2024屆高考英語二輪短文改錯專項突破：短文改錯集訓（15）
【專項突破】2024高考英語-短文改錯集訓（十五）
【專項突破】短文改錯
假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同學寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（）,并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。
Passage 1
On a snowy winter night, a bus with 45 passenger had an accident because the wet road. And all of them were trapping in the bus and what is worse, the bus ran out of gas and it was very cold in it. They could do nothing but to wait for help. A man who lived nearby saw that had happened. He and some villagers succeeded in open the door and helped all of them out of the bus. He took them to his home but offered food and water and even some warm clothes to the children. They spent two days in their home and finally help came. All of them were thankfully for their help.
Passage 2
A foreign student graduated with honors from a finely university in Germany. He expected to find a good job and have a bright future. But in his disappointment, he wasn't even giving the chance for an interview! The third time he was refused, he phoned the company to ask how. "We don't employ dishonest people in Germany" is the answer. What was wrong? Shortly before he arrived in Germany, he found easy to steal subway rides. But he often rode without a ticket and was caught up three times. Now he had to pay a high price for his own behavior. We should all keep in minds: honesty is the best policy.
Passage 3
One year ago,I had a special English lesson hold at the railway station. It was quite different
from the regular English classes we were familiar to, for we had no textbooks, no blackboard or no
fixed seats.
Gathering at the entrance of the station, we told to collect as many English words and
sentences as possible here. Curious and excited, we walked around the station and looked
everywhere, search for any information in English. Whenever an English word comes into sight, the
class would burst into the cheers as if we had discovered a new world. With the Chinese translation
and vividly pictures, we could figure out its meaning with ease.
Now, this unforgettable lesson still encourages me to be an active learner where I go.
Passage 4
Dear Mandy，
Pm not doing well in my lessons at school，especial in maths. My dad says I must try hard
because he wants me go to university. He thinks I'm lazy，but it's not true. I work really hard，
often study late into the night！I've tried to talk to my mother，but she always said I have to work
as hard like my brother does. My brother doesn't study very hard，and he always gets excellent
grades. It's not fair！
The only thing I like it is art. My teacher says rm the best student she's had for year. When
I told my dad，all he said was，“You mustn't waste your time in art. You must focus your mind
on your lessons！”Pm feeling quite puzzling what to do now．Would you please help me out?
Thanks a lot！
Yours sincerely，
Lisa
Passage 5
There’s an old man in our village calling Old Joe who said to be 110 years old. This can’t be proved though he doesn’t have a birth certificate. All his personal papers were destroy during the World War II. I don’t know if he really is so old, and it doesn’t matter. He certainly looks very old. Of course, he is often asked question by people who want to be told the secret of long life. Old Joe always answered them like this, “If you are offered a cigarette, never accept it; if you are annoyed by someone, never lose his temper; and if you are asked foolishly questions, never answer them.”
Passage 6
Dear Jin Jing，
Your problem is common one among middle school students．Maybe the following advices can help you．First in all, believe in yourself．Your greatest problem is that you lack self-confidence．The first thing you must do it is to smile at your classmates．One smile speaks loud about your wish to make friends than any words．Your smile will show that you are friendly to him．Next, trying talking with a student who is as shy as you or who share the same interest as you．You can discuss your studies with a classmate and you can also talk about your hobbies．Unless anyone is in trouble, you should be ready to help him or her．Once you have confidence, you can make as many friends as possibly．
Yours,
Lily
2024高考英語-短文改錯集訓（十五）答案
Passage 1
On a snowy winter night , a bus with 45 passenger had an accident because
the
passengers wet road .And all of them were trapping in the bus and what is worse, the bus ran out
trapped
was
of gas and it was very cold in it. They could do nothing but
to
wait for help . A man who
lived nearby saw that had happened . He and some villagers succeeded in open the
what
opening
door and helped all of them out of the bus .He took them to his home but offered food
and
and water and even some warm clothes to the children . They spent two days in their
his
home and finally help came . All of them were thankfully for their help.
