SAT作文評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)解讀2:結(jié)構(gòu)分

　　SAT作文評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)解讀2:結(jié)構(gòu)分

　　滿(mǎn)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)中的第二個(gè)要求：is well organized and clearly focused, demonstrating clear coherence and smooth progression of ideas.

　　一篇完整的SAT作文結(jié)構(gòu)應(yīng)該是這樣的：

　　P1 Introductory sentence. Thesis. Sentence previewing three examples.

　　P2 Transition + topic sentence. Support sentence. Additional support (Example 1)。 Closing sentence summarizing the paragraph (with the take-away point)。

　　P3 Transition + topic sentence. Support sentence. Additional support(Example 2)。 Closing sentence summarizing the paragraph (with the take-away point)。

　　P4 Transition + topic sentence. Support sentence. Additional support (Example 3)。 Closing sentence summarizing the paragraph (with the take-away point)。

　　P5 Conclusion.

　　現(xiàn)在許多學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作的一個(gè)很大的問(wèn)題在于，開(kāi)頭段結(jié)尾段的結(jié)構(gòu)能夠得到保證，但是中間段落的Topic Sentence和 Concluding Sentence不喜歡寫(xiě)。單純的在開(kāi)頭段后舉例是不能有力的證明自己的觀(guān)點(diǎn)的。每個(gè)中間段的完整結(jié)構(gòu)必須有分支觀(guān)點(diǎn)句，支撐句和結(jié)論句。分支觀(guān)點(diǎn)句往往是例子要告訴人們的道理或者作者要通過(guò)例子表達(dá)的內(nèi)容的總括。結(jié)論句往往是對(duì)例子的分析：在這個(gè)例子中，通過(guò)什么從而使什么怎么樣。

　　通過(guò)上文提到的題目為例，以下是依據(jù)該題的一個(gè)完整中間段落：

　　If life is considered more important than honesty, lies can be justified.

　　A very representative example of this point is the story of Nicolaus Copernicus, the vanguard of modern astronomy. His idea that the earth rotates around the sun and human beings are just part of the nature was so radical at his time that the Roman Catholic Church accused him of serious crime of heresy. Knowing that he would die if he continued to tell his theory publicly, he told lies that he recanted his theory. And so he protected his life. His idea though he renounced in front of the church, he secretly continued his research. In this case, Nicolaus did not tell the truth. However, he followed his heart and he contributed tremendously to the scientific community. Circumstances justified his lies because life is much more valuable than anything else on earth.

　　黃色標(biāo)注的部分為結(jié)構(gòu)提示部分。第一個(gè)和最后一個(gè)句子是分支觀(guān)點(diǎn)句和結(jié)論句。Example所在的句子是例子的引出，in this case 舉例完后對(duì)例子的總結(jié)分析。這樣一個(gè)中間段落才稱(chēng)得上是一個(gè)結(jié)構(gòu)完整的中間段。這也是眾多考試寫(xiě)作是應(yīng)該注意的一個(gè)重要問(wèn)題。

　　SAT作文評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)解讀2:結(jié)構(gòu)分

　　滿(mǎn)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)中的第二個(gè)要求：is well organized and clearly focused, demonstrating clear coherence and smooth progression of ideas.

　　一篇完整的SAT作文結(jié)構(gòu)應(yīng)該是這樣的：

　　P1 Introductory sentence. Thesis. Sentence previewing three examples.

　　P2 Transition + topic sentence. Support sentence. Additional support (Example 1)。 Closing sentence summarizing the paragraph (with the take-away point)。

　　P3 Transition + topic sentence. Support sentence. Additional support(Example 2)。 Closing sentence summarizing the paragraph (with the take-away point)。

　　P4 Transition + topic sentence. Support sentence. Additional support (Example 3)。 Closing sentence summarizing the paragraph (with the take-away point)。

　　P5 Conclusion.

　　現(xiàn)在許多學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作的一個(gè)很大的問(wèn)題在于，開(kāi)頭段結(jié)尾段的結(jié)構(gòu)能夠得到保證，但是中間段落的Topic Sentence和 Concluding Sentence不喜歡寫(xiě)。單純的在開(kāi)頭段后舉例是不能有力的證明自己的觀(guān)點(diǎn)的。每個(gè)中間段的完整結(jié)構(gòu)必須有分支觀(guān)點(diǎn)句，支撐句和結(jié)論句。分支觀(guān)點(diǎn)句往往是例子要告訴人們的道理或者作者要通過(guò)例子表達(dá)的內(nèi)容的總括。結(jié)論句往往是對(duì)例子的分析：在這個(gè)例子中，通過(guò)什么從而使什么怎么樣。

　　通過(guò)上文提到的題目為例，以下是依據(jù)該題的一個(gè)完整中間段落：

　　If life is considered more important than honesty, lies can be justified.

　　A very representative example of this point is the story of Nicolaus Copernicus, the vanguard of modern astronomy. His idea that the earth rotates around the sun and human beings are just part of the nature was so radical at his time that the Roman Catholic Church accused him of serious crime of heresy. Knowing that he would die if he continued to tell his theory publicly, he told lies that he recanted his theory. And so he protected his life. His idea though he renounced in front of the church, he secretly continued his research. In this case, Nicolaus did not tell the truth. However, he followed his heart and he contributed tremendously to the scientific community. Circumstances justified his lies because life is much more valuable than anything else on earth.

　　黃色標(biāo)注的部分為結(jié)構(gòu)提示部分。第一個(gè)和最后一個(gè)句子是分支觀(guān)點(diǎn)句和結(jié)論句。Example所在的句子是例子的引出，in this case 舉例完后對(duì)例子的總結(jié)分析。這樣一個(gè)中間段落才稱(chēng)得上是一個(gè)結(jié)構(gòu)完整的中間段。這也是眾多考試寫(xiě)作是應(yīng)該注意的一個(gè)重要問(wèn)題。