2024年高考英語高效書面表達(dá)專題卷：2（含解析）
1．熱點(diǎn)七：低碳經(jīng)濟(jì)下的環(huán)境保護(hù)（1）
“低碳經(jīng)濟(jì)”是一個(gè)具有廣泛社會(huì)性的經(jīng)濟(jì)前沿理念，最早是在2003年英國(guó)政府發(fā)布的能源白皮書《我們能源的未來：創(chuàng)建低碳經(jīng)濟(jì)》正式提出的。低碳經(jīng)濟(jì)包括低碳發(fā)展、低碳產(chǎn)業(yè)、低碳技術(shù)和低碳生活等經(jīng)濟(jì)形態(tài)，是指在不影響經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展的前提下，通過技術(shù)創(chuàng)新和制度創(chuàng)新，降低能源和資源消耗，盡可能最大限度地減少溫室氣體和污染物的排放，實(shí)現(xiàn)減緩氣候變化的目標(biāo)，促進(jìn)人類的可持續(xù)發(fā)展。
Protection of Environment
1. 目前環(huán)保還存在著許多問題。
2. 為了保護(hù)環(huán)境，3. 各國(guó)政府做了大量的工作。
4. 我的看法。
2．假設(shè)你叫李華，你的澳大利亞朋友 Peter 來信談了他最喜愛的體育運(yùn)動(dòng)，并希望了解中國(guó)人喜愛的體育運(yùn)動(dòng)。 請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示用英語寫一封回信。 要點(diǎn)如下：
感謝Peter 的來信；
體育運(yùn)動(dòng)在中國(guó)受重視的程度；
運(yùn)動(dòng)形式多種多樣：老年人早上練氣功 (Qigong); 中年人晚上跳舞；青年人游泳、滑冰等；
最流行的運(yùn)動(dòng)是球類運(yùn)動(dòng)，尤其是乒乓球和籃球。
注意： 詞數(shù)100~120。
3．假如你叫李華，你的美國(guó)筆友John在來信中談到低碳生活這個(gè)話題。最近幾個(gè)月你校倡導(dǎo)學(xué)生過低碳生活、過節(jié)約生活、做有責(zé)任感的公民，引導(dǎo)學(xué)生從出行、購(gòu)物、用水、家電和餐具使用等方面反省自己的生活方式。請(qǐng)你用英文給John回信。回信要點(diǎn)如下：
1.你對(duì)低碳生活的理解；
2.你校開展的活動(dòng)；
3.你最近生活方式的改變(至少選取三個(gè)方面)
注意：1.詞數(shù)120左右；
2.參考詞匯：低碳生活low carbon life(style)
3.信的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好(不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))
Dear John
How are things going last letter you talked about low carbon life. Now I’d like to share my understanding of it and my experience in the past few months.
————————————————————————————————————————
————————————————————————————————————————
I’m really glad to communicate with you about this topic.
Yours，
Li Hua
’s all go out for food safety”為標(biāo)題根據(jù)下表提示完成一篇短文。
話題 食品安全已經(jīng)引起極大關(guān)注
原因 廠商唯利是圖，生產(chǎn)偽劣垃圾食品
濫用農(nóng)藥和添加劑
認(rèn)真對(duì)待食品安全 廠商：既關(guān)注利潤(rùn)，也關(guān)注質(zhì)量
監(jiān)督員：嚴(yán)控安全標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，嚴(yán)罰不良廠商
消費(fèi)者：盡量選擇綠色食品
注意：①避免直譯，要求層次清楚，內(nèi)容連貫。
②字?jǐn)?shù)120字左右。
參考詞匯：
添加劑：addictive
嚴(yán)厲：severely
監(jiān)督員：supervisor
消費(fèi)者：consumer
5．假設(shè)你是Tom,你在澳大利亞時(shí)參加了一個(gè)野生動(dòng)物之旅，但你對(duì)這次旅行很不滿意，并想將你的錢要回一半。仔細(xì)閱讀下面的宣傳冊(cè)以及你在旁邊所做的說明，然后給公司寫一封信，要求包含所有的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn),可適當(dāng)增減細(xì)節(jié)。
注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；2. 不要出現(xiàn)真實(shí)地址及姓名。
參考詞匯：tropical 熱帶的；binoculars 雙筒望遠(yuǎn)鏡
TROPICAL TOURS
One day tropical tour $80
Relax and enjoy a unique experience!
