高考寫作中的修飾語的問題

　　1. 我在會上作了重要的關于如何學好英語的報告。

　　誤：He gave an important talk at the meeting about how to learn English well.

　　析：此句由于修飾語的位置錯放而引起的意思模糊。從句子結構來看，很容易讓人覺得修飾語about how to learn English well像是修飾the meeting，但根據漢語句子原意，應該修飾talk.

　　2. 他說了上課遲到的原因，沒有人相信。

　　He gave a reason for his being late for school, which nobody believed.

　　析：此句也屬于修飾語的位置誤放。這種錯誤的修改法有兩種：一是使修飾語緊跟他所修飾的成分He gave a reason，which nobody believed，for his being late for school。二是重復被修飾的成分He gave a reason for his being late for school, a reason which nobody believed.

　　3. 從山上看，我們學校看起來很美。

　　誤：Seeing from the hill, our school looks very beautiful.

　　析：非謂語動詞seeing與句子的主語our school 不構成主動關系，而是被動的。非謂語動詞的錯用造成句子的不通順。因此應該為Seen from the hill, our school looks very beautiful.這是同學們寫作中最常犯的錯誤，應該引起高度重視。