gre argument190提綱分析匯總

　　前段時間為gre考生匯總了gre issue寫作提綱思路和分析，希望對考生在攻破gre issue寫作上有所幫助。接下來的幾天我們將為gre考生整理gre argument部分的提綱內容。希望通過我們的整理和匯總，讓gre考生真正能掌握gre寫作的精髓。

　　題目題材：商業經營

　　gre argument 190題目：

　　The following is a letter to the editor of the Glenville Gazette, a local newspaper.

　　Over the past few years, the number of people who have purchased advance tickets for the Glenville Summer Concert series has declined, indicating lack of community support. Although the weather has been unpredictable in the past few years, this cannot be the reason for the decline in advance ticket purchases, because many people attended the concerts even in bad weather. Clearly, then, the reason for the decline is the choice of music, so the organizers of the concert should feature more modern music in the future and should be sure to include music composed by Richerts, whose recordings Glenville residents purchase more often than any other contemporary recordings. This strategy will undoubtedly increase advance ticket purchases and will increase attendance at the concerts.

　　提綱：

　　The author unfairly assumes that the decline in the sales of advance tickets will continue in the following years.

　　The number of people who purchased advance tickets does not necessarily indicate the actual attendance at the concerts.

　　The author fails to convince us that the lack of community support is the reason for the decline in the sales of advance tickets.

　　The author fails to rule out the possibility that many other people did not attend the concert because of the weather.

　　The author unfairly assumes that it is the choice of music is responsible for the lack of community support.

　　Granted that it is necessary to change the music featured on the concert, we cannot assess if the organizers should provide more modern music.

　　The fact that Richerts recordings are popular in music stores does not indicate that his music will also be preferred on the concert. Perhaps his music is not suitable for live performance, or perhaps people who purchase recordings are not the same group that would attend live concerts, or many people would not go to the concert just because they already have too many Richerts recordings.

　　The author unfairly assumes that the proposed actions are both necessary and sufficient to increase advance ticket purchases and attendance at the concerts.

　　注：題目中括號里的數字表明這句話體現的是提綱中第幾號缺陷。

　　無論是gre issue還是gre argument，考生都應該養成寫提綱的習慣。這種提綱式的gre寫作練習可以幫助考生鍛煉寫作的邏輯性，而gre寫作高分最重要的得分依據就是作文的邏輯性要強。

　　前段時間為gre考生匯總了gre issue寫作提綱思路和分析，希望對考生在攻破gre issue寫作上有所幫助。接下來的幾天我們將為gre考生整理gre argument部分的提綱內容。希望通過我們的整理和匯總，讓gre考生真正能掌握gre寫作的精髓。

　　題目題材：商業經營

　　gre argument 190題目：

　　The following is a letter to the editor of the Glenville Gazette, a local newspaper.

　　Over the past few years, the number of people who have purchased advance tickets for the Glenville Summer Concert series has declined, indicating lack of community support. Although the weather has been unpredictable in the past few years, this cannot be the reason for the decline in advance ticket purchases, because many people attended the concerts even in bad weather. Clearly, then, the reason for the decline is the choice of music, so the organizers of the concert should feature more modern music in the future and should be sure to include music composed by Richerts, whose recordings Glenville residents purchase more often than any other contemporary recordings. This strategy will undoubtedly increase advance ticket purchases and will increase attendance at the concerts.

　　提綱：

　　The author unfairly assumes that the decline in the sales of advance tickets will continue in the following years.

　　The number of people who purchased advance tickets does not necessarily indicate the actual attendance at the concerts.

　　The author fails to convince us that the lack of community support is the reason for the decline in the sales of advance tickets.

　　The author fails to rule out the possibility that many other people did not attend the concert because of the weather.

　　The author unfairly assumes that it is the choice of music is responsible for the lack of community support.

　　Granted that it is necessary to change the music featured on the concert, we cannot assess if the organizers should provide more modern music.

　　The fact that Richerts recordings are popular in music stores does not indicate that his music will also be preferred on the concert. Perhaps his music is not suitable for live performance, or perhaps people who purchase recordings are not the same group that would attend live concerts, or many people would not go to the concert just because they already have too many Richerts recordings.

　　The author unfairly assumes that the proposed actions are both necessary and sufficient to increase advance ticket purchases and attendance at the concerts.

　　注：題目中括號里的數字表明這句話體現的是提綱中第幾號缺陷。

　　無論是gre issue還是gre argument，考生都應該養成寫提綱的習慣。這種提綱式的gre寫作練習可以幫助考生鍛煉寫作的邏輯性，而gre寫作高分最重要的得分依據就是作文的邏輯性要強。