gre argument230提綱分析匯總

　　前段時間為gre考生匯總了gre issue寫作提綱思路和分析，希望對考生在攻破gre issue寫作上有所幫助。接下來的幾天我們將為gre考生整理gre argument部分的提綱內容。希望通過我們的整理和匯總，讓gre考生真正能掌握gre寫作的精髓。

　　題目題材：城市，社會

　　gre argument 230題目：

　　The following appeared in a recommendation from the planning department of the city of Transopolis.

　　Ten years ago, as part of a comprehensive urban renewal program, the city of Transopolis adapted for industrial use a large area of severely substandard housing near the freeway. Subsequently, several factories were constructed there, crime rates in the area declined, and property tax revenues for the entire city increased. To further revitalize the city, we should now take similar action in a declining residential area on the opposite side of the city. Since some houses and apartments in existing nearby neighborhoods are currently unoccupied, alternate housing for those displaced by this action will be readily available.

　　提綱：

　　The author unfairly assumes that the prosperity of the area results from the industrialization.

　　The increase in overall property-tax revenue does not necessarily indicate an increase in tax revenue from properties in the freeway area.

　　The author fails to demonstrate that the residential area on the opposite side of the city is suitable for industrial use.

　　The two areas may not be comparable at many aspects, thus taking similar action in the area may not generate the same good effects.

　　The author fails to substantiate the necessity of adapt more area for industrial use.

　　Taking the same action in the area may not sufficiently revitalize the city.

　　Other possible solutions could also be used to revitalize the city.

　　The author fails to consider the cost of the proposed action, and if the city could afford it.

　　Many factors that would influence the effectiveness of the action would have changed during the past decade.

　　The author fails to consider if the residents of the area are willing to be allocated to those houses and apartments.

　　注：題目中括號里的數字表明這句話體現的是提綱中第幾號缺陷。

　　無論是gre issue還是gre argument，考生都應該養成寫提綱的習慣。這種提綱式的gre寫作練習可以幫助考生鍛煉寫作的邏輯性，而gre寫作高分最重要的得分依據就是作文的邏輯性要強。

　　前段時間為gre考生匯總了gre issue寫作提綱思路和分析，希望對考生在攻破gre issue寫作上有所幫助。接下來的幾天我們將為gre考生整理gre argument部分的提綱內容。希望通過我們的整理和匯總，讓gre考生真正能掌握gre寫作的精髓。

　　題目題材：城市，社會

　　gre argument 230題目：

　　The following appeared in a recommendation from the planning department of the city of Transopolis.

　　Ten years ago, as part of a comprehensive urban renewal program, the city of Transopolis adapted for industrial use a large area of severely substandard housing near the freeway. Subsequently, several factories were constructed there, crime rates in the area declined, and property tax revenues for the entire city increased. To further revitalize the city, we should now take similar action in a declining residential area on the opposite side of the city. Since some houses and apartments in existing nearby neighborhoods are currently unoccupied, alternate housing for those displaced by this action will be readily available.

　　提綱：

　　The author unfairly assumes that the prosperity of the area results from the industrialization.

　　The increase in overall property-tax revenue does not necessarily indicate an increase in tax revenue from properties in the freeway area.

　　The author fails to demonstrate that the residential area on the opposite side of the city is suitable for industrial use.

　　The two areas may not be comparable at many aspects, thus taking similar action in the area may not generate the same good effects.

　　The author fails to substantiate the necessity of adapt more area for industrial use.

　　Taking the same action in the area may not sufficiently revitalize the city.

　　Other possible solutions could also be used to revitalize the city.

　　The author fails to consider the cost of the proposed action, and if the city could afford it.

　　Many factors that would influence the effectiveness of the action would have changed during the past decade.

　　The author fails to consider if the residents of the area are willing to be allocated to those houses and apartments.

　　注：題目中括號里的數字表明這句話體現的是提綱中第幾號缺陷。

　　無論是gre issue還是gre argument，考生都應該養成寫提綱的習慣。這種提綱式的gre寫作練習可以幫助考生鍛煉寫作的邏輯性，而gre寫作高分最重要的得分依據就是作文的邏輯性要強。