考研英語的作文范文名師批改（九）
考研英語作文熱門話題范文：個性
In the picture above, there are four pencils but only one is adversed which is different from the others.Noticeably, there is a sentence read: dont be afraid to be different. in the middle of the photo. It is no doubt that the photographer wants us to respect the individuality.Steven Jobs, the representive of individulity, creates the brand Apple and then prodominantes intellectual mobile phone market by its products. What makes his succeed is that he put the conception of individuality into his product--iphone,which contains so many appealing Apps and each one is different from the ordinary . Therefore, he estabilished an empire of Apple and become famous for everyone around the world.Hence dont be afraid to be different because the individuality is valuabe , which is the source of creativity. More importantly, it conributes to the development of diversified world and the prosperity of culture and economy.
編輯點評
文章構思不錯，但其中的語法問題及詞匯使用問題較多，而且，考研英語作文的字數要求為160-200，本篇文章的字數不夠，望作者在以后的寫作中能夠注意;考研英語作文的寫作模式作者基本上已經掌握，后面要做的就是加強語法、詞匯，積累并模仿經典句子，不斷提高自己的寫作水平;再者，寫完之后一定要認真檢查，減少失分點。
考研英語作文熱門話題范文：個性
In the picture above, there are four pencils but only one is adversed which is different from the others.Noticeably, there is a sentence read: dont be afraid to be different. in the middle of the photo. It is no doubt that the photographer wants us to respect the individuality.Steven Jobs, the representive of individulity, creates the brand Apple and then prodominantes intellectual mobile phone market by its products. What makes his succeed is that he put the conception of individuality into his product--iphone,which contains so many appealing Apps and each one is different from the ordinary . Therefore, he estabilished an empire of Apple and become famous for everyone around the world.Hence dont be afraid to be different because the individuality is valuabe , which is the source of creativity. More importantly, it conributes to the development of diversified world and the prosperity of culture and economy.
編輯點評
文章構思不錯，但其中的語法問題及詞匯使用問題較多，而且，考研英語作文的字數要求為160-200，本篇文章的字數不夠，望作者在以后的寫作中能夠注意;考研英語作文的寫作模式作者基本上已經掌握，后面要做的就是加強語法、詞匯，積累并模仿經典句子，不斷提高自己的寫作水平;再者，寫完之后一定要認真檢查，減少失分點。
