gre argument238提綱分析匯總

　　前段時間為gre考生匯總了gre issue寫作提綱思路和分析，希望對考生在攻破gre issue寫作上有所幫助。接下來的幾天我們將為gre考生整理gre argument部分的提綱內容。希望通過我們的整理和匯總，讓gre考生真正能掌握gre寫作的精髓。

　　題目題材：就業

　　gre argument 238題目：

　　The following appeared in a memorandum from the president of Mira Vista College to the colleges board of trustees.

　　At nearby Green Mountain College, which has more business courses and more job counselors than does Mira Vista College, 90 percent of last years graduating seniors had job offers from prospective employers. But at Mira Vista College last year, only 70 percent of the seniors who informed the placement office that they would be seeking employment had found full-time jobs within three months after graduation, and only half of these graduates were employed in their major field of study. To help Mira Vistas graduates find employment, we must offer more courses in business and computer technology and hire additional job counselors to help students with their resums and interviewing skills.

　　提綱：

　　The president fails to inform us the total amount of students at each college, thus we cannot compare the number of job counselors per student.

　　The survey does not include all the graduates in MVC, thus it is impossible to evaluate the employment result in MVC.

　　The comparison between GMC and MVC is incomplete, many other factors would contribute to the differences in the employment results of the two colleges.

　　Without further description of the job offers received by graduating seniors of the two colleges, we cannot evaluate if Mira Vistas job-placement record is comparatively poor.

　　The president fails to establish the causal relationship between the fact that GMC has more business courses and job counselors than MVC and the fact that 90% of last years graduating seniors from GMC got job offers.

　　The president fails to convince us that offering more courses in computer technology will necessarily contribute to the employment of graduates in MVC.

　　GMC and MVC might not be comparable in several aspects such as reputation, ranking, alumni, etc.

　　The proposed actions might be neither sufficient nor necessary for Mira Vista to improve its employment result.

　　注：題目中括號里的數字表明這句話體現的是提綱中第幾號缺陷。

　　無論是gre issue還是gre argument，考生都應該養成寫提綱的習慣。這種提綱式的gre寫作練習可以幫助考生鍛煉寫作的邏輯性，而gre寫作高分最重要的得分依據就是作文的邏輯性要強。

　　前段時間為gre考生匯總了gre issue寫作提綱思路和分析，希望對考生在攻破gre issue寫作上有所幫助。接下來的幾天我們將為gre考生整理gre argument部分的提綱內容。希望通過我們的整理和匯總，讓gre考生真正能掌握gre寫作的精髓。

　　題目題材：就業

　　gre argument 238題目：

　　The following appeared in a memorandum from the president of Mira Vista College to the colleges board of trustees.

　　At nearby Green Mountain College, which has more business courses and more job counselors than does Mira Vista College, 90 percent of last years graduating seniors had job offers from prospective employers. But at Mira Vista College last year, only 70 percent of the seniors who informed the placement office that they would be seeking employment had found full-time jobs within three months after graduation, and only half of these graduates were employed in their major field of study. To help Mira Vistas graduates find employment, we must offer more courses in business and computer technology and hire additional job counselors to help students with their resums and interviewing skills.

　　提綱：

　　The president fails to inform us the total amount of students at each college, thus we cannot compare the number of job counselors per student.

　　The survey does not include all the graduates in MVC, thus it is impossible to evaluate the employment result in MVC.

　　The comparison between GMC and MVC is incomplete, many other factors would contribute to the differences in the employment results of the two colleges.

　　Without further description of the job offers received by graduating seniors of the two colleges, we cannot evaluate if Mira Vistas job-placement record is comparatively poor.

　　The president fails to establish the causal relationship between the fact that GMC has more business courses and job counselors than MVC and the fact that 90% of last years graduating seniors from GMC got job offers.

　　The president fails to convince us that offering more courses in computer technology will necessarily contribute to the employment of graduates in MVC.

　　GMC and MVC might not be comparable in several aspects such as reputation, ranking, alumni, etc.

　　The proposed actions might be neither sufficient nor necessary for Mira Vista to improve its employment result.

　　注：題目中括號里的數字表明這句話體現的是提綱中第幾號缺陷。

　　無論是gre issue還是gre argument，考生都應該養成寫提綱的習慣。這種提綱式的gre寫作練習可以幫助考生鍛煉寫作的邏輯性，而gre寫作高分最重要的得分依據就是作文的邏輯性要強。