2024屆高考英語二輪短文改錯專項突破：短文改錯集訓（14）
2024高考英語-短文改錯集訓（十四）
【專項突破】短文改錯
假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同學寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（）,并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。
Passage 1
Xie Lei told me that she feels much more at home in England now, and that had seemed very strange ago now appears quite normal. “I’ve just got one more thing achieve. I have been very occupied to work that I haven’t had time for social activities. I think it’s important to have a balance in study and a social life, so I’m going to join in a few clubs. Hopeful I’ll make some new friends.”
We will follow Xie Lei’s progresses in later editions of this newspaper but for now, we wish Xie Lei all the best in his new enterprise. She deserves to succeed.
Passage 2
Good relationships between teachers or students are important to teaching and learning Only with good relationships can student and teachers cooperate well.
Good relationships depended on both sides. On the one hand, students should respect teachers and our hard work. They should polite Co teachers and ready to following their advice. On an other hand, teachers should be kindly, friendly and patient to students. They must be responsible on their teaching and help students. If both sides treat10 each other in a friendly way, teaching and learning in class will be highly efficient.
Passage 3
The news which the English Entrance Examination will be reformed has caused a big “earthquake” in our country. Many people, included students, are for it. But there are also some people are against it. Then, is it better to do so or not? Personally, I think the reform has between advantages and disadvantages. On the one hand, it can reduce students’ learn burden and enable English to return back to its true function. On the other hand, it will cause students to spend less time on studying English and to attached less importance to English. If so, students will not have a good knowledge of English. What’s more, if students don’t have so a good ability, they will not be able to broaden our horizon and meet the future challenges.
Passage 4
Recently, smog weather has became more and more serious in parts of China. People forced to wear masks to avoid breathe poisonous air. To settle this problem, the series of measures should be taken. First, we should enact(頒布) more strict law on environmental protection to regulate the industrial punish those factories what ignore the protection. Second, we should develop environmentally-friendly products to improve air quality. Besides, people should build up protection awareness to form a habit by using green products or saving energy. In my opinion, if we all act together, their environment will become more better.
Passage 5
One year ago, I had a special English lesson hold at the railway station．It was quite different
from the regular English classes we were familiar to, for we had no textbooks, no blackboard or no
fixed seats．
Gathering at the entrance of the station, we told to collect as many English words and
sentences as possible here．Curious and excited, we walked around the station and looked
everywhere, search for any information in English．Whenever an English word comes into sight, the
class would burst into the cheers as if we had discovered a new world．With the Chinese translation
and vividly pictures, we could figure out its meaning with ease．
Now, this unforgettable lesson still encourages me to be an active learner where I go．
Passage 6
Generally speaking, I’m a person who have the ability to control myself. Whether at school and at
home, I can be aware of the dos and don’ts and always focus on my study, so I am the one of the top students in my class. Besides, whenever I meet with anything or somebody unpleasant, I can calm down and only in this way can I get along good with others.
I think it is determination what is of great importance if you want to improve your self-control.In order control yourself easily and effectively, you are supposed to make some rule to follow. Also you’d better ask others to keep an eye on yourself, which makes the difference in helping you be responsible to what you do.
Passage 7
This afternoon 1 went to see my grandfather by a bus．It was very crowded and I had to stand．Besides me，there was a woman hold a little boy in her arms．In front of her, a young man occupies two seats，pretending to be sleeping．I heard the little boy curious asking his mother, “What’s wrong with the uncle?” I had thought if perhaps the woman would blame the man．Beyond her expectations，the woman answered with a smile，“Be quiet．This uncle must very tired because of hard work．”The young man must have heard the word．His face turned red but offered one seat to the woman at once．
2024高考英語-短文改錯集訓（十四）答案
Passage 1
Xie Lei told me that she feels much more at home in England now, and that
what
had seemed very strange ago now appears quite normal. “I’ve just got one
before
more thing ∧achieve. I have been very occupied to work that I haven’t had time for
to
so
with
social activities. I think it’s important to have a balance in study and a social life,
between
so I’m going to join in a few clubs. Hopeful I’ll make some new friends.”
