2023年11月8日美國(guó)考區(qū)SAT寫(xiě)作解析
題目：Does working with other people bring better results than working as an individual？
解析：
10月的SAT寫(xiě)作題目整體是比較常規(guī)的。11月美國(guó)的考題也沿襲了10月的正統(tǒng)。這是一道上課的時(shí)候放到個(gè)人集體這個(gè)話題里面的題目。但是解題的思路卻不拘泥于個(gè)人集體這一個(gè)話題，可以從兩個(gè)大方向入手：
1. 如果選擇寫(xiě)自己?jiǎn)胃杀雀热撕献骱每梢詫?xiě)成是挑戰(zhàn)權(quán)威獨(dú)立思考的文章。因?yàn)楹芏嘀臍v史人物，在他們選擇完成自己特殊使命的年代，是沒(méi)有辦法得到他人的 理解的，那么跟他人一起工作就無(wú)法實(shí)現(xiàn)巨大的突破反而會(huì)被干擾，只能work as an individual to bring about great revolution 等等
2. 如果選擇跟別人一起工作的話，那就是寫(xiě)合作的好處啦。這個(gè)就是上課經(jīng)常講到的，在不同的領(lǐng)域合作帶來(lái)的不同的好處。它可以幫助商業(yè)成功，推動(dòng)社會(huì)運(yùn)動(dòng)的順 利進(jìn)行，幫助實(shí)現(xiàn)個(gè)人成就等等。把這些理由滲透到文章里，再加上課堂上熟悉的例子，就可以寫(xiě)出一篇非常好的文章了。
范文：
Changes do not occur until people discover that they share a common concern and work together towards that shared goal. Great revolutions and breakthroughs are finished by the cooperative efforts of a group of people. Although to complete a task independently will guarantee a working environment without interruption, to work with other people turns out to be more productive.
When it comes to social work through which group life is affected by worker who consciously directs the interacting process towards the accomplishment of goals, which are conceived in a democratic frame, the support of other people, though trivial at face value, is part-and-parcel for a successful outcome. Take the recipient of the 2023 Nobel Peace Prize winner Malala Yousafzais story as an example. Born into a disadvantaged village with Taliban control, Malala was much more mature than girls at her age in other countries. Knowing that the Talibans restriction for girls education is detrimental to the future of these girls, as well as the future of her country-Pakistan, Malala decided to change the situation and wrote a blog to BBC, to call for an improvement in education for girls when she was only 11 years old. Understanding the pressure and depression girls in Pakistan are facing, BBC stared to report this, giving Malala interviews in print and on television. With the help of BBC, Malala soon rose in prominence and people from all over the world knew about the issue in her area. Besides, after Malala was attacked by the Taliban, a built-in support network is created: a UN petition in Yousafzais name was created, using the slogan I am Malala and demanding that all children worldwide be in school by the end of 2023. The cooperative work from all aspects in the society brought nothing but the ratification of the first Education Bill in Pakistan, girls rights to be educated finally guaranteed by law. It is obvious that if Malala was just working on her own, as an eleven-year -old pupil, she would nerve be able to gain such success. The moral and professional support from other people accelerated the process of social campaign.
When it comes to personal success, a situation seems simper; to work with other people is still more productive than to work alone. Take John Kennedy Toole as an example. With an intention to be a prestigious writer, Toole has published his first book, the Neon Bible, which brought Toole into public attention. Not satisfied with such fame, Toole soon wrote another book, A Confederacy of Dunces, and sent it to a very influential editor, Robert. Unfortunately, Robert admitted Tooles talents but not his masterpiece. After several revisions, the book was still rejected. Toole then reached another editor, but what he received was still negative feedback. All these experience of working alone gave Toole nothing but depression. Feel like living on an island of hopeless and loneliness in the midst of a vast ocean of chances and opportunities, Toole committed suicide at the age of 31. But this was not the end, a key turning point in Toole career was when his mother joined him in the realization of his dream. After 10 years continuous efforts by Tooles mother, the Confederacy of Dunces finally became a hit and was awarded the Pulitzer Price for Fiction. By working alone, Toole harvested a feeling of isolation and finds himself languished in the corners of hopeless. But his mothers join came as a great beacon light of hope to Tooles career. Toole is undoubtedly talented, but we could see the sad story that to work alone can be depressing, without his mothers support, the public would never have the change to appreciate Tooles talents in writing.
Besides social campaign and personal success, cooperation in business can maximize productivity and in literature it heats up communication. Everyones success cannot be separated from the help and support of other people; even the help is not a professional one. Thus to work with other people is definitely more effective than to work as an individual.
