SAT寫(xiě)作:避免使用不完整或冗長(zhǎng)的句式
避免使用不完整或冗長(zhǎng)的句式
不完整的句式?jīng)]有獨(dú)立的從句;而冗長(zhǎng)的句式則有兩個(gè)以上的從句，而這若干從句之間并沒(méi)有恰當(dāng)?shù)劂暯印＿@兩種錯(cuò)誤都是我們應(yīng)該努力避免的，具體做法如下。
不完整的句式
正式寫(xiě)作中的每句話都必須有獨(dú)立從句。所謂獨(dú)立從句，就是包含主語(yǔ)、謂語(yǔ)，并且不以下述連詞作為句子開(kāi)頭：
After if than whenever although in order that though where as provided that unless whether because since until while before so that
錯(cuò)誤：Global warming. This is what the scientists and journalists are worried about.
正確：Global warming is the cause of concern for scientists and journalists.
注意，以并列連詞and、but、or、nor和for作為單句的開(kāi)頭，則是可以接受的。例如：
正確：Most people would agree that indigent patients should receive wonderful health care. But every treatment has its price.
冗長(zhǎng)的句式
在時(shí)間緊張的情況下，不少學(xué)生寫(xiě)出來(lái)的句子沒(méi)有標(biāo)點(diǎn)連接，或者只有逗號(hào)。例如：
Current insurance practices are unfair they discriminate against the people who need insurance most.
我們有三種修改方法：
1)標(biāo)注句號(hào)：Current insurance practices are unfair. They discriminate against the people who need insurance most.
這樣，一個(gè)獨(dú)立的句子就變成幾個(gè)獨(dú)立的從句。
2)標(biāo)注分號(hào)：Current insurance practices are unfair; they discriminate against the people who need insurance most.利用分號(hào)把具有獨(dú)立意義的句式分開(kāi)，但同時(shí)向讀者表明句子表示的含義之間存在一定聯(lián)系。
3)利用連詞：Current insurance practices are unfair in that they discriminate against the people who need insurance most.這也是最有效的修改方法，從句仍然是獨(dú)立的，同時(shí)也表明了從句之間的聯(lián)系。
出現(xiàn)冗長(zhǎng)句式還有一個(gè)原因，就是誤用however、nevertheless、furthermore、likewise、therefore等副詞。例如：
錯(cuò)誤：Current insurance practices are discriminatory, furthermore they make insurance too expensive for the poor.
正確：Current insurance practices are discriminatory. Furthermore, they make insurance too expensive for the poor.
避免使用不完整或冗長(zhǎng)的句式
不完整的句式?jīng)]有獨(dú)立的從句;而冗長(zhǎng)的句式則有兩個(gè)以上的從句，而這若干從句之間并沒(méi)有恰當(dāng)?shù)劂暯印＿@兩種錯(cuò)誤都是我們應(yīng)該努力避免的，具體做法如下。
不完整的句式
正式寫(xiě)作中的每句話都必須有獨(dú)立從句。所謂獨(dú)立從句，就是包含主語(yǔ)、謂語(yǔ)，并且不以下述連詞作為句子開(kāi)頭：
After if than whenever although in order that though where as provided that unless whether because since until while before so that
錯(cuò)誤：Global warming. This is what the scientists and journalists are worried about.
正確：Global warming is the cause of concern for scientists and journalists.
注意，以并列連詞and、but、or、nor和for作為單句的開(kāi)頭，則是可以接受的。例如：
正確：Most people would agree that indigent patients should receive wonderful health care. But every treatment has its price.
冗長(zhǎng)的句式
在時(shí)間緊張的情況下，不少學(xué)生寫(xiě)出來(lái)的句子沒(méi)有標(biāo)點(diǎn)連接，或者只有逗號(hào)。例如：
Current insurance practices are unfair they discriminate against the people who need insurance most.
我們有三種修改方法：
1)標(biāo)注句號(hào)：Current insurance practices are unfair. They discriminate against the people who need insurance most.
這樣，一個(gè)獨(dú)立的句子就變成幾個(gè)獨(dú)立的從句。
2)標(biāo)注分號(hào)：Current insurance practices are unfair; they discriminate against the people who need insurance most.利用分號(hào)把具有獨(dú)立意義的句式分開(kāi)，但同時(shí)向讀者表明句子表示的含義之間存在一定聯(lián)系。
3)利用連詞：Current insurance practices are unfair in that they discriminate against the people who need insurance most.這也是最有效的修改方法，從句仍然是獨(dú)立的，同時(shí)也表明了從句之間的聯(lián)系。
出現(xiàn)冗長(zhǎng)句式還有一個(gè)原因，就是誤用however、nevertheless、furthermore、likewise、therefore等副詞。例如：
錯(cuò)誤：Current insurance practices are discriminatory, furthermore they make insurance too expensive for the poor.
正確：Current insurance practices are discriminatory. Furthermore, they make insurance too expensive for the poor.