Explore unspoilt(未受破壞的) rainforest and waterfalls .
Observe an amazing variety of wildlife.
travel by luxury air-conditioned bus
pick up from and return to your hotel
experienced guide
swimming and guided rainforest walk
morning and afternoon refreshments(點(diǎn)心)and a tropical lunch
We supply binoculars –a must for bird watching
What to bring: walking shoes, bathing suit, towel, camera + plenty of spare film
Dear manager，
Sincerely yours,
Tom
參考答案
1．
There are still many problems of environmental protection in recent years. One of the most serious problems is the serious pollution of air, water and soil. the polluted air does great harm to people’s health. The polluted water causes diseases and death. What is more, vegetation had been greatly reduced with the rapid growth of modern cities.
To protect the environment, governments of many countries have done a lot. Legislative steps have been introduced to control air pollution, to protect the forest and sea resources and to stop any environmental pollution. Therefore, governments are playing the most important role in the environmental protection today.
In my opinion, to protect environment, the government must take even more concrete measures. First, it should let people fully realize the importance of environmental protection through education. Second, much more efforts should be made to put the population planning policy into practice, because more people means more people means more pollution. Finally, those who destroy the environment intentionally should be severely punished. We should let them know that destroying environment means destroying mankind themselves.
【解析】
2．略
【解析】略
3．
How are things going? In your last letter you talked about low carbon life. Now I’d like to share my understanding of it and my experience in the past few months.
With the environment problem coming into attention, it is extremely important that we take action to protect our planet. As more people are determined to make a difference, low carbon lifestyle provides us with the perfect opportunity to do it.
Interestingly, our school called on us students to develop a low carbon lifestyle and become a responsible citizen several months ago. In response to the appeal, I have made some changes in my way of life, which range from transportation to water saving. For example, instead of asking my parents to drive me to school, I take a bus to and from school. Just like my schoolmates, I now refuse to use disposable chopsticks. At home, I even persuade my parents to reuse water, even though it is not so convenient. The TV and the computer are important entertainment for my family, but we sometimes read instead, which, I think, may help relieve the shortage of electricity.
I’m really glad to communicate with you about this topic.
Yours,
LiHua
【】
試題分析：本文是篇材料作文，，對(duì)低碳生活的理解校開展的活動(dòng)最近生活方式的改變?nèi)齻€(gè)最近生活方式的改變
【亮點(diǎn)說明】For example, instead of asking my parents to drive me to school, I take a bus to and from school.”就達(dá)20個(gè)字。全文共8句(不包括所給的部分)，涉及簡(jiǎn)單句3個(gè)，復(fù)合句5個(gè)，開頭句和最后依據(jù)非常吸引人的眼球。開頭句中用了“with”復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)“With the environment problem coming into attention”，還用了非常靚麗的復(fù)合句 “it is extremely important that we take action to protect our planet”.最后一句更是錯(cuò)綜復(fù)雜：總體說，這是一個(gè)復(fù)合句，由主句“The TV and the computer are important entertainment for my family, but we sometimes read instead”加“which”引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句“which, I think, may help relieve the shortage of electricity”；主句中包含了并列句“but we sometimes read instead”；該句中還用了一個(gè)插入語“I think”對(duì)整個(gè)長(zhǎng)句起到了緩沖的作用。短語“make a difference，In response to，range from transportation to water saving”等的使用也彰顯了作者扎實(shí)的語言基本功。
4．?One possible version:
Let us all go out for food safety
It is frequently reported that poisonous food causes deaths, so food safety had been drawing the public’s great attention.