thankful
Passage 2
A foreign student graduated with honors from a finely university in Germany. He expected to
fine
find a good job and have a bright future. But in his disappointment, he wasn't even giving the
to
given
chance for an interview! The third time he was refused, he phoned the company to ask how. "We
why
don't employ dishonest people in Germany" is the answer. What was wrong? Shortly before he
was
after
arrived in Germany, he found∧easy to steal subway rides. But he often rode without a ticket and
it
So
was caught up three times. Now he had to pay a high price for his own behavior. We should all
keep in minds: honesty is the best policy.
mind
Passage 3
One year ago, I had a special English lesson hold at Shijiazhuang Railway Station. It was quite different
held
from the regular English classes we were familiar to, for we had no textbooks, no blackboard or no
with
and
fixed seats.
Gathering at the entrance of the station, wetold to collect as many English words and
were
sentences as possible here. Curious and excited, we walked around the station and looked
there
everywhere, search for any information in English. Whenever an English word comes into sight, the
searching
came
class would burst into the cheers as if we had discovered a new world. With the Chinese translation
and vividly pictures, we could figure out its meaning with ease.
vivid
Now, this unforgettable lesson still encourages me to be an active learner where I go.
wherever
Passage 4
Dear Mandy,
I’m not doing well in my lessons at school, especial in maths. My dad says I must try hard
especially
because he wants me ∧ go to university. He thinks I’m lazy, but it’s not true. I work really hard,
to
often study late into the night! I’ve tried to talk to my mother, but she always said I have to work
studying
says
as hard like my brother does. My brother doesn’t study very hard, and he always gets excellent
as
but
grades. It’s not fair!
The only thing I like it is art. My teacher says I’m the best student she’s had for year. When
years
I told my dad, all he said was, “You mustn’t waste your time in art. You must focus your mind on
on / over
your lessons!” I’m feeling quite puzzling what to do now. Would you please help me out? Thanks
puzzled
a lot!
Yours sincerely,
Lisa
Passage 5
試題分析：題目主要考查學生對冠詞、名詞、并列連詞、形容詞、過去分詞、定語從句、狀語從句、時態
等語法知識的掌握情況。
【小題51】考查過去分詞作定語。man和call之間是動賓關系，即一個被叫做......的人，應該用過去分詞作定語，故把calling改為called。
【小題52】考查定語從句。who引導一個定語從句，sb be said to be/do sth據說某人......，根據“There’s an old man”可知短文用的是一般現在時，故在who和said之間加is。
【小題53】考查狀語從句。句意：這得不到證明，因為他沒有出生證明。前后是因果關系，故把though改為because。
【小題54】考查被動語態。papers和destroy是動賓關系，即文件被毀壞，故用被動語態，故把destroy改為destroyed。
【小題55】考查冠詞。World War II二戰，是專有名詞，前面不需要冠詞，故把the去掉。
【小題56】考查并列連詞。句意：我不知道他是不是真的有那么大年紀了，但這無關緊要。前后是轉折關系，故把and改為but。
【小題57】考查名詞。經常有人問他問題，question問題，是可數名詞，被問過的問題不止一個，應該用復數形式，故把question改為questions。
【小題58】考查時態。always與一般現在時連用，且根據“There’s an old man...I don’t know...he is often...who want to...”可知，短文使用的是一般現在時，故把answered改為answers。
【小題59】考查物主代詞。根據“if you are annoyed...”可知，這里說的是“你”，即第二人稱you，應該用形容詞性物主代詞your，故把his改為your。
【小題60】考查形容詞作定語。副詞修飾動詞、形容詞或句子；形容詞作定語修飾名詞，這里修飾名詞questions，應該用形容詞，故把foolishly改為foolish。
考點：考查冠詞；名詞；并列連詞；形容詞；過去分詞；定語從句；狀語從句；時態
Passage 6
1.is后加a
2.advices改為advice
3.first in改為first of
4.去掉it
5.loud改為louder
6.him改為them
7.trying改為try
8.share改為shares
9.Unless改為If
10.possibly改為possible
【專項突破】2024高考英語-短文改錯集訓（十五）
【專項突破】短文改錯
假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同學寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（）,并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。
Passage 1
On a snowy winter night, a bus with 45 passenger had an accident because the wet road. And all of them were trapping in the bus and what is worse, the bus ran out of gas and it was very cold in it. They could do nothing but to wait for help. A man who lived nearby saw that had happened. He and some villagers succeeded in open the door and helped all of them out of the bus. He took them to his home but offered food and water and even some warm clothes to the children. They spent two days in their home and finally help came. All of them were thankfully for their help.
