2024屆高考英語(yǔ)二輪復(fù)習(xí)熱點(diǎn)限時(shí)訓(xùn)練：短文改錯(cuò)系列4

　　短文改錯(cuò)系列4

　　一、短文改錯(cuò)

　　1．下文中共有10處錯(cuò)誤每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

　　增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(/）。并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉

　　修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

　　注意：

　　1、每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

　　只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不記分。

　　Mr Wang is over seventy years old. He has retired（退休）.He is one of my respected teachers. He

　　teaches us??chemistry when we were in senior Grade One. He was old, and he?????taught us good. He

　　tried his best to make his classes lively.???Mr ang usually made good preparations for the lesson

　　and was strict?to us, too. Whenever we made mistakes in our homework, she would ask us to

　　correct them. At that time, I was??poorly in chemistry. Mr Wang often helped me with my

　　studies??very patiently. With his help, I have made a rapid progress and???caught with the class. He

　　is always very kind to every student.?As an experiencing teacher, he is respected and loved by

　　all??the students.

　　【答案】

　　【小題1】Teaches-taught

　　【小題2】and-but

　　【小題3】good –well

　　【小題4】lesson-lessons

　　【小題5】to-with

　　【小題6】she-he

　　【小題7】poorly-poor

　　【小題8】(a) rapid

　　【小題9】catch /up with

　　【小題10】experiencing-experienced

　　【解析】

　　【小題1】這一句是過(guò)去時(shí)，表示過(guò)去發(fā)生的事情。

　　【小題2】上下文存在著轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系。

　　【小題3】副詞修飾動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)。

　　【小題4】這里是指他所上之課，應(yīng)該是復(fù)數(shù)形式。

　　【小題5】固定短語(yǔ)be strict with sb對(duì)某人要求嚴(yán)格。

　　【小題6】上文可知這是一個(gè)男老師。

　　【小題7】be poor in…在…方面不擅長(zhǎng)。

　　【小題8】progress是不可數(shù)名詞，不要加a。

　　【小題9】固定詞組catch u with追上。

　　【小題10】形容詞experienced

　　有經(jīng)驗(yàn)的。

　　2．對(duì)標(biāo)有題號(hào)的每一行判斷并改正其中的錯(cuò)誤：如果該行無(wú)誤，在該行相應(yīng)右邊橫線上畫(huà)“√”；如果有誤(每行只有一個(gè)錯(cuò)誤)，請(qǐng)按下列情況改正：

　　此行多一詞:把多余的詞用斜線劃掉（）,在該行右邊橫線上寫(xiě)出該詞，并也用斜線劃掉。

　　此行缺一詞：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)，并在該行右邊橫線上寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

　　此行錯(cuò)一詞：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該行右邊橫線上寫(xiě)出改正后的詞。

　　I am very excit to have received an e-mail from 76.

　　you. I’m glad you have made such a great progress 77.

　　that you can write your e-mail good Chinese. I read 78.

　　your e-mail to my parents but showed them the photo you 79.

　　sent it to me .How time flies! Our friendship has lasted 80.

　　for several month .We have got to know and learned a 81.

　　lot from each other . Yes, it is clearly that your life in82.

　　your country is quite different from me . Thanks again 83.

　　for writing to me. I’m looking forward to hear from 84.

　　you soon. Best wishes to you and your family.

　　85.

　　【答案】

　　【小題1】exciting改成 excited

　　【小題2】去掉a

　　【小題3】e-mail后面加in

　　【小題4】but改成and

　　【小題5】去掉it

　　【小題6】month用復(fù)數(shù)

　　【小題7】clear改成clearly

　　【小題8】me改成mine

　　【小題9】hear改成hearing

　　【小題10】對(duì)的

　　【解析】

　　【小題1】修飾人使用excited。

　　【小題2】progress是不可數(shù)名詞，不能用a修飾。

　　【小題3】in表示用某種語(yǔ)言。

　　【小題4】上下文是并列關(guān)系。

　　【小題5】考察定語(yǔ)從句中做賓語(yǔ)的關(guān)系代詞的省略。

　　【小題6】month是可數(shù)名詞，根據(jù)上文的several可知這里使用復(fù)數(shù)形式。

　　【小題7】形容詞作表語(yǔ)。

　　【小題8】名詞性物主代詞mine=my country.

　　【小題9】to是介詞，后面接動(dòng)名詞。

　　【小題10】

　　3．假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

　　增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（﹨）劃掉。

　　修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

　　注意：1、每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞。

　　2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

　　Last Saturday I went to the library as usually. At about noon, I was enjoying my reading near a lake while suddenly I hear someone crying for help. I went up to see what was happened I was shocking to find a little child struggling in the water in the distance while many peoples were standing by without doing anything. Without any hesitation, I had pushed through the crowd as I took off my coat, but jumped into the water quickly. I managed to reach him and carried him back to safety. To his great relief, the kid was saved.

