考研英語復習資料考研英語作文范文的批改20
考研英語待批改作文：
Dear Sir or Madam:
Your sincerely
Li Ming
考研英語作文批改點評如下：
Dear Sir or Madam: I have got the message from internet(i大寫)which says your company needs a biologist. I wrote This(t小寫)letter to ask would I have the opportunity to have this job. I have graduated from GZ(不建議使用縮寫)University for two years, and I have got Yales P.D(不建議使用縮寫) one month ago. All the above make me have the knowledge to cope this job. I worked as an experiment assistan My interest in the position of treasurer in your corporation has prompted me to forward to my resume for your review and consideration.
I am convinced that I am right person for the job in that the three point as follow. Firstly, I have the certified public accountant qualification certificate and the Bachelor degree. Secondly, I have relevant work experience and the qualifications necessary to effectively handle the responsibilities of financial accounting. Lastly, my industrial attitudes of professional, rigorous and innovative could make me complete the task better which the company distribute.
I express my devout appreciation to you for your prompt attention. I welcome the chance to meet you to further discuss my qualification and the requirement of your company. Look forward to your reply. Thank you again.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
考研英語作文批改點評如下：
Dear Sir or Madam,
My interest in the position of treasurer in your corporation has prompted me to forward to(forward作為動詞講時是及物動詞，去掉to)my resume for your review and consideration. I am convinced that I am(加定冠詞the)right person for the job in that the(去掉一個) three point(應該用復數，因為是三個)as follow. Firstly, I have the certified public accountant qualification certificate and the Bachelor degree. Secondly, I have relevant work experience and the qualifications(與上面的qualifications重復，如果有不同，應該區別說明) necessary to effectively handle the responsibilities of financial accounting. Lastly, my industrial attitudes of professional, rigorous and innovative(這里應該用名詞) could make me complete the task better which the company distribute. I express my devout appreciation to you for your prompt attention. I welcome the chance to meet you to further discuss my qualification and the requirement of your company. Look forward to your reply. Thank you again. Yours sincerely, Li Ming 點評：6-7分第二段需要更加簡潔明朗，即條理清晰的列出內容，同時句子要簡潔。 t for two years,(加連詞and) therefore I have the ability of use biological apparatus. If I am possible to get this job please contact me, my email address is XXX@yahoo.com. Thank you for your time. Your(Yours)sincerely(加逗號) Li Ming 點評：6-7分寫的還可以的，注意一下大小寫和信件的格式。考試和簡歷中為了表示誠意，不建議使用縮寫。
考研英語待批改作文：
Dear Sir or Madam:
Your sincerely
Li Ming
考研英語作文批改點評如下：
Dear Sir or Madam: I have got the message from internet(i大寫)which says your company needs a biologist. I wrote This(t小寫)letter to ask would I have the opportunity to have this job. I have graduated from GZ(不建議使用縮寫)University for two years, and I have got Yales P.D(不建議使用縮寫) one month ago. All the above make me have the knowledge to cope this job. I worked as an experiment assistan My interest in the position of treasurer in your corporation has prompted me to forward to my resume for your review and consideration.
I am convinced that I am right person for the job in that the three point as follow. Firstly, I have the certified public accountant qualification certificate and the Bachelor degree. Secondly, I have relevant work experience and the qualifications necessary to effectively handle the responsibilities of financial accounting. Lastly, my industrial attitudes of professional, rigorous and innovative could make me complete the task better which the company distribute.
I express my devout appreciation to you for your prompt attention. I welcome the chance to meet you to further discuss my qualification and the requirement of your company. Look forward to your reply. Thank you again.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
考研英語作文批改點評如下：
Dear Sir or Madam,
My interest in the position of treasurer in your corporation has prompted me to forward to(forward作為動詞講時是及物動詞，去掉to)my resume for your review and consideration. I am convinced that I am(加定冠詞the)right person for the job in that the(去掉一個) three point(應該用復數，因為是三個)as follow. Firstly, I have the certified public accountant qualification certificate and the Bachelor degree. Secondly, I have relevant work experience and the qualifications(與上面的qualifications重復，如果有不同，應該區別說明) necessary to effectively handle the responsibilities of financial accounting. Lastly, my industrial attitudes of professional, rigorous and innovative(這里應該用名詞) could make me complete the task better which the company distribute. I express my devout appreciation to you for your prompt attention. I welcome the chance to meet you to further discuss my qualification and the requirement of your company. Look forward to your reply. Thank you again. Yours sincerely, Li Ming 點評：6-7分第二段需要更加簡潔明朗，即條理清晰的列出內容，同時句子要簡潔。 t for two years,(加連詞and) therefore I have the ability of use biological apparatus. If I am possible to get this job please contact me, my email address is XXX@yahoo.com. Thank you for your time. Your(Yours)sincerely(加逗號) Li Ming 點評：6-7分寫的還可以的，注意一下大小寫和信件的格式。考試和簡歷中為了表示誠意，不建議使用縮寫。
