SAT作文寫(xiě)作不可犧牲句子的可讀性
在SAT作文寫(xiě)作中一味地追求句子的長(zhǎng)度有時(shí)反而會(huì)犧牲句子的可讀性，特別是對(duì)一些基礎(chǔ)一般的學(xué)生在寫(xiě)SAT作文時(shí)，有時(shí)生硬地追求長(zhǎng)句，使用空洞的單詞和詞組反而破壞了句子的句法準(zhǔn)確性。下面我們就來(lái)看一些例子，體會(huì)一些寫(xiě)得并不成功的長(zhǎng)句和如何修改的建議：
1. 一些空洞的單詞或詞組更本不能為句子帶來(lái)任何相關(guān)的或重要的信息，完全可以被刪掉。比如下面的句子：
When all things are considered， young adults of today live more satisfying lives than those of their parents，in my opinion.
這句話當(dāng)中的when all things are considered和in my opinion都顯得多余。完全可以去掉。改為：Young adults of today live more satisfying lives than their parents.
due to the fact that就是一個(gè)很典型的繁瑣的表達(dá)方式的例子，可以替換，簡(jiǎn)化為下面的表達(dá)方式：
2. 有些空洞和繁瑣的表達(dá)方式可以進(jìn)行替換，例如：
Due to the fact that our grandparents were under an obligation to help their parents， they did not have the options that young people have at this point in time.
due to the fact that就是一個(gè)很典型的繁瑣的表達(dá)方式的例子，可以替換，簡(jiǎn)化為下面的表達(dá)方式：
Because our grandparents were obligated to help their parents，they did not have the options that young people have now.
所以說(shuō)在SAT作文寫(xiě)作中要頻繁使用空洞的單詞和詞組，讓你的句子看起來(lái)很長(zhǎng)，但是卻失去了可讀性，讓評(píng)分老師會(huì)覺(jué)得你這樣寫(xiě)很刻意而不自然，我們?cè)赟AT作文中一定要避免出現(xiàn)這種問(wèn)題。
在SAT作文寫(xiě)作中一味地追求句子的長(zhǎng)度有時(shí)反而會(huì)犧牲句子的可讀性，特別是對(duì)一些基礎(chǔ)一般的學(xué)生在寫(xiě)SAT作文時(shí)，有時(shí)生硬地追求長(zhǎng)句，使用空洞的單詞和詞組反而破壞了句子的句法準(zhǔn)確性。下面我們就來(lái)看一些例子，體會(huì)一些寫(xiě)得并不成功的長(zhǎng)句和如何修改的建議：
1. 一些空洞的單詞或詞組更本不能為句子帶來(lái)任何相關(guān)的或重要的信息，完全可以被刪掉。比如下面的句子：
When all things are considered， young adults of today live more satisfying lives than those of their parents，in my opinion.
這句話當(dāng)中的when all things are considered和in my opinion都顯得多余。完全可以去掉。改為：Young adults of today live more satisfying lives than their parents.
due to the fact that就是一個(gè)很典型的繁瑣的表達(dá)方式的例子，可以替換，簡(jiǎn)化為下面的表達(dá)方式：
2. 有些空洞和繁瑣的表達(dá)方式可以進(jìn)行替換，例如：
Due to the fact that our grandparents were under an obligation to help their parents， they did not have the options that young people have at this point in time.
due to the fact that就是一個(gè)很典型的繁瑣的表達(dá)方式的例子，可以替換，簡(jiǎn)化為下面的表達(dá)方式：
Because our grandparents were obligated to help their parents，they did not have the options that young people have now.
所以說(shuō)在SAT作文寫(xiě)作中要頻繁使用空洞的單詞和詞組，讓你的句子看起來(lái)很長(zhǎng)，但是卻失去了可讀性，讓評(píng)分老師會(huì)覺(jué)得你這樣寫(xiě)很刻意而不自然，我們?cè)赟AT作文中一定要避免出現(xiàn)這種問(wèn)題。
