2023中考英語作文：學(xué)術(shù)文化

03 學(xué)術(shù)文化篇（一）在當(dāng)今信息化時代，英語已經(jīng)成為了我們生活不可或缺的一部分，作為中學(xué)生，我們更應(yīng)該學(xué)好英語。請以 “My English Learning”為題，寫一篇短文。

內(nèi)容包括：1.學(xué)好英語對你的重要性。

2.談?wù)勀阕约簩W(xué)習(xí)英語的經(jīng)歷。

3.談?wù)勀阕约旱母形颉?

寫作要求：1.詞數(shù)80左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名與姓名。

關(guān)鍵詞：important, subject, progress, listen to, take notes, practice ,take part in ...My English learningEnglish is widely used in the world.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________If we do like these, I think we can become a good English learner.【滿分范文】English is widely used in the world. I think it’s important for us to learn it well.English is one of my subjects. It plays an important part in my daily study. But at the beginning, I was not good at it, and I felt worried . My English teacher told me not to give it up. And she also gave me some suggestions on how to learn English well. I made much progress in English later.I think it’s important for us to listen to the teacher carefully in class and take notes so that I can go over my lessons later. I also try to catch every chance to practice listening and speaking. Reading more books is also a good way .If we do like these, I think we can become a good English learner.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，介紹學(xué)好英語的重要性，談?wù)勛约簩W(xué)習(xí)英語的經(jīng)歷和感悟。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：
English is……，I think……，My English teacher told……，I also try to……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

【點(diǎn)睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了我們學(xué)好英語非常重要，接下來介紹自己學(xué)習(xí)英語的經(jīng)歷，最后認(rèn)為我們可以成為一名優(yōu)秀的英語學(xué)習(xí)者。此處at the beginning, be good at, give up, make progress, take notes, practice doing sth等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。

（二）假如你是張華，你在外地學(xué)習(xí)的好朋友王偉發(fā)電子郵件向你請教如何學(xué)好英語．請你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示用英語給他回封電子郵件．要點(diǎn)提示：1．看英語電影、聽英語歌曲、猜測生詞意思；

2．與外教交談；

3．把單詞寫在紙條上，利用紙條記單詞．要求：1．語言通順，要點(diǎn)齊全，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；

2．詞數(shù)：100左右；
開頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【滿分范文】Dear Wang Wei，I received your email yesterday． In the email， you asked me how to improve your English． Now I＇d like to give you some advice．【高分句型一】（引出話題）First， watching English films and listening to English songs are great ways to learn English! Watch and listen several times， and guess the meaning of the new words．Second， having a conversation with a foreign teacher is also a good way． You＇d better start it with greetings or a question．【高分句型二】 Also， smile before you speak and do not feel shy．Third， write four or five words a day on pieces of paper and place them in your room． Read the words when you see them， and try to use them．（具體介紹學(xué)好英語的建議） These are my suggestions． I hope they are useful to you．（希望）Yours，Zhang Hua（三）如今，越來越多年輕人沉迷網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲．請根據(jù)下面表格里的內(nèi)容提示，以“How to Beat the Computer Game Addiction“ （沉迷，上癮）“為題寫一篇英文短文，談?wù)劸W(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲的危害，并給出如何解決問題的建議．①網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲的危害浪費(fèi)時間危害健康其他危害②解決問題的建議縮短在線時間增加閱讀多散步聽音樂多參加活動其他建議要求：
1．詞數(shù)：
80﹣100 （開頭和結(jié)尾已給出的內(nèi)容不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；

2．短文中應(yīng)包括：“①網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲的危害“部分的全部提示只容；
“②解決問題的建議“部分至少三項(xiàng)提示內(nèi)容．不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、地名．3．文章條理清楚、意思連貫、語句通順；
卷面書寫工整、句式規(guī)范、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號使用正確．How to Beat the Computer Game AddictionNowadays， many young people like computer games． Some of them are even addicted to playing the games．______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________All in all， getting rid of this bad habit and leading a healthy life do help young people to enjoy more．【滿分范文】How to Beat the Computer Game AddictionNowadays， many young people like computer games． Some of them are even addicted to playing the games．（點(diǎn)題）It not only wastes time， but also does harm to health．【高分句型一】Some students spend a lot of money on games．Some students even borrow money to play games．This has brought financial hardship to families．（危害）Here are some advice to solve the problem．In your free time， listen to music or go for a walk．It＇s very relaxing．Take part in some meaningful activities， such as reading activities， speech contests， volunteer work and so on．Besides， I think parents should spend more time with their children．【高分句型二】（建議） All in all， getting rid of this bad habit and leading a healthy life do help young people to enjoy more．（總結(jié)全文）（四）請仔細(xì)觀察下面的圖片，并根據(jù)所給提示和要求寫一篇短文．提示：（1）What are the man and the boy doing？（2）What kind of influence does using mobile phones may bring？（3）What is your attitude （態(tài)度） towards this behavior？要求：（1）短文須包括所有提示內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

