gre argument213提綱分析匯總

　　前段時(shí)間為gre考生匯總了gre issue寫作提綱思路和分析，希望對(duì)考生在攻破gre issue寫作上有所幫助。接下來(lái)的幾天我們將為gre考生整理gre argument部分的提綱內(nèi)容。希望通過(guò)我們的整理和匯總，讓gre考生真正能掌握gre寫作的精髓。

　　題目題材：經(jīng)營(yíng)

　　gre argument 213題目：

　　The following appeared in a memorandum from the owner of Armchair Video, a chain of video rental stores

　　Because of declining profits, we must reduce operating expenses at Armchair Videos ten video rental stores. Raising prices is not a good option , since we are famous for our special bargains. Instead, we should reduce our operating hours. Last month our store in downtown Marston reduced its hours by closing at 6:00 P.M. rather than 9:00 P.M. and reduced its overall inventory by no longer stocking any film released more than two years ago. Since we have received very few customer complaints about these new policies , we should now adopt them at all other Armchair Video stores as our best strategies for improving profits .

　　提綱：

　　The owner fails to sufficiently illustrate that why raising prices would not be a good solution for improving profits.

　　The fact that few customer complaints were received does not indicate that most customers are satisfied with these policies.

　　The new policies were implemented only one month ago, the situation of this month might not be representative of that of the whole year, or the negative effects might not have emerged yet.

　　The success of the new policies at one store does not ensure that adopting them would necessarily be successful at all other Armchair stores.

　　The owner fails to provide any information concerning the possible change in the profit of the store in Marston after the policies were adopted, thus we cannot evaluate if we should adopt them at all other stores.

　　The owner fails to consider many negative effects of the new policies.

　　There are many other possible measures we can adopt to improve profits.

　　注：題目中括號(hào)里的數(shù)字表明這句話體現(xiàn)的是提綱中第幾號(hào)缺陷。

　　無(wú)論是gre issue還是gre argument，考生都應(yīng)該養(yǎng)成寫提綱的習(xí)慣。這種提綱式的gre寫作練習(xí)可以幫助考生鍛煉寫作的邏輯性，而gre寫作高分最重要的得分依據(jù)就是作文的邏輯性要強(qiáng)。

　　前段時(shí)間為gre考生匯總了gre issue寫作提綱思路和分析，希望對(duì)考生在攻破gre issue寫作上有所幫助。接下來(lái)的幾天我們將為gre考生整理gre argument部分的提綱內(nèi)容。希望通過(guò)我們的整理和匯總，讓gre考生真正能掌握gre寫作的精髓。

　　題目題材：經(jīng)營(yíng)

　　gre argument 213題目：

　　The following appeared in a memorandum from the owner of Armchair Video, a chain of video rental stores

　　Because of declining profits, we must reduce operating expenses at Armchair Videos ten video rental stores. Raising prices is not a good option , since we are famous for our special bargains. Instead, we should reduce our operating hours. Last month our store in downtown Marston reduced its hours by closing at 6:00 P.M. rather than 9:00 P.M. and reduced its overall inventory by no longer stocking any film released more than two years ago. Since we have received very few customer complaints about these new policies , we should now adopt them at all other Armchair Video stores as our best strategies for improving profits .

　　提綱：

　　The owner fails to sufficiently illustrate that why raising prices would not be a good solution for improving profits.

　　The fact that few customer complaints were received does not indicate that most customers are satisfied with these policies.

　　The new policies were implemented only one month ago, the situation of this month might not be representative of that of the whole year, or the negative effects might not have emerged yet.

　　The success of the new policies at one store does not ensure that adopting them would necessarily be successful at all other Armchair stores.

　　The owner fails to provide any information concerning the possible change in the profit of the store in Marston after the policies were adopted, thus we cannot evaluate if we should adopt them at all other stores.

　　The owner fails to consider many negative effects of the new policies.

　　There are many other possible measures we can adopt to improve profits.

　　注：題目中括號(hào)里的數(shù)字表明這句話體現(xiàn)的是提綱中第幾號(hào)缺陷。

　　無(wú)論是gre issue還是gre argument，考生都應(yīng)該養(yǎng)成寫提綱的習(xí)慣。這種提綱式的gre寫作練習(xí)可以幫助考生鍛煉寫作的邏輯性，而gre寫作高分最重要的得分依據(jù)就是作文的邏輯性要強(qiáng)。