gre argument203提綱分析匯總
前段時間為gre考生匯總了gre issue寫作提綱思路和分析，希望對考生在攻破gre issue寫作上有所幫助。接下來的幾天我們將為gre考生整理gre argument部分的提綱內(nèi)容。希望通過我們的整理和匯總，讓gre考生真正能掌握gre寫作的精髓。
題目題材：醫(yī)療衛(wèi)生
gre argument 203題目：
The following appeared in a newspaper feature story.
At the small, nonprofit hospital in the town of Saluda, the average length of a patients stay is two days; at the large, for-profit hospital in the nearby city of Megaville, the average patient stay is six days. Also, the cure rate among patients in the Saluda hospital is about twice that of the Megaville hospital. The Saluda hospital has more employees per patient than the hospital in Megaville, and there are few complaints about service at the local hospital. Such data indicate that treatment in smaller, nonprofit hospitals is more economical and of better quality than treatment in larger, for-profit hospitals.
提綱：
The time length of a patients stay is not a good indication of the quality of treatment in the hospital.
Other factors might also explain the shorter length of patient stay and higher cure rate in the Saluda hospital.
We do not know the severity of illness among patients in the Saluda hospital and in Megaville hospital, thus cannot evaluate the cure rate in the two hospitals.
More employees per patient and few complaints do not necessarily indicate that treatment in Saluda hospital is better than that in Megaville hospital.
A higher employee-patient ratio may just indicate organizational inefficiency at Saluda.
Without the total number of patients going to each hospital, we cannot evaluate what percentage of their patients complained.
The author fails to provide the actual expenditures of patients in the two hospitals, thus the assumption that treatment in smaller, nonprofit hospital is more economical is unwarranted.
The author hastily generalizes that treatment in other smaller, nonprofit hospitals will necessarily be more economical and of better quality than that in larger, for-profit hospitals.
注：題目中括號里的數(shù)字表明這句話體現(xiàn)的是提綱中第幾號缺陷。
無論是gre issue還是gre argument，考生都應(yīng)該養(yǎng)成寫提綱的習(xí)慣。這種提綱式的gre寫作練習(xí)可以幫助考生鍛煉寫作的邏輯性，而gre寫作高分最重要的得分依據(jù)就是作文的邏輯性要強(qiáng)。
前段時間為gre考生匯總了gre issue寫作提綱思路和分析，希望對考生在攻破gre issue寫作上有所幫助。接下來的幾天我們將為gre考生整理gre argument部分的提綱內(nèi)容。希望通過我們的整理和匯總，讓gre考生真正能掌握gre寫作的精髓。
題目題材：醫(yī)療衛(wèi)生
gre argument 203題目：
The following appeared in a newspaper feature story.
At the small, nonprofit hospital in the town of Saluda, the average length of a patients stay is two days; at the large, for-profit hospital in the nearby city of Megaville, the average patient stay is six days. Also, the cure rate among patients in the Saluda hospital is about twice that of the Megaville hospital. The Saluda hospital has more employees per patient than the hospital in Megaville, and there are few complaints about service at the local hospital. Such data indicate that treatment in smaller, nonprofit hospitals is more economical and of better quality than treatment in larger, for-profit hospitals.
提綱：
The time length of a patients stay is not a good indication of the quality of treatment in the hospital.
Other factors might also explain the shorter length of patient stay and higher cure rate in the Saluda hospital.
We do not know the severity of illness among patients in the Saluda hospital and in Megaville hospital, thus cannot evaluate the cure rate in the two hospitals.
More employees per patient and few complaints do not necessarily indicate that treatment in Saluda hospital is better than that in Megaville hospital.
A higher employee-patient ratio may just indicate organizational inefficiency at Saluda.
Without the total number of patients going to each hospital, we cannot evaluate what percentage of their patients complained.
The author fails to provide the actual expenditures of patients in the two hospitals, thus the assumption that treatment in smaller, nonprofit hospital is more economical is unwarranted.
The author hastily generalizes that treatment in other smaller, nonprofit hospitals will necessarily be more economical and of better quality than that in larger, for-profit hospitals.
注：題目中括號里的數(shù)字表明這句話體現(xiàn)的是提綱中第幾號缺陷。
無論是gre issue還是gre argument，考生都應(yīng)該養(yǎng)成寫提綱的習(xí)慣。這種提綱式的gre寫作練習(xí)可以幫助考生鍛煉寫作的邏輯性，而gre寫作高分最重要的得分依據(jù)就是作文的邏輯性要強(qiáng)。
