2024考研英語作文范文：網(wǎng)絡(luò)的利與弊
思路點(diǎn)撥
本圖中，一個(gè)女孩正在因一個(gè)問題感到困惑，“10牛的水是否產(chǎn)生10牛的浮力？”。于是她上網(wǎng)求助于網(wǎng)友，網(wǎng)友的答案更是五花八門，說對(duì)說錯(cuò)的都有。女孩更加困惑。由此可見，這幅圖反應(yīng)了這樣一個(gè)現(xiàn)實(shí)：網(wǎng)絡(luò)文化有利也有弊。因此本文可以這樣設(shè)計(jì)：
第一段：描述圖畫；第二段：網(wǎng)絡(luò)的利+舉例，網(wǎng)絡(luò)的弊+舉例；第三段：提出建議措施——取其精華，去其糟粕。
思路拓展
所有利弊型的文章，均可按照本范文提供的思路進(jìn)行論述。例如，城市化的利與弊。大學(xué)擴(kuò)招的利與弊等。
高分范文
Just as what is shown in the picture， a girl is asking a question online. Answers from different netizens differ so greatly that the girl is very confused about whom she should follow①。 It is obvious that it is becoming a fashion for people to ask questions online when confronting a dilemma.
The implication implicit in the drawing can be elaborated as follows. On the one hand， the Internet has provided us with great convenience. For example， we can get knowledge about nearly all aspects on the Internet with only several keyboard commands and a few clicks of the mouse through search engines such as Baidu and so on. On the other hand， with an explosive amount of information on the Internet②， it can be difficult to tell good information from bad③。 For example， teenagers and adolescents may mistake the bad information online as good， the result of which can be rather devastating. Some dirty information on the net may exert negative impacts on people.
In conclusion， on the one hand， it is important for us to take full advantage of Internet to enhance our efficiency and save our time. On the other hand， effective steps should be taken to educate people to avoid and elude inappropriate and even wrong data online so as not to be misguided. Only in this way can the net better serve for our life， study and work④。
佳作妙譯
如圖所示，圖片中一個(gè)女孩正在網(wǎng)上問一個(gè)問題，來自于網(wǎng)友的答案差異太大了，以至于女孩很困惑到底該聽誰的。很明顯，人們面臨困境的時(shí)候上網(wǎng)提問的現(xiàn)象已經(jīng)成為一種時(shí)尚。
這幅圖所隱含的意義可以闡釋如下。一方面，因特網(wǎng)為我們提供了很大便利。例如，通過百度等搜索引擎鍵入一些命令、點(diǎn)擊幾下鼠標(biāo)，我們就可以獲得幾乎各個(gè)領(lǐng)域的知識(shí)。另一方面，由于因特網(wǎng)上有海量的信息，很難區(qū)分好的信息和壞的信息。例如青少年可能會(huì)把錯(cuò)誤的信息誤認(rèn)為是正確的，其結(jié)果是非常具有毀滅性的。網(wǎng)上的一些不健康信息也可能會(huì)給人們帶來負(fù)面影響。
總之，一方面，充分利用因特網(wǎng)來提高效率，節(jié)約時(shí)間，這很重要。另一方面，應(yīng)該采取有效的措施教育人們?nèi)ヅ懦W(wǎng)上不合適的甚至錯(cuò)誤的數(shù)據(jù)，以免被誤導(dǎo)。只有這樣，網(wǎng)絡(luò)才能更好地為我們的生活、學(xué)習(xí)和工作服務(wù)。
名師點(diǎn)評(píng)
① so… that 句型：如此……以至于……。
② with an explosive amount of information on the Internet： 這是2004年真題閱讀第一篇中的句型。
③ it can be difficult to tell good information from bad： 這是2003年真題閱讀第一篇中的句型。可見，充分了解真題閱讀，對(duì)于提高寫作的幫助作用也很大。
④ Only in this way can the net better serve for our life， study and work：倒裝句。
倒裝句的寫法（部分倒裝）：
原句：The net can better serve for our life， study and work only in this way.