Food problems mainly lie in the two factors. On the one hand, some food producers lack social conscience. Centering on money, they produce lots of fake and junk food; On the other hand, other producers are short of common sense on food safety, thus poison and addictive abuse pollutes food.
For the sake of health, we must take food safety seriously. Firstly, food producers shall pay more attention to food quality, and they are required to care about food safety as well as profits; Secondly, food supervisors shall operate strict food standards and punish the ill producers severely; Lastly, consumers had better go to regular markets to choose green food.
【解析】 略
5．
I’m writing to you about the tropical tour I went on last Friday. I have some complaints about it.
First of all, it was hot last Friday, but the air conditioner didn’t work in the so-called luxury air-conditioned bus, which made us mad. What’s worse, it sent us back to our hotel so late--one and a half hours late that we missed our dinner. In addition, although your experienced guide knows the area well, she couldn’t make herself heard among the crowd. Last but not least, when watching the birds, there were not enough binoculars for everyone, so some of us lost the chance to watch those beautiful birds. It was terrible.
I hope you will agree that what you did is far from what you advertised. I would be grateful if you could send us an apology together with half of the cost of the tour.
Looking forward for your reply.
Sincerely yours,
Tom
【解析】
試題分析：這是一篇提綱類書面表達(dá)，該書面表達(dá)題要求考生。文章的要點(diǎn)也基本上都給出來了，而且很具體，考生要把要點(diǎn)解釋清楚，不能有遺漏。除了表達(dá)這些要點(diǎn)以外，還要闡述自己的觀點(diǎn)，這就要求考生自己拓展發(fā)揮，答題時(shí)要注意：使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；以祈使句為主；不要遺漏要點(diǎn)。注意文章的連貫性和整體性。在寫作的過程中，要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型，如強(qiáng)調(diào)句，倒裝句等，讓文章更上檔次。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】范文用了一些詞組：如, make sb. mad, What’s worse, In addition, make oneself done, Last but not least, be far from等等。句型上也是多變：’t work in the so-called luxury air-conditioned bus, which made us mad.這句話用了，
考點(diǎn)：考查提綱類書面表達(dá)
1．熱點(diǎn)七：低碳經(jīng)濟(jì)下的環(huán)境保護(hù)（1）
“低碳經(jīng)濟(jì)”是一個(gè)具有廣泛社會(huì)性的經(jīng)濟(jì)前沿理念，最早是在2003年英國(guó)政府發(fā)布的能源白皮書《我們能源的未來：創(chuàng)建低碳經(jīng)濟(jì)》正式提出的。低碳經(jīng)濟(jì)包括低碳發(fā)展、低碳產(chǎn)業(yè)、低碳技術(shù)和低碳生活等經(jīng)濟(jì)形態(tài)，是指在不影響經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展的前提下，通過技術(shù)創(chuàng)新和制度創(chuàng)新，降低能源和資源消耗，盡可能最大限度地減少溫室氣體和污染物的排放，實(shí)現(xiàn)減緩氣候變化的目標(biāo)，促進(jìn)人類的可持續(xù)發(fā)展。
Protection of Environment
1. 目前環(huán)保還存在著許多問題。
2. 為了保護(hù)環(huán)境，3. 各國(guó)政府做了大量的工作。
4. 我的看法。
2．假設(shè)你叫李華，你的澳大利亞朋友 Peter 來信談了他最喜愛的體育運(yùn)動(dòng)，并希望了解中國(guó)人喜愛的體育運(yùn)動(dòng)。 請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示用英語寫一封回信。 要點(diǎn)如下：
感謝Peter 的來信；
體育運(yùn)動(dòng)在中國(guó)受重視的程度；
運(yùn)動(dòng)形式多種多樣：老年人早上練氣功 (Qigong); 中年人晚上跳舞；青年人游泳、滑冰等；
最流行的運(yùn)動(dòng)是球類運(yùn)動(dòng)，尤其是乒乓球和籃球。
注意： 詞數(shù)100~120。
3．假如你叫李華，你的美國(guó)筆友John在來信中談到低碳生活這個(gè)話題。最近幾個(gè)月你校倡導(dǎo)學(xué)生過低碳生活、過節(jié)約生活、做有責(zé)任感的公民，引導(dǎo)學(xué)生從出行、購(gòu)物、用水、家電和餐具使用等方面反省自己的生活方式。請(qǐng)你用英文給John回信。回信要點(diǎn)如下：
1.你對(duì)低碳生活的理解；
2.你校開展的活動(dòng)；
3.你最近生活方式的改變(至少選取三個(gè)方面)
注意：1.詞數(shù)120左右；
2.參考詞匯：低碳生活low carbon life(style)
3.信的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好(不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))
Dear John
How are things going last letter you talked about low carbon life. Now I’d like to share my understanding of it and my experience in the past few months.