題目：Does working with other people bring better results than working as an individual？
解析：
10月的SAT寫(xiě)作題目整體是比較常規(guī)的。11月美國(guó)的考題也沿襲了10月的正統(tǒng)。這是一道上課的時(shí)候放到個(gè)人集體這個(gè)話題里面的題目。但是解題的思路卻不拘泥于個(gè)人集體這一個(gè)話題，可以從兩個(gè)大方向入手：
1. 如果選擇寫(xiě)自己?jiǎn)胃杀雀热撕献骱每梢詫?xiě)成是挑戰(zhàn)權(quán)威獨(dú)立思考的文章。因?yàn)楹芏嘀臍v史人物，在他們選擇完成自己特殊使命的年代，是沒(méi)有辦法得到他人的 理解的，那么跟他人一起工作就無(wú)法實(shí)現(xiàn)巨大的突破反而會(huì)被干擾，只能work as an individual to bring about great revolution 等等
2. 如果選擇跟別人一起工作的話，那就是寫(xiě)合作的好處啦。這個(gè)就是上課經(jīng)常講到的，在不同的領(lǐng)域合作帶來(lái)的不同的好處。它可以幫助商業(yè)成功，推動(dòng)社會(huì)運(yùn)動(dòng)的順 利進(jìn)行，幫助實(shí)現(xiàn)個(gè)人成就等等。把這些理由滲透到文章里，再加上課堂上熟悉的例子，就可以寫(xiě)出一篇非常好的文章了。
范文：
Changes do not occur until people discover that they share a common concern and work together towards that shared goal. Great revolutions and breakthroughs are finished by the cooperative efforts of a group of people. Although to complete a task independently will guarantee a working environment without interruption, to work with other people turns out to be more productive.
When it comes to social work through which group life is affected by worker who consciously directs the interacting process towards the accomplishment of goals, which are conceived in a democratic frame, the support of other people, though trivial at face value, is part-and-parcel for a successful outcome. Take the recipient of the 2023 Nobel Peace Prize winner Malala Yousafzais story as an example. Born into a disadvantaged village with Taliban control, Malala was much more mature than girls at her age in other countries. Knowing that the Talibans restriction for girls education is detrimental to the future of these girls, as well as the future of her country-Pakistan, Malala decided to change the situation and wrote a blog to BBC, to call for an improvement in education for girls when she was only 11 years old. Understanding the pressure and depression girls in Pakistan are facing, BBC stared to report this, giving Malala interviews in print and on television. With the help of BBC, Malala soon rose in prominence and people from all over the world knew about the issue in her area. Besides, after Malala was attacked by the Taliban, a built-in support network is created: a UN petition in Yousafzais name was created, using the slogan I am Malala and demanding that all children worldwide be in school by the end of 2023. The cooperative work from all aspects in the society brought nothing but the ratification of the first Education Bill in Pakistan, girls rights to be educated finally guaranteed by law. It is obvious that if Malala was just working on her own, as an eleven-year -old pupil, she would nerve be able to gain such success. The moral and professional support from other people accelerated the process of social campaign.
When it comes to personal success, a situation seems simper; to work with other people is still more productive than to work alone. Take John Kennedy Toole as an example. With an intention to be a prestigious writer, Toole has published his first book, the Neon Bible, which brought Toole into public attention. Not satisfied with such fame, Toole soon wrote another book, A Confederacy of Dunces, and sent it to a very influential editor, Robert. Unfortunately, Robert admitted Tooles talents but not his masterpiece. After several revisions, the book was still rejected. Toole then reached another editor, but what he received was still negative feedback. All these experience of working alone gave Toole nothing but depression. Feel like living on an island of hopeless and loneliness in the midst of a vast ocean of chances and opportunities, Toole committed suicide at the age of 31. But this was not the end, a key turning point in Toole career was when his mother joined him in the realization of his dream. After 10 years continuous efforts by Tooles mother, the Confederacy of Dunces finally became a hit and was awarded the Pulitzer Price for Fiction. By working alone, Toole harvested a feeling of isolation and finds himself languished in the corners of hopeless. But his mothers join came as a great beacon light of hope to Tooles career. Toole is undoubtedly talented, but we could see the sad story that to work alone can be depressing, without his mothers support, the public would never have the change to appreciate Tooles talents in writing.
Besides social campaign and personal success, cooperation in business can maximize productivity and in literature it heats up communication. Everyones success cannot be separated from the help and support of other people; even the help is not a professional one. Thus to work with other people is definitely more effective than to work as an individual.
