GRE寫作提綱舉例指導(dǎo)（16）
16Although many people think that the luxu ries and conveniences of contemporary life are entirely harmless, in fact, they actually prevent people from developing into truly strong and independent individuals.
部分同意
1、現(xiàn)代生活的便利確實(shí)使人們的對(duì)技術(shù)的依賴性越來(lái)越強(qiáng)
depend on automobile for travel; depend on calculat or for calculation; depend on computer for writing documents; depend on Internet for in formation
2、但是現(xiàn)代生活的便利也給人們帶來(lái)了挑戰(zhàn)，使變得 intellectually strong to creat more convenience, further improvve technology develop to help make life more efficient; people are expected for more productivity
3、工作的便利使人能夠獨(dú)立完成復(fù)雜任務(wù) national survey analysis
16T Although many people think that the luxuries and conveniences of contemporary life are entirely harmless, in fact, they actually prevent people from developing into truly strong and independent individuals.
盡管很多人認(rèn)為現(xiàn)在奢侈安逸的生活是無(wú)害的，但實(shí)際上這樣的生活阻止了人們培養(yǎng)堅(jiān)強(qiáng)獨(dú)立的性格
① I concede 有些時(shí)候有些人在得到安逸生活以后就不思進(jìn)取了。Davy, 晚年沒有什么成就。
② 但是追求安逸的生活是科技發(fā)展和人類進(jìn)步的動(dòng)力。人們追求更多的休閑時(shí)間，從而有了更高效的工作。
③ 如果缺乏現(xiàn)在高科技所提供的舒適條件，有些研究成果出不來(lái)。 如：生物學(xué)領(lǐng)域、軍事領(lǐng)域 都要求
sophisticated apparatus
Without modern facilities, we could hardly do anything.
While, without such modern facilities, can we become truly strong and independent individuals?It is important for us to realize the limitation of mo dern facilities and that potential danger which will be aroused if we lost our domination over modern facilities and too rely on them.
16Although many people think that the luxu ries and conveniences of contemporary life are entirely harmless, in fact, they actually prevent people from developing into truly strong and independent individuals.
部分同意
1、現(xiàn)代生活的便利確實(shí)使人們的對(duì)技術(shù)的依賴性越來(lái)越強(qiáng)
depend on automobile for travel; depend on calculat or for calculation; depend on computer for writing documents; depend on Internet for in formation
2、但是現(xiàn)代生活的便利也給人們帶來(lái)了挑戰(zhàn)，使變得 intellectually strong to creat more convenience, further improvve technology develop to help make life more efficient; people are expected for more productivity
3、工作的便利使人能夠獨(dú)立完成復(fù)雜任務(wù) national survey analysis
16T Although many people think that the luxuries and conveniences of contemporary life are entirely harmless, in fact, they actually prevent people from developing into truly strong and independent individuals.
盡管很多人認(rèn)為現(xiàn)在奢侈安逸的生活是無(wú)害的，但實(shí)際上這樣的生活阻止了人們培養(yǎng)堅(jiān)強(qiáng)獨(dú)立的性格
① I concede 有些時(shí)候有些人在得到安逸生活以后就不思進(jìn)取了。Davy, 晚年沒有什么成就。
② 但是追求安逸的生活是科技發(fā)展和人類進(jìn)步的動(dòng)力。人們追求更多的休閑時(shí)間，從而有了更高效的工作。
③ 如果缺乏現(xiàn)在高科技所提供的舒適條件，有些研究成果出不來(lái)。 如：生物學(xué)領(lǐng)域、軍事領(lǐng)域 都要求
sophisticated apparatus
Without modern facilities, we could hardly do anything.
While, without such modern facilities, can we become truly strong and independent individuals?It is important for us to realize the limitation of mo dern facilities and that potential danger which will be aroused if we lost our domination over modern facilities and too rely on them.
