英語六級熱點范文9
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Road Accidents. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline （given in Chinese） below: 1）道路事故會給人們的生命和財產帶來很大的損失 2）分析道路事故發生的主要原因 3）如何降低事故發生率 Road Accidents _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ 行文思路 本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點提出一個問題，提綱第2點要求分析造成該問題的原因，提綱第3點要求說明解決該問題的方法，由此可判斷本文應為問題解決型作文。 根據所給提綱，本文應包含如下內容：指出道路事故的嚴重性及主要危害;分析導致道路事故的主要原因;說明應該如何降低道路事故的發生率。 高分范文 Road Accidents Road accidents, [1]as one of the important social problems, have always been paid great concern. In most of the big cities, every day, there happen quite a few road accidents. In these accidents, many people suffer great property losses and some of them even lose their lives. The following reasons contribute to road accidents. Above all, traffic is becoming heavier and heavier, especially in big cities. More and more vehicles on road increase the chances of accidents. In addition, many drivers lack safety awareness and even dont comply with the traffic regulations. For example, some drivers run the red light or drive after being drunk. Besides, the weak supervision and management of traffic control sectors is a noticeable reason. Considering the seriousness of the traffic problem, it is high time for us to take more effective measures to solve it. Firstly, the government should invest more money to improve public transportation and provide more transportation ways for people to choose. Secondly, stricter laws and regulations should be made to punish those who break traffic regulations. Finally, drivers should enhance safety awareness and develop good driving manners. Only in this way could road accidents be avoided successfully. 亮點點評 [1]插入語，as意為作為?！ ”磉f進?！ ∮糜谝鲈?。 過渡銜接詞語，使文章條理清晰、銜接緊密?！ ≡黾恿说臋C會或可能性?！ ”O管不力，weak的使用準確地道?！ 】紤]到，鑒于，介詞。 用于引出解決辦法，表示解決問題的緊迫性,常譯為早該是的時候了。 only+狀語位于句首，引起句子部分倒裝?！ 〖丫渑R摹 佳句：In these accidents, many people suffer great property losses and some of them even lose their lives. 臨摹：一些人失敗后可能會變得灰心喪氣，甚至會放棄成功的希望?！ __________________________________________________________________________. 2.佳句：More and more vehicles on road increase the chances of accidents. 臨摹：許多學生認為考取的證書可以增加他們找工作的機會。 ___________________________________________________________________________. 3.佳句：It is high time for us to take more effective measures to solve it. 臨?。阂虼耍覀冊缭撽P注一下人口過剩問題了?！ __________________________________________________________________________. KEY: Some people, after a failure, may become discouraged and even give up their hope for success. Many students believe that more certificates may increase the chances of their being employed. Therefore, it is high time we paid special attention to the problem of overpopulation.
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Road Accidents. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline （given in Chinese） below: 1）道路事故會給人們的生命和財產帶來很大的損失 2）分析道路事故發生的主要原因 3）如何降低事故發生率 Road Accidents _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ 行文思路 本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點提出一個問題，提綱第2點要求分析造成該問題的原因，提綱第3點要求說明解決該問題的方法，由此可判斷本文應為問題解決型作文?！ 「鶕o提綱，本文應包含如下內容：指出道路事故的嚴重性及主要危害;分析導致道路事故的主要原因;說明應該如何降低道路事故的發生率?！ 「叻址段摹 oad Accidents Road accidents, [1]as one of the important social problems, have always been paid great concern. In most of the big cities, every day, there happen quite a few road accidents. In these accidents, many people suffer great property losses and some of them even lose their lives. The following reasons contribute to road accidents. Above all, traffic is becoming heavier and heavier, especially in big cities. More and more vehicles on road increase the chances of accidents. In addition, many drivers lack safety awareness and even dont comply with the traffic regulations. For example, some drivers run the red light or drive after being drunk. Besides, the weak supervision and management of traffic control sectors is a noticeable reason. Considering the seriousness of the traffic problem, it is high time for us to take more effective measures to solve it. Firstly, the government should invest more money to improve public transportation and provide more transportation ways for people to choose. Secondly, stricter laws and regulations should be made to punish those who break traffic regulations. Finally, drivers should enhance safety awareness and develop good driving manners. Only in this way could road accidents be avoided successfully. 亮點點評 [1]插入語，as意為作為?！ ”磉f進。 用于引出原因。 過渡銜接詞語，使文章條理清晰、銜接緊密。 增加了的機會或可能性?！ ”O管不力，weak的使用準確地道。 考慮到，鑒于，介詞?！ ∮糜谝鼋鉀Q辦法，表示解決問題的緊迫性,常譯為早該是的時候了。 only+狀語位于句首，引起句子部分倒裝?！ 〖丫渑R摹 佳句：In these accidents, many people suffer great property losses and some of them even lose their lives. 臨?。阂恍┤耸『罂赡軙兊没倚膯蕷?，甚至會放棄成功的希望。 ___________________________________________________________________________. 2.佳句：More and more vehicles on road increase the chances of accidents. 臨摹：許多學生認為考取的證書可以增加他們找工作的機會。 ___________________________________________________________________________. 3.佳句：It is high time for us to take more effective measures to solve it. 臨摹：因此，我們早該關注一下人口過剩問題了。 ___________________________________________________________________________. KEY: Some people, after a failure, may become discouraged and even give up their hope for success. Many students believe that more certificates may increase the chances of their being employed. Therefore, it is high time we paid special attention to the problem of overpopulation.
