6類SAT寫作常見問題之二 固定搭配

　　在學(xué)生平時(shí)的SAT寫作練習(xí)中，留學(xué)的老師們通過長(zhǎng)期的觀察與總結(jié)，發(fā)現(xiàn)了6類常見的問題，這是導(dǎo)致學(xué)生在考試中丟分的原因。英語(yǔ)的學(xué)習(xí)中存在很多固定搭配，適當(dāng)?shù)厥褂霉潭ù钆淇梢允刮恼卤磉_(dá)流暢、到位，但是學(xué)生在SAT寫作中使用的時(shí)候會(huì)出現(xiàn)錯(cuò)誤，今天我們就來看SAT寫作6類常見問題之二：固定搭配。

　　1、 Original: ...there is no deny that a university or college really offers us great enlightment for students future development and growth.

　　Revised: ... there is no denying that a university diploma really offers great opportunities for students personal growth.

　　there is no deny改為固定搭配there is no denying不可否認(rèn)。原句中還存在表達(dá)不當(dāng)?shù)膯栴}，應(yīng)該是大學(xué)文憑給學(xué)生們的個(gè)人發(fā)展提供了很多機(jī)會(huì)。

　　2、Original: Modern technologies have improved todays factories technology and brought pollutions to the minimum.

　　Revised: However, with the modern technology, air and noise pollution can be kept to a minimum.

　　降到最低程度是to a minimum。

　　3、Original: If you want to catch the pace of the rhythms of the modern world you had better get ready.

　　Revised: If you want to keep pace with the rhythms of the modern world, you had better get up early.

　　原句catch up with the pace的搭配是不對(duì)的，如果表述和現(xiàn)在世界的快節(jié)奏同步可以用keep pace with或catch up with。

　　4、 Original: Every year, Lenovo spends a large amount of money to product environment without regret. By doing this, Lenovo makes a profit at the same time.

　　Revised: Every year Lenovo spends a large amount of money on environmental protection while at the same time makes a profit.

　　原句中動(dòng)詞spend的詞組搭配不正確，spend可以表示花費(fèi)錢或時(shí)間。常用的搭配有：spend money on sth./sb.表示在某人或某事上花錢spend time with sb.表示花時(shí)間和某人在一起spend timedoing sth. 表示花時(shí)間做某事等。另外，原句有些啰嗦，改后稿用while結(jié)構(gòu)省略了一個(gè)句子，使句子更加簡(jiǎn)潔。

　　5、Original: The advertisement as the news inform us the current technologies of a country.

　　Revised: The ad informed us of the current technology, solar, available within that country.

　　讓某人得知什么消息或事情，要用inform sb. of sth.,不能直接說inform sb. sth.。

　　6、Original: I do admire those people who trust their first intuition for their courage to follow what their hearts believe.

　　Revised: I do admire those people who trust their first impressions, for they have the courage to follow their hearts.

　　跟著感覺走的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)式follow ones heart。

　　考生應(yīng)在平時(shí)閱讀范文或其他材料時(shí)，注意摘錄一些固定搭配，表明他們的用途范圍，并在SAT寫作練習(xí)中留意固定搭配。當(dāng)然，記憶一定要準(zhǔn)確，特別要注意固定搭配中所使用的詞性、詞形等。

　　在學(xué)生平時(shí)的SAT寫作練習(xí)中，留學(xué)的老師們通過長(zhǎng)期的觀察與總結(jié)，發(fā)現(xiàn)了6類常見的問題，這是導(dǎo)致學(xué)生在考試中丟分的原因。英語(yǔ)的學(xué)習(xí)中存在很多固定搭配，適當(dāng)?shù)厥褂霉潭ù钆淇梢允刮恼卤磉_(dá)流暢、到位，但是學(xué)生在SAT寫作中使用的時(shí)候會(huì)出現(xiàn)錯(cuò)誤，今天我們就來看SAT寫作6類常見問題之二：固定搭配。

　　1、 Original: ...there is no deny that a university or college really offers us great enlightment for students future development and growth.

　　Revised: ... there is no denying that a university diploma really offers great opportunities for students personal growth.

　　there is no deny改為固定搭配there is no denying不可否認(rèn)。原句中還存在表達(dá)不當(dāng)?shù)膯栴}，應(yīng)該是大學(xué)文憑給學(xué)生們的個(gè)人發(fā)展提供了很多機(jī)會(huì)。

　　2、Original: Modern technologies have improved todays factories technology and brought pollutions to the minimum.

　　Revised: However, with the modern technology, air and noise pollution can be kept to a minimum.

　　降到最低程度是to a minimum。

　　3、Original: If you want to catch the pace of the rhythms of the modern world you had better get ready.

　　Revised: If you want to keep pace with the rhythms of the modern world, you had better get up early.

　　原句catch up with the pace的搭配是不對(duì)的，如果表述和現(xiàn)在世界的快節(jié)奏同步可以用keep pace with或catch up with。

　　4、 Original: Every year, Lenovo spends a large amount of money to product environment without regret. By doing this, Lenovo makes a profit at the same time.

　　Revised: Every year Lenovo spends a large amount of money on environmental protection while at the same time makes a profit.

　　原句中動(dòng)詞spend的詞組搭配不正確，spend可以表示花費(fèi)錢或時(shí)間。常用的搭配有：spend money on sth./sb.表示在某人或某事上花錢spend time with sb.表示花時(shí)間和某人在一起spend timedoing sth. 表示花時(shí)間做某事等。另外，原句有些啰嗦，改后稿用while結(jié)構(gòu)省略了一個(gè)句子，使句子更加簡(jiǎn)潔。

　　5、Original: The advertisement as the news inform us the current technologies of a country.

　　Revised: The ad informed us of the current technology, solar, available within that country.

　　讓某人得知什么消息或事情，要用inform sb. of sth.,不能直接說inform sb. sth.。

　　6、Original: I do admire those people who trust their first intuition for their courage to follow what their hearts believe.

　　Revised: I do admire those people who trust their first impressions, for they have the courage to follow their hearts.

　　跟著感覺走的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)式follow ones heart。

　　考生應(yīng)在平時(shí)閱讀范文或其他材料時(shí)，注意摘錄一些固定搭配，表明他們的用途范圍，并在SAT寫作練習(xí)中留意固定搭配。當(dāng)然，記憶一定要準(zhǔn)確，特別要注意固定搭配中所使用的詞性、詞形等。