Passage 2
A foreign student graduated with honors from a finely university in Germany. He expected to find a good job and have a bright future. But in his disappointment, he wasn't even giving the chance for an interview! The third time he was refused, he phoned the company to ask how. "We don't employ dishonest people in Germany" is the answer. What was wrong? Shortly before he arrived in Germany, he found easy to steal subway rides. But he often rode without a ticket and was caught up three times. Now he had to pay a high price for his own behavior. We should all keep in minds: honesty is the best policy.
Passage 3
One year ago,I had a special English lesson hold at the railway station. It was quite different
from the regular English classes we were familiar to, for we had no textbooks, no blackboard or no
fixed seats.
Gathering at the entrance of the station, we told to collect as many English words and
sentences as possible here. Curious and excited, we walked around the station and looked
everywhere, search for any information in English. Whenever an English word comes into sight, the
class would burst into the cheers as if we had discovered a new world. With the Chinese translation
and vividly pictures, we could figure out its meaning with ease.
Now, this unforgettable lesson still encourages me to be an active learner where I go.
Passage 4
Dear Mandy，
Pm not doing well in my lessons at school，especial in maths. My dad says I must try hard
because he wants me go to university. He thinks I'm lazy，but it's not true. I work really hard，
often study late into the night！I've tried to talk to my mother，but she always said I have to work
as hard like my brother does. My brother doesn't study very hard，and he always gets excellent
grades. It's not fair！
The only thing I like it is art. My teacher says rm the best student she's had for year. When
I told my dad，all he said was，“You mustn't waste your time in art. You must focus your mind
on your lessons！”Pm feeling quite puzzling what to do now．Would you please help me out?
Thanks a lot！
Yours sincerely，
Lisa
Passage 5
There’s an old man in our village calling Old Joe who said to be 110 years old. This can’t be proved though he doesn’t have a birth certificate. All his personal papers were destroy during the World War II. I don’t know if he really is so old, and it doesn’t matter. He certainly looks very old. Of course, he is often asked question by people who want to be told the secret of long life. Old Joe always answered them like this, “If you are offered a cigarette, never accept it; if you are annoyed by someone, never lose his temper; and if you are asked foolishly questions, never answer them.”
Passage 6
Dear Jin Jing，
Your problem is common one among middle school students．Maybe the following advices can help you．First in all, believe in yourself．Your greatest problem is that you lack self-confidence．The first thing you must do it is to smile at your classmates．One smile speaks loud about your wish to make friends than any words．Your smile will show that you are friendly to him．Next, trying talking with a student who is as shy as you or who share the same interest as you．You can discuss your studies with a classmate and you can also talk about your hobbies．Unless anyone is in trouble, you should be ready to help him or her．Once you have confidence, you can make as many friends as possibly．
Yours,
Lily
2024高考英語-短文改錯集訓（十五）答案
Passage 1
On a snowy winter night , a bus with 45 passenger had an accident because
the
passengers wet road .And all of them were trapping in the bus and what is worse, the bus ran out
trapped
was
of gas and it was very cold in it. They could do nothing but
to
wait for help . A man who
lived nearby saw that had happened . He and some villagers succeeded in open the
what
opening
door and helped all of them out of the bus .He took them to his home but offered food
and
and water and even some warm clothes to the children . They spent two days in their
his
home and finally help came . All of them were thankfully for their help.