（2）短文中不要出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的地名、校名和人名；

（3）詞數(shù)80個左右（開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）．參考詞匯：secretly；

technology；

natural；

convenient；

focus on （集中注意力在……上）We can see a man and a boy in the picture． The man is ________．_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【滿分范文】We can see a man and a boy in the picture． The man is teaching a class． The boy is having a class， but he is playing with his mobile phone secretly．（介紹圖中的人在干什么）With the fast development of technology， it is natural for students to have mobile phones in hand．【高分句型一】 They can use their mobile phones to do something they like at any time in any place． It seems very convenient． But the mobile phones also bring some bad influences on their study and life． They can＇t focus on their study． They lose themselves in their own life and don＇t want to communicate with others．【高分句型二】（使用手機(jī)的危害）As students， I think we should pay attention to what our teacher says instead of playing with the phones． What＇s more， we can＇t spend too much time playing with the phones in our free time．（我的態(tài)度）（五）今年的“史上最長“寒假讓同學(xué)們有了不同尋常的體驗(yàn)﹣﹣空中課堂、居家自學(xué)、居家運(yùn)動等．或逍遙自在過，或糾結(jié)迷惘過，或用心改變過……請根據(jù)下圖提示，結(jié)合自身經(jīng)歷， 寫一篇英語短文分享你的心路歷程，并發(fā)表觀點(diǎn)．At firstI felt，laterI started to…NowI…FactOpinion：
I realize that I＇ve changed． …注意：1． 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名與校名；

2． 詞數(shù)110詞左右，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．My winter holiday has come to an end this year and it has brought me an unforgettable experience．At first，_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【滿分范文】My winter holiday has come to an end this year and it has brought me an unforgettable experience．（點(diǎn)題）At first， I didn＇t use to online classes． I felt so upset because I could only stay at home． 【高分句型一】Later， I began to study online at home．I gradually got used to this kind of life．Now， I keep up having online classes every day．（我的心情變化）In fact，online classes are more convenient， because we don＇t have to go to school．It can improve students＇ learning abilities． It＇s good for students to communicate with excellent teachers online．【高分句型二】 The teachers and students can share better educational resources．（事實(shí)）I realize that I＇ve changed a lot．I think online classes are not only interesting but also improve students＇ learning ability． （我的觀點(diǎn)）（六）南京陽光中學(xué)每年要接特來自世界各地的交流學(xué)生。為了讓他們更好地在南京學(xué)習(xí)生活，校學(xué)生會面向全體學(xué)生招募“陽光志愿者”。假如你是李明，請根據(jù)下面招募廣告，用英文寫一封自薦信。

Volunteers WantedRequired QualificationsGood English and ChineseHelpful, patient, outgoingGood knowledge of Chinese cultureDutiesTeach Chinese＆introduce Chinese cultureShow exchange students around NanjingWorking hours4:00 p.m.-5:00 p.m. Wednesday, 8:00 a.m.-12:00 am. SundayContact Info.Ms. YangEmail: iindayang@163.comJoin us!注意：
1. 對所有要點(diǎn)逐一陳述，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

2. 詞數(shù)80左右，自薦信的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．3. 文中不得提及有關(guān)考生個人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等．Dear Ms. YangI would to be a sunshine volunteer. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I will be very happy if I am chosen .to be a volunteer.. I＇m really looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerelyLi Ming【滿分范文】Dear Ms. Yang,I would like to be sunshine volunteer.First I am good at both English and Chinese.And I am sure I can teach exchange students Chinese well.I am also helpful and I am always ready to help those in need.Besides,I am patient enough everything in detail.i have such a good knowledge of the Chinese culture that can help them know the beauty of it.I can make good plans for their trips because I know Nanjing well.I am outgoing and I think it’s easy for me to make friends with them,I am free from 4:00p.m. to 5:00p.m. on Wednesday.I can teach them Chinese during this time.I can also spend the whole Sunday morning showing them around Nanjing.I will be very happy if I am chosen to be a volunteer.Iam really looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely,Li Ming【解析】這篇書面表達(dá)是寫一封作學(xué)校“陽光志愿者”的自薦信。這是篇材料作文。招募廣告即寫作的主要內(nèi)容，考生可從自己是否滿足招募要求入手。在寫作時，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時要賦予變化，這樣才可以更好的駕馭。同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點(diǎn)組織成一個完整的整體。

（七）現(xiàn)在很多同學(xué)使用智能手機(jī)（smart phone）。智能手機(jī)給我們學(xué)習(xí)生活帶來便利的同時， 也產(chǎn)生許多不好的影響。比如我們身邊越來越多的同學(xué)成了“低頭族”（phubbers）。假如你 是李華,你校的《英語園地》正在征文。請你投稿，談?wù)勀銓χ悄苁謾C(jī)的看法以及你是如何 正確使用智能手機(jī)的。

