gre argument229提綱分析匯總

　　前段時間為gre考生匯總了gre issue寫作提綱思路和分析，希望對考生在攻破gre issue寫作上有所幫助。接下來的幾天我們將為gre考生整理gre argument部分的提綱內(nèi)容。希望通過我們的整理和匯總，讓gre考生真正能掌握gre寫作的精髓。

　　題目題材：管理運(yùn)營

　　gre argument 229題目：

　　The following appeared as part of a memo from the manager of a hazardous-waste disposal company.

　　Our new plan will help us better protect our staff against exposure to toxic chemicals: we are fitting each new safety suit with an alarm that will sound in the main control booth when the suit is punctured. The control booth will notify the managers on duty, who will then take the necessary steps to ensure employees safety. In addition to the obvious safety-related benefits, the fast reaction time will ensure minimal work stoppage and thus result in increased worker productivity and company profitability.

　　提綱：

　　The manager does not inform us if all the staff will be equipped with this new suit.

　　We are not informed about the working mechanism of the alarming system, there is possibility of system failure, and the manager fails to indicate if there is any emergency strategy in case of system failure.

　　Fitting the alarm on safety suits may not sufficiently protect staff against all chemical hazards.

　　The manager fails to illustrate that most work stoppage are caused by problems which could be prevented by the new suits.

　　The system in itself could not guarantee increased worker productivity and company profitability.

　　We do not know the expenditure of installing the entire system, the companys profits would probably decline due to the new system.

　　注：題目中括號里的數(shù)字表明這句話體現(xiàn)的是提綱中第幾號缺陷。

　　無論是gre issue還是gre argument，考生都應(yīng)該養(yǎng)成寫提綱的習(xí)慣。這種提綱式的gre寫作練習(xí)可以幫助考生鍛煉寫作的邏輯性，而gre寫作高分最重要的得分依據(jù)就是作文的邏輯性要強(qiáng)。

　　前段時間為gre考生匯總了gre issue寫作提綱思路和分析，希望對考生在攻破gre issue寫作上有所幫助。接下來的幾天我們將為gre考生整理gre argument部分的提綱內(nèi)容。希望通過我們的整理和匯總，讓gre考生真正能掌握gre寫作的精髓。

　　題目題材：管理運(yùn)營

　　gre argument 229題目：

　　The following appeared as part of a memo from the manager of a hazardous-waste disposal company.

　　Our new plan will help us better protect our staff against exposure to toxic chemicals: we are fitting each new safety suit with an alarm that will sound in the main control booth when the suit is punctured. The control booth will notify the managers on duty, who will then take the necessary steps to ensure employees safety. In addition to the obvious safety-related benefits, the fast reaction time will ensure minimal work stoppage and thus result in increased worker productivity and company profitability.

　　提綱：

　　The manager does not inform us if all the staff will be equipped with this new suit.

　　We are not informed about the working mechanism of the alarming system, there is possibility of system failure, and the manager fails to indicate if there is any emergency strategy in case of system failure.

　　Fitting the alarm on safety suits may not sufficiently protect staff against all chemical hazards.

　　The manager fails to illustrate that most work stoppage are caused by problems which could be prevented by the new suits.

　　The system in itself could not guarantee increased worker productivity and company profitability.

　　We do not know the expenditure of installing the entire system, the companys profits would probably decline due to the new system.

　　注：題目中括號里的數(shù)字表明這句話體現(xiàn)的是提綱中第幾號缺陷。

　　無論是gre issue還是gre argument，考生都應(yīng)該養(yǎng)成寫提綱的習(xí)慣。這種提綱式的gre寫作練習(xí)可以幫助考生鍛煉寫作的邏輯性，而gre寫作高分最重要的得分依據(jù)就是作文的邏輯性要強(qiáng)。