need to worry too much about the results. Study hard every day and make careful plans for every exam. In this way we can avoid suffering from the pressure of exams.?
Besides, enough sleep can make us energetic and enable us to perform well in an exam. Therefore, during the period of exams, we should not stay up too late. We can also try a warm bath or a cup of warm milk before going to bed. They might help us to have a sound sleep.
(We’d better go out for a walk or do some outdoor exercises before and during an exam so that we can keep ourselves relaxed and then concentrate ourselves on exams.)
【解析】
試題分析：本文的屬于提綱類寫(xiě)作，是關(guān)于考試焦慮癥的相關(guān)內(nèi)容，話題切合考生實(shí)際，與考生的生活非常貼近，考生有話可說(shuō)，有很強(qiáng)的可寫(xiě)性。要點(diǎn)是以提綱的形式給出的，要求考生有較強(qiáng)的整合能力，在寫(xiě)作時(shí)充分利用連接詞，高級(jí)句型和詞匯，如果可能在文章結(jié)尾運(yùn)用諺語(yǔ)，以使文章的層次更高。首先應(yīng)該用合適的連接詞把考試焦慮癥的癥狀寫(xiě)清楚，在發(fā)表個(gè)人建議的時(shí)候，可以適當(dāng)使用高級(jí)的句式和高級(jí)的詞匯來(lái)給文章增色。在自己的個(gè)人建議中可以加入諺語(yǔ)，讓文章更上一層樓。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】范文使用了很多詞組：suffer from 遭受，lack of缺乏，be eager to 渴望，get rid of消除，getting along with相處， in my opinion在我看來(lái), stay up熬夜，還使用了不少精典句式，如：Most of us feel nervous whenever we’re taking an important exam. 這句話用了讓步狀語(yǔ)從句， it’s important for us to have a fight attitude towards exams. 這句話用了it做形式主語(yǔ)， there is no need to worry too much about the results.這句話用了固定句型， We can also try a warm bath or a cup of warm milk before going to bed. 這句話用了省略句， (We’d better go out for a walk or do some outdoor exercises before and during an exam so that we can keep ourselves relaxed and then concentrate ourselves on exams.) 這句話用了結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句，還有文章還使用了First of all, Besides,這樣的關(guān)聯(lián)詞使文章更加連貫。
Dear Helen,
Thank you for your email. Now I would like to tell you something about the extracurricular reading in our school. I’m sorry to say that most of the students in our school haven’t realized the importance of reading, especially extracurricular reading, as a result, the time and energy students devoted to reading are very limited. Besides, some students prefer to read cartoons, magazines and newspapers rather than classic reading materials.
I think the reasons behind that are various. First of all, quite a lot of students are burdened with too much homework. Still others haven’t formed a habit of reading. They would rather spend their spare time on TV or on the Internet.
However, reading has many benefits. Through reading we can learn more about the world. Reading can help us think better and make our life more colorful. So it is quite necessary for the students to take up reading and for the teachers to limit the amount of our homework so that we can have more time to read.
Best wishes!
Yours
Lihua
【解析】
試題分析：考查半開(kāi)放性作文寫(xiě)作。是關(guān)于中學(xué)生課外閱讀情況在保證內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)全部概括的基礎(chǔ)上可以充分發(fā)揮自己的想象，進(jìn)而用自己的語(yǔ)言來(lái)表達(dá)某種觀點(diǎn)或看法，增添了寫(xiě)作的靈活性，同時(shí)能較好地考生的想象能力和英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)言表達(dá)能力
