考研英語復(fù)習(xí)資料考研英語作文范文的批改25

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　　I am a graduate from the Chinese Department of the Tianjin University.I am writing to applying for the position of a staff which you advertised in newspaper.Enclosed with the letter is my resume.

　　I am sure that I am a perfect candidate for this job.I am a careful and friendly person,and my previous training and strength fall in with this position.

　　I wish to meet with your convenience.Thank you for your time and consideration.

　　Yours turly,

　　Li Ming

　　考研英語作文批改點評如下：

　　Yours turly, Li Ming (落款部分寫在右下角) 點評：5分。第一段的內(nèi)容量與第二段的內(nèi)容量形成鮮明的對比，讓人覺得是時間不夠倉促寫出的。第一段可以簡明的寫出在哪里看到招聘信息然后應(yīng)聘什么職位。第二段寫你所學(xué)的專業(yè)、工作經(jīng)驗、個人性格等內(nèi)容。Dear Sir or Madam,

　　I am a graduate from the Chinese Department of the(去掉) Tianjin University. I am writing to applying(前邊的to是動詞不定式，這里應(yīng)該用原型) for the position of a staff which you advertised in newspaper. Enclosed with the letter is my resume.

　　I am sure that I am a perfect candidate for this job. I am a careful and friendly person, and my previous training and strength fall in with this position.

　　I wish to meet with your convenience. Thank you for your time and consideration.