only放在句首，把情態(tài)動(dòng)詞can和主語交換一下位置就寫成了倒裝句。
思路點(diǎn)撥
本圖中，一個(gè)女孩正在因一個(gè)問題感到困惑，“10牛的水是否產(chǎn)生10牛的浮力？”。于是她上網(wǎng)求助于網(wǎng)友，網(wǎng)友的答案更是五花八門，說對(duì)說錯(cuò)的都有。女孩更加困惑。由此可見，這幅圖反應(yīng)了這樣一個(gè)現(xiàn)實(shí)：網(wǎng)絡(luò)文化有利也有弊。因此本文可以這樣設(shè)計(jì)：
第一段：描述圖畫；第二段：網(wǎng)絡(luò)的利+舉例，網(wǎng)絡(luò)的弊+舉例；第三段：提出建議措施——取其精華，去其糟粕。
思路拓展
所有利弊型的文章，均可按照本范文提供的思路進(jìn)行論述。例如，城市化的利與弊。大學(xué)擴(kuò)招的利與弊等。
高分范文
Just as what is shown in the picture， a girl is asking a question online. Answers from different netizens differ so greatly that the girl is very confused about whom she should follow①。 It is obvious that it is becoming a fashion for people to ask questions online when confronting a dilemma.
The implication implicit in the drawing can be elaborated as follows. On the one hand， the Internet has provided us with great convenience. For example， we can get knowledge about nearly all aspects on the Internet with only several keyboard commands and a few clicks of the mouse through search engines such as Baidu and so on. On the other hand， with an explosive amount of information on the Internet②， it can be difficult to tell good information from bad③。 For example， teenagers and adolescents may mistake the bad information online as good， the result of which can be rather devastating. Some dirty information on the net may exert negative impacts on people.
In conclusion， on the one hand， it is important for us to take full advantage of Internet to enhance our efficiency and save our time. On the other hand， effective steps should be taken to educate people to avoid and elude inappropriate and even wrong data online so as not to be misguided. Only in this way can the net better serve for our life， study and work④。
佳作妙譯
如圖所示，圖片中一個(gè)女孩正在網(wǎng)上問一個(gè)問題，來自于網(wǎng)友的答案差異太大了，以至于女孩很困惑到底該聽誰的。很明顯，人們面臨困境的時(shí)候上網(wǎng)提問的現(xiàn)象已經(jīng)成為一種時(shí)尚。
這幅圖所隱含的意義可以闡釋如下。一方面，因特網(wǎng)為我們提供了很大便利。例如，通過百度等搜索引擎鍵入一些命令、點(diǎn)擊幾下鼠標(biāo)，我們就可以獲得幾乎各個(gè)領(lǐng)域的知識(shí)。另一方面，由于因特網(wǎng)上有海量的信息，很難區(qū)分好的信息和壞的信息。例如青少年可能會(huì)把錯(cuò)誤的信息誤認(rèn)為是正確的，其結(jié)果是非常具有毀滅性的。網(wǎng)上的一些不健康信息也可能會(huì)給人們帶來負(fù)面影響。
總之，一方面，充分利用因特網(wǎng)來提高效率，節(jié)約時(shí)間，這很重要。另一方面，應(yīng)該采取有效的措施教育人們?nèi)ヅ懦W(wǎng)上不合適的甚至錯(cuò)誤的數(shù)據(jù)，以免被誤導(dǎo)。只有這樣，網(wǎng)絡(luò)才能更好地為我們的生活、學(xué)習(xí)和工作服務(wù)。
名師點(diǎn)評(píng)
① so… that 句型：如此……以至于……。
② with an explosive amount of information on the Internet： 這是2004年真題閱讀第一篇中的句型。
③ it can be difficult to tell good information from bad： 這是2003年真題閱讀第一篇中的句型。可見，充分了解真題閱讀，對(duì)于提高寫作的幫助作用也很大。
④ Only in this way can the net better serve for our life， study and work：倒裝句。
倒裝句的寫法（部分倒裝）：
原句：The net can better serve for our life， study and work only in this way.
only放在句首，把情態(tài)動(dòng)詞can和主語交換一下位置就寫成了倒裝句。