————————————————————————————————————————
————————————————————————————————————————
I’m really glad to communicate with you about this topic.
Yours，
Li Hua
’s all go out for food safety”為標(biāo)題根據(jù)下表提示完成一篇短文。
話題 食品安全已經(jīng)引起極大關(guān)注
原因 廠商唯利是圖，生產(chǎn)偽劣垃圾食品
濫用農(nóng)藥和添加劑
認(rèn)真對(duì)待食品安全 廠商：既關(guān)注利潤(rùn)，也關(guān)注質(zhì)量
監(jiān)督員：嚴(yán)控安全標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，嚴(yán)罰不良廠商
消費(fèi)者：盡量選擇綠色食品
注意：①避免直譯，要求層次清楚，內(nèi)容連貫。
②字?jǐn)?shù)120字左右。
參考詞匯：
添加劑：addictive
嚴(yán)厲：severely
監(jiān)督員：supervisor
消費(fèi)者：consumer
5．假設(shè)你是Tom,你在澳大利亞時(shí)參加了一個(gè)野生動(dòng)物之旅，但你對(duì)這次旅行很不滿意，并想將你的錢要回一半。仔細(xì)閱讀下面的宣傳冊(cè)以及你在旁邊所做的說明，然后給公司寫一封信，要求包含所有的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn),可適當(dāng)增減細(xì)節(jié)。
注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；2. 不要出現(xiàn)真實(shí)地址及姓名。
參考詞匯：tropical 熱帶的；binoculars 雙筒望遠(yuǎn)鏡
TROPICAL TOURS
One day tropical tour $80
Relax and enjoy a unique experience!
Explore unspoilt(未受破壞的) rainforest and waterfalls .
Observe an amazing variety of wildlife.
travel by luxury air-conditioned bus
pick up from and return to your hotel
experienced guide
swimming and guided rainforest walk
morning and afternoon refreshments(點(diǎn)心)and a tropical lunch
We supply binoculars –a must for bird watching
What to bring: walking shoes, bathing suit, towel, camera + plenty of spare film
Dear manager，
Sincerely yours,
Tom
參考答案
1．
There are still many problems of environmental protection in recent years. One of the most serious problems is the serious pollution of air, water and soil. the polluted air does great harm to people’s health. The polluted water causes diseases and death. What is more, vegetation had been greatly reduced with the rapid growth of modern cities.
To protect the environment, governments of many countries have done a lot. Legislative steps have been introduced to control air pollution, to protect the forest and sea resources and to stop any environmental pollution. Therefore, governments are playing the most important role in the environmental protection today.
In my opinion, to protect environment, the government must take even more concrete measures. First, it should let people fully realize the importance of environmental protection through education. Second, much more efforts should be made to put the population planning policy into practice, because more people means more people means more pollution. Finally, those who destroy the environment intentionally should be severely punished. We should let them know that destroying environment means destroying mankind themselves.
【解析】
2．略
【解析】略
3．
How are things going? In your last letter you talked about low carbon life. Now I’d like to share my understanding of it and my experience in the past few months.
With the environment problem coming into attention, it is extremely important that we take action to protect our planet. As more people are determined to make a difference, low carbon lifestyle provides us with the perfect opportunity to do it.