　　I was proud what I had done. I hope everyone can give a hand when someone else is in need.

　　【答案】

　　【小題1】usually改為usual

　　【小題2】while改成when

　　【小題3】hear改成heard

　　【小題4】happened改成happening

　　【小題5】shocking改成shocked

　　【小題6】peoples改成people

　　【小題7】去掉had

　　【小題8】but改成and

　　【小題9】his改成my

　　【小題10】proud后面加of

　　【解析】

　　【小題1】固定詞組as usual和往常一樣

　　【小題2】固定句型：be doing sth when…正在做某事…在這時(shí)

　　【小題3】全文是過(guò)去時(shí)

　　【小題4】happen沒(méi)有被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)，這里是指正在發(fā)生的事情

　　【小題5】主語(yǔ)是人，用shocked修飾

　　【小題6】（people單獨(dú)使用指人們）

　　【小題7】這里沒(méi)有過(guò)去的過(guò)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)，不用過(guò)去完成時(shí)

　　【小題8】上下文沒(méi)有轉(zhuǎn)折的關(guān)系

　　【小題9】上下文串聯(lián)可知，是我很欣慰

　　【小題10】固定詞組be proud of

　　4．此題要求改正所給短文中的錯(cuò)誤。對(duì)標(biāo)有題號(hào)的每一行做出判斷：如無(wú)錯(cuò)誤，在該行右邊橫線上畫(huà)一個(gè)勾（√）；如有錯(cuò)誤（每行只有一個(gè)錯(cuò)誤），則按下列情況改正：

　　該行多一個(gè)詞：把多余的詞用斜線（／）劃掉，在該行右邊橫線上寫(xiě)出該詞，并也用斜線劃掉。

　　該行缺一個(gè)詞：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），在該行右邊橫線上寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

　　該行錯(cuò)一個(gè)詞：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，在該行右邊橫線上寫(xiě)出改正后的詞。

　　注意：原行沒(méi)有錯(cuò)的不要改。

　　Mrs．Brown was an old lady with just one son who lived far 71．

　　away from her. On her 80th birthday, she was sure that even if 72．

　　her daughter could not come for a visit, but she would at least 73．

　　receive a present to her daughter．After all, eighty was a special

　　74．

　　birthday, one should not be forgotten．The old lady waited so 75．

　　eager that she stood at the front door for a whole day．Her 76．

　　daughter didn't show up．However, the old lady got the parcel 77．

　　in which there were a printed card along with a cheque．She 78．

　　felt very disappointed and she tears the cheque into pieces． 79．

　　Everyone but a caring daughter or son could write a cheque． 80．

　　【小題1】son →daughter

　　【小題2】對(duì)的

　　【小題3】去掉but

　　【小題4】to→from

　　【小題5】one→which/one 后家that

　　【小題6】eager

　　→eagerly

　　【小題7】parcel前the→a

　　【小題8】were→ was

　　【小題9】tea r→tore

　　【小題10】Everyone→Anyone

　　【解析】

　　【小題1】根據(jù)下文的she，可只是女兒。

　　【小題2】對(duì)的

　　【小題3】已經(jīng)有even if引導(dǎo)了從句，就不能再用but連接。

　　【小題4】從她的女兒哪里收到一個(gè)禮物。

　　【小題5】逗號(hào)不能連接兩個(gè)句子，故用which引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句，或在one后面that。

　　【小題6】修飾waited應(yīng)用副詞。

　　【小題7】因?yàn)榍懊鏇](méi)有提到過(guò)這個(gè)包裹，故用a。

　　【小題8】there be句式的謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞應(yīng)根據(jù)后面靠近他的主語(yǔ)來(lái)定，故用單數(shù)。

　　【小題9】根據(jù)前面的felt，可知這里應(yīng)是tore.