thankful
Passage 2
A foreign student graduated with honors from a finely university in Germany. He expected to
fine
find a good job and have a bright future. But in his disappointment, he wasn't even giving the
to
given
chance for an interview! The third time he was refused, he phoned the company to ask how. "We
why
don't employ dishonest people in Germany" is the answer. What was wrong? Shortly before he
was
after
arrived in Germany, he found∧easy to steal subway rides. But he often rode without a ticket and
it
So
was caught up three times. Now he had to pay a high price for his own behavior. We should all
keep in minds: honesty is the best policy.
mind
Passage 3
One year ago, I had a special English lesson hold at Shijiazhuang Railway Station. It was quite different
held
from the regular English classes we were familiar to, for we had no textbooks, no blackboard or no
with
and
fixed seats.
Gathering at the entrance of the station, wetold to collect as many English words and
were
sentences as possible here. Curious and excited, we walked around the station and looked
there
everywhere, search for any information in English. Whenever an English word comes into sight, the
searching
came
class would burst into the cheers as if we had discovered a new world. With the Chinese translation
and vividly pictures, we could figure out its meaning with ease.
vivid
Now, this unforgettable lesson still encourages me to be an active learner where I go.
wherever
Passage 4
Dear Mandy,
I’m not doing well in my lessons at school, especial in maths. My dad says I must try hard
especially
because he wants me ∧ go to university. He thinks I’m lazy, but it’s not true. I work really hard,
to
often study late into the night! I’ve tried to talk to my mother, but she always said I have to work
studying
says
as hard like my brother does. My brother doesn’t study very hard, and he always gets excellent
as
but
grades. It’s not fair!
The only thing I like it is art. My teacher says I’m the best student she’s had for year. When
years
I told my dad, all he said was, “You mustn’t waste your time in art. You must focus your mind on
on / over
your lessons!” I’m feeling quite puzzling what to do now. Would you please help me out? Thanks
puzzled
a lot!
Yours sincerely,
Lisa
Passage 5
試題分析：題目主要考查學生對冠詞、名詞、并列連詞、形容詞、過去分詞、定語從句、狀語從句、時態
等語法知識的掌握情況。
【小題51】考查過去分詞作定語。man和call之間是動賓關系，即一個被叫做......的人，應該用過去分詞作定語，故把calling改為called。
【小題52】考查定語從句。who引導一個定語從句，sb be said to be/do sth據說某人......，根據“There’s an old man”可知短文用的是一般現在時，故在who和said之間加is。
【小題53】考查狀語從句。句意：這得不到證明，因為他沒有出生證明。前后是因果關系，故把though改為because。
【小題54】考查被動語態。papers和destroy是動賓關系，即文件被毀壞，故用被動語態，故把destroy改為destroyed。
【小題55】考查冠詞。World War II二戰，是專有名詞，前面不需要冠詞，故把the去掉。
【小題56】考查并列連詞。句意：我不知道他是不是真的有那么大年紀了，但這無關緊要。前后是轉折關系，故把and改為but。
【小題57】考查名詞。經常有人問他問題，question問題，是可數名詞，被問過的問題不止一個，應該用復數形式，故把question改為questions。
【小題58】考查時態。always與一般現在時連用，且根據“There’s an old man...I don’t know...he is often...who want to...”可知，短文使用的是一般現在時，故把answered改為answers。
【小題59】考查物主代詞。根據“if you are annoyed...”可知，這里說的是“你”，即第二人稱you，應該用形容詞性物主代詞your，故把his改為your。
【小題60】考查形容詞作定語。副詞修飾動詞、形容詞或句子；形容詞作定語修飾名詞，這里修飾名詞questions，應該用形容詞，故把foolishly改為foolish。
考點：考查冠詞；名詞；并列連詞；形容詞；過去分詞；定語從句；狀語從句；時態
Passage 6
1.is后加a
2.advices改為advice
3.first in改為first of
4.去掉it
5.loud改為louder
6.him改為them
7.trying改為try
8.share改為shares
9.Unless改為If
10.possibly改為possible