Interestingly, our school called on us students to develop a low carbon lifestyle and become a responsible citizen several months ago. In response to the appeal, I have made some changes in my way of life, which range from transportation to water saving. For example, instead of asking my parents to drive me to school, I take a bus to and from school. Just like my schoolmates, I now refuse to use disposable chopsticks. At home, I even persuade my parents to reuse water, even though it is not so convenient. The TV and the computer are important entertainment for my family, but we sometimes read instead, which, I think, may help relieve the shortage of electricity.
I’m really glad to communicate with you about this topic.
Yours,
LiHua
【】
試題分析：本文是篇材料作文，，對(duì)低碳生活的理解校開展的活動(dòng)最近生活方式的改變?nèi)齻€(gè)最近生活方式的改變
【亮點(diǎn)說明】For example, instead of asking my parents to drive me to school, I take a bus to and from school.”就達(dá)20個(gè)字。全文共8句(不包括所給的部分)，涉及簡(jiǎn)單句3個(gè)，復(fù)合句5個(gè)，開頭句和最后依據(jù)非常吸引人的眼球。開頭句中用了“with”復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)“With the environment problem coming into attention”，還用了非常靚麗的復(fù)合句 “it is extremely important that we take action to protect our planet”.最后一句更是錯(cuò)綜復(fù)雜：總體說，這是一個(gè)復(fù)合句，由主句“The TV and the computer are important entertainment for my family, but we sometimes read instead”加“which”引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句“which, I think, may help relieve the shortage of electricity”；主句中包含了并列句“but we sometimes read instead”；該句中還用了一個(gè)插入語“I think”對(duì)整個(gè)長(zhǎng)句起到了緩沖的作用。短語“make a difference，In response to，range from transportation to water saving”等的使用也彰顯了作者扎實(shí)的語言基本功。
4．?One possible version:
Let us all go out for food safety
It is frequently reported that poisonous food causes deaths, so food safety had been drawing the public’s great attention.
Food problems mainly lie in the two factors. On the one hand, some food producers lack social conscience. Centering on money, they produce lots of fake and junk food; On the other hand, other producers are short of common sense on food safety, thus poison and addictive abuse pollutes food.
For the sake of health, we must take food safety seriously. Firstly, food producers shall pay more attention to food quality, and they are required to care about food safety as well as profits; Secondly, food supervisors shall operate strict food standards and punish the ill producers severely; Lastly, consumers had better go to regular markets to choose green food.
【解析】 略
5．
I’m writing to you about the tropical tour I went on last Friday. I have some complaints about it.
First of all, it was hot last Friday, but the air conditioner didn’t work in the so-called luxury air-conditioned bus, which made us mad. What’s worse, it sent us back to our hotel so late--one and a half hours late that we missed our dinner. In addition, although your experienced guide knows the area well, she couldn’t make herself heard among the crowd. Last but not least, when watching the birds, there were not enough binoculars for everyone, so some of us lost the chance to watch those beautiful birds. It was terrible.
I hope you will agree that what you did is far from what you advertised. I would be grateful if you could send us an apology together with half of the cost of the tour.
Looking forward for your reply.
Sincerely yours,
Tom
【解析】
試題分析：這是一篇提綱類書面表達(dá)，該書面表達(dá)題要求考生。文章的要點(diǎn)也基本上都給出來了，而且很具體，考生要把要點(diǎn)解釋清楚，不能有遺漏。除了表達(dá)這些要點(diǎn)以外，還要闡述自己的觀點(diǎn)，這就要求考生自己拓展發(fā)揮，答題時(shí)要注意：使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；以祈使句為主；不要遺漏要點(diǎn)。注意文章的連貫性和整體性。在寫作的過程中，要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型，如強(qiáng)調(diào)句，倒裝句等，讓文章更上檔次。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】范文用了一些詞組：如, make sb. mad, What’s worse, In addition, make oneself done, Last but not least, be far from等等。句型上也是多變：’t work in the so-called luxury air-conditioned bus, which made us mad.這句話用了，
考點(diǎn)：考查提綱類書面表達(dá)