提示詞語：advantages, convenient, proper, study提示問題：
What do you think of smart phones?What do you do with your own smart phone?Refuse to be phubbersMore and more people are using smart-phones nowadays. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【滿分范文】Refuse to be phubbersMore and more people are using smart phones. Smartphones are helpful to our lives. We can use them to read news, shop online and so on .It is very useful and convenient. In fact, smartphones make our life colorful. However, every coin has two sides. Sometimes some of us spend too much time playing games on the smartphone and get bad results in exams. It has caused bad effects on us． Phubbers can be seen here and there. One Sunday morning, I was looking at my smartphone while walking. A car nearly hit me. How terrible! I won＇t do it any more. So I think we should use our smartphones properly and don＇t use them too much. We should pay more attention to our schoolwork. I will use my smart phone wisely and try not to be phubbers.【解析】題干分析：閱讀題干，要求談?wù)剬χ悄苁謾C(jī)的看法以及是如何正確使用智能手機(jī)的。智能手機(jī)給我們學(xué)習(xí)生活帶來便利的同時，也會產(chǎn)生許多不好的影響。所以在寫作文時，我們不僅要寫出弊也要寫出利，同時要表達(dá)自己觀點(diǎn)。

例文點(diǎn)評：例文采取的是三段式寫作手法，第一段首先闡述了目前的使用手機(jī)的狀況，點(diǎn)明使用手機(jī)有利有弊，第二段重點(diǎn)寫使用手機(jī)造成的壞處；
最后寫自己的觀點(diǎn)及看法。例文中運(yùn)用的是一般現(xiàn)在時為主，同時使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。

高分亮點(diǎn)：
短語：be helpful to對……有幫助；
here and there到處；
not any more不再；
pay more attention to注意；
try to do sth努力做某事。

句型：(1)In fact，smartphones make our life colorful．事實(shí)上，智能手機(jī)讓我們的生活豐富多彩。in fact事實(shí)上， make +n．+adj． make our life colorful讓我們的生活豐富多彩；
（2）Sometimes some of us spend too much time playing games on the smartphone and get bad results in exams．有時我們中一些人花太多時間在智能手機(jī)上玩游戲，考試結(jié)果很糟糕。and連接兩個并列謂語，spend some time doing sth 花時間做某事。

（八）因疫情防控，全國各地大中小學(xué)被迫延遲開學(xué)．“線上教學(xué)“應(yīng)運(yùn)而生，學(xué)生們借助各大網(wǎng)絡(luò)平臺開啟了精彩紛呈的網(wǎng)上學(xué)習(xí)之旅．為使得這一新型學(xué)習(xí)方式更好的發(fā)揮效用，教育部與某英文報(bào)紙合作，開設(shè)專欄，鼓勵同學(xué)們以對話教育部長的形式，對目前的“線上教學(xué)“問題展各抒己見．假設(shè)你是李華，請你寫一封信給教育部長，談一談你對線上學(xué)習(xí)的感受，內(nèi)容包括：
1．簡要介紹說明寫信意圖；

2．“線上教學(xué)“的好處；

3．“線上教學(xué)“存在的問題及原因，并提出你的建議．作文要求：
1．不能照抄原文；

不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校的真實(shí)名稱和學(xué)生的真實(shí)姓名．2．語句連貫，詞數(shù) 80 個左右．Dear Minister，I hope this email finds you in good health．_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I am looking forward to your reply．Best regards.Li Hua【滿分范文】Dear Minister，I hope this email finds you in good health．Schools and colleges across the country have been forced to delay the start of classes because of controlling the outbreak． Online teaching has been more popular．Here I would like to express my opinion．（寫信意圖）Online teaching has many advantages．First， students don＇t have to go to school．They can take lessons at home on computers or mobile phones．Secondly， students can repeat what they don＇t understand．In addition， online teaching costs less because both teachers and students can share resources．【高分句型一】（好處）There are also problems with online teaching．Some students play games on the Internet instead of studying．Besides， online teaching can＇t communicate face to face．（問題）I hope parents pay more attention to their children to prevent them from spending time playing computer games．【高分句型二】I also hope to improve online teaching so that teachers and students can communicate better．（建議）I am looking forward to your reply． Best regards. Li Hua（九）2023 年新年伊始，由于受新型冠狀病毒（novel coronavirus）的影響，全國 人民都在各自的家中進(jìn)行學(xué)習(xí)和工作．而作為初三的我們也經(jīng)歷了人生里的第一 次學(xué)校線上學(xué)習(xí)課程．我們的線上學(xué)習(xí)已經(jīng)持續(xù)了將近兩個月的時間，在這段時 間里，你肯定也深有感悟．近期英語學(xué)習(xí)報(bào)邀請你用英文來寫一篇文章，介紹你 對線上學(xué)習(xí)的認(rèn)識．內(nèi)容：1．線上學(xué)習(xí)和在校學(xué)習(xí)的不同2．可以推薦的線上學(xué)習(xí)的方法要求：1．內(nèi)容完整，語言流暢，書寫規(guī)范．2．短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名，校名．100 詞左右．___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【滿分范文】Affected by a novel coronavirus，online teaching has been more popular．But there are some differences between online learning and school learning．（點(diǎn)題）Online learning is through a computer or mobile phone．Teachers and