　　【小題10】Anyone but除了…任何人

　　5．此題要求改正所給短文中的錯(cuò)誤。對(duì)標(biāo)有題號(hào)的每一行作出判斷：如無(wú)錯(cuò)誤，在該行右邊橫線上畫(huà)一個(gè)勾（√）；如有錯(cuò)誤（每行只有一個(gè)錯(cuò)誤），則按下列情況改正：

　　該行多一個(gè)詞：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉，在該行右邊橫線上寫(xiě)出該詞，并也用斜線劃掉。

　　該行缺一個(gè)詞：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），在該行右邊橫線上寫(xiě)出該加的詞。該行錯(cuò)一個(gè)詞：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，在該行右邊橫線上寫(xiě)出改正后的詞。

　　注意：原行沒(méi)有錯(cuò)的不要改。

　　Two years before, I travelled to Brazil and

　　81._________

　　rented for a car. Unfortunately, I had an accident and

　　82._________

　　hit another cars and I needed to stay in a hospital

　　83._________

　　for at least two weeks. I called my parents, so I did not

　　84._________

　　tell them what had happened. I knew that they will

　　85._________

　　be worried about myself because I was so far

　　86._________

　　away, and that my mother would not sleep until she

　　87._________

　　knew. Therefore, I told them interested stories and

　　88._________

　　how I was enjoying Brazil. As a result, nobody

　　89._________

　　knew truth. I still think that it was the right thing to do.

　　90._________

　　【答案】

　　【小題1】before---ago

　　【小題2】去掉for

　　cars---car

　　【小題4】so---but

　　【小題5】will---would

　　【小題6】myself---me

　　【小題7】until---if

　　【小題8】interested---interesting

　　【小題9】正確

　　knew 后加the

　　【小題1】?jī)赡昵皯?yīng)是two years ago.因?yàn)楹竺娴臅r(shí)態(tài)為過(guò)去時(shí)。

　　【小題2】rent為及物動(dòng)詞，故去掉for。

　　【小題3】不可能同時(shí)撞上幾輛車(chē)，故用car。

　　【小題4】他雖然打電話(huà)了，但沒(méi)有告知父母車(chē)禍的事情。

　　【小題5】主句為過(guò)去時(shí)，賓語(yǔ)從句為過(guò)去某種時(shí)態(tài)。

　　【小題6】我知道他們會(huì)當(dāng)心我，所以是賓格。

　　【小題7】如果她知道我的母親將會(huì)睡不著。

　　【小題8】有趣的故事interesting stories.

　　【小題9】正確。

　　【小題10】the truth真相只有一個(gè)，故需加the。

　　6．假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

　　增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。

　　修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

　　注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均限一詞。

　　2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

　　My summer travel started terribly .I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a ticket to Hang Zhou. I was going to visit a friend here and after that I would go to Xiamen for long holiday. I bought my ticket but turned around to pick up my bag from the floor and then I realized that someone had stolen it.Luckily I had all my money on my pocket,but the only clothes I had was those I had on.It felt very strange to travel without any luggages.When I finally arrived at my friend he lent to me lots of clothes. I feel very happy that I could change my clothes at last.

　　【答案】

　　【小題1】buy改成 buying

　　【小題2】here改成 there

　　【小題3】for后面加a

　　【小題4】but改成 and

　　【小題5】去掉around

　　【小題6】on改成in

　　【小題7】was改成 were

　　【小題8】luggages. 改成 luggage

　　【小題9】friend 改成friend’ s

　　【小題10】feel改成 felt

　　【解析】

　　【小題1】此處buy與前面的was構(gòu)成過(guò)去進(jìn)行時(shí)。

　　【小題2】此處應(yīng)指遠(yuǎn)在杭州的朋友。

　　【小題3】a long holiday長(zhǎng)假。

　　【小題4】bought與turned是順承關(guān)系。

　　【小題5】turn to do sth轉(zhuǎn)身做某事。不用加around。

　　【小題6】in one’s pocket在口袋中。

　　【小題7】was的主語(yǔ)是the only clothes，故改成were。

　　【小題8】luggage 不可數(shù)名詞。

　　【小題9】at a friend’s在朋友家里。

　　【小題10】敘述的是過(guò)去的經(jīng)歷，應(yīng)用過(guò)去式。

　　7．此題要求改正所給短文中的錯(cuò)誤。對(duì)標(biāo)有題號(hào)的每行作出判斷：如無(wú)錯(cuò)誤，在該行右邊橫線上畫(huà)一個(gè)勾√；如有錯(cuò)誤(每行只有一個(gè)錯(cuò)誤)，則按下列情況改正：

　　此行多一個(gè)詞：把多余的詞斜線“＼”劃掉，在該行右邊橫線上寫(xiě)出該詞，并也用斜線劃掉。 此行缺一個(gè)詞：在缺詞處加一漏字符號(hào)“∧”，在該行右邊橫線上寫(xiě)出該加的詞。此行錯(cuò)一個(gè)詞：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，在該行右邊橫線上寫(xiě)出改正后的詞。 注意：原行沒(méi)有錯(cuò)誤的不要改。

　　Dear Abby,

　　How are you? Today I’ve got a wonderful news to tell you.

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　　I have offered a scholarship at a university in Australia for my

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　　further education. One hundred and twenty students took exam

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　　for it, but only a few was chosen and I was one of them. However,