Hopefully
We will follow Xie Lei’s progresses in later editions of this newspaper but for now,
progress
we wish Xie Lei all the best in his new enterprise. She deserves to succeed.
her
Passage 2
Good relationships between teachers or students are important to teaching and learning. Only
and
with good relationships can student and teachers cooperate well.
students
Good relationships depended on both sides. On the one hand, students should respect teachers
depend
and our hard work. They should ^ polite to teachers and ready to following their advice. On an other
their
be
follow
the
hand, teachers should be kindly, friendly and patient to students. They must be responsible on their
kind
for
teaching and help students. If both sides treat to each other in a friendly way, teaching and learning
去掉to
in class will be highly efficient.
Passage 3
1. which-that
2. included-including
3. people后加who
4. between-both
5. learn-learning
6. back刪掉
7. on-in 或刪掉on
8. attached-attach
9. so-such
10. our-their
Passage 4
1.became改為become
2.people后加are
3.breathe改為breathing
4.the改為a
5.law改為laws
6. what改為that/which
7.by改為of
8.or改為and
9.their改為our
10.去掉more或more改為much
Passage 5
71.hold改為held
72.familiar to改為familiar with
73.or改為and
74.told前加were
75.here改為there
76.search改為searching
77.comes改為came
78.cheers前面the去掉79.vividly改為vivid
80.where改為wherever
Passage 6
1.have改為has
2.and改為or
3.am后the去掉
4.anything改為ssomething
5.good改為well
6.what改為that
7.order后加to
8.rule改為rules
9.the改為a
10.to改為for
Passage 7 This afternoon I went to see my grandfather by a bus. It was very crowded and I
had to stand. Besides me, there was a woman hold a little boy in her arms. In front of
Beside
holding
her, a young man occupies two seats, pretending to be sleeping. I heard the little boy
occupied
curious asking his mother, “What’s wrong with the uncle?” I had thought if perhaps
curiously
that或去掉if
the woman would blame the man. Beyond her expectations, the woman answered with
my
a smile, “Be quiet. This uncle must∧ very tired because of hard work.” The young
be
man must have heard the word. His face turned red but offered one seat to the woman at once.
words
and
2024高考英語-短文改錯集訓（十四）
【專項突破】短文改錯
假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同學寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（）,并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。
Passage 1
Xie Lei told me that she feels much more at home in England now, and that had seemed very strange ago now appears quite normal. “I’ve just got one more thing achieve. I have been very occupied to work that I haven’t had time for social activities. I think it’s important to have a balance in study and a social life, so I’m going to join in a few clubs. Hopeful I’ll make some new friends.”
We will follow Xie Lei’s progresses in later editions of this newspaper but for now, we wish Xie Lei all the best in his new enterprise. She deserves to succeed.
Passage 2
Good relationships between teachers or students are important to teaching and learning Only with good relationships can student and teachers cooperate well.
Good relationships depended on both sides. On the one hand, students should respect teachers and our hard work. They should polite Co teachers and ready to following their advice. On an other hand, teachers should be kindly, friendly and patient to students. They must be responsible on their teaching and help students. If both sides treat10 each other in a friendly way, teaching and learning in class will be highly efficient.
Passage 3
The news which the English Entrance Examination will be reformed has caused a big “earthquake” in our country. Many people, included students, are for it. But there are also some people are against it. Then, is it better to do so or not? Personally, I think the reform has between advantages and disadvantages. On the one hand, it can reduce students’ learn burden and enable English to return back to its true function. On the other hand, it will cause students to spend less time on studying English and to attached less importance to English. If so, students will not have a good knowledge of English. What’s more, if students don’t have so a good ability, they will not be able to broaden our horizon and meet the future challenges.
Passage 4
Recently, smog weather has became more and more serious in parts of China. People forced to wear masks to avoid breathe poisonous air. To settle this problem, the series of measures should be taken. First, we should enact(頒布) more strict law on environmental protection to regulate the industrial punish those factories what ignore the protection. Second, we should develop environmentally-friendly products to improve air quality. Besides, people should build up protection awareness to form a habit by using green products or saving energy. In my opinion, if we all act together, their environment will become more better.
Passage 5
One year ago, I had a special English lesson hold at the railway station．It was quite different
from the regular English classes we were familiar to, for we had no textbooks, no blackboard or no
fixed seats．
Gathering at the entrance of the station, we told to collect as many English words and
sentences as possible here．Curious and excited, we walked around the station and looked
everywhere, search for any information in English．Whenever an English word comes into sight, the
class would burst into the cheers as if we had discovered a new world．With the Chinese translation
and vividly pictures, we could figure out its meaning with ease．
Now, this unforgettable lesson still encourages me to be an active learner where I go．
Passage 6
Generally speaking, I’m a person who have the ability to control myself. Whether at school and at
home, I can be aware of the dos and don’ts and always focus on my study, so I am the one of the top students in my class. Besides, whenever I meet with anything or somebody unpleasant, I can calm down and only in this way can I get along good with others.
I think it is determination what is of great importance if you want to improve your self-control.In order control yourself easily and effectively, you are supposed to make some rule to follow. Also you’d better ask others to keep an eye on yourself, which makes the difference in helping you be responsible to what you do.
Passage 7
This afternoon 1 went to see my grandfather by a bus．It was very crowded and I had to stand．Besides me，there was a woman hold a little boy in her arms．In front of her, a young man occupies two seats，pretending to be sleeping．I heard the little boy curious asking his mother, “What’s wrong with the uncle?” I had thought if perhaps the woman would blame the man．Beyond her expectations，the woman answered with a smile，“Be quiet．This uncle must very tired because of hard work．”The young man must have heard the word．His face turned red but offered one seat to the woman at once．
2024高考英語-短文改錯集訓（十四）答案
Passage 1
Xie Lei told me that she feels much more at home in England now, and that
what
had seemed very strange ago now appears quite normal. “I’ve just got one
before
more thing ∧achieve. I have been very occupied to work that I haven’t had time for
to
so
with
social activities. I think it’s important to have a balance in study and a social life,
between
so I’m going to join in a few clubs. Hopeful I’ll make some new friends.”
Hopefully
We will follow Xie Lei’s progresses in later editions of this newspaper but for now,
progress
we wish Xie Lei all the best in his new enterprise. She deserves to succeed.
her
Passage 2
Good relationships between teachers or students are important to teaching and learning. Only
and
with good relationships can student and teachers cooperate well.
students
Good relationships depended on both sides. On the one hand, students should respect teachers
depend
and our hard work. They should ^ polite to teachers and ready to following their advice. On an other
their
be
follow
the
hand, teachers should be kindly, friendly and patient to students. They must be responsible on their
kind
for
teaching and help students. If both sides treat to each other in a friendly way, teaching and learning
去掉to
in class will be highly efficient.
Passage 3
1. which-that
2. included-including
3. people后加who
4. between-both
5. learn-learning
6. back刪掉
7. on-in 或刪掉on
8. attached-attach
9. so-such
10. our-their
Passage 4
1.became改為become
2.people后加are
3.breathe改為breathing
4.the改為a
5.law改為laws
6. what改為that/which
7.by改為of
8.or改為and
9.their改為our
10.去掉more或more改為much
Passage 5
71.hold改為held
72.familiar to改為familiar with
73.or改為and
74.told前加were
75.here改為there
76.search改為searching
77.comes改為came
78.cheers前面the去掉79.vividly改為vivid
80.where改為wherever
Passage 6
1.have改為has
2.and改為or
3.am后the去掉
4.anything改為ssomething
5.good改為well
6.what改為that
7.order后加to
8.rule改為rules
9.the改為a
10.to改為for
Passage 7 This afternoon I went to see my grandfather by a bus. It was very crowded and I
had to stand. Besides me, there was a woman hold a little boy in her arms. In front of
Beside
holding
her, a young man occupies two seats, pretending to be sleeping. I heard the little boy
occupied
curious asking his mother, “What’s wrong with the uncle?” I had thought if perhaps
curiously
that或去掉if
the woman would blame the man. Beyond her expectations, the woman answered with
my
a smile, “Be quiet. This uncle must∧ very tired because of hard work.” The young
be
man must have heard the word. His face turned red but offered one seat to the woman at once.
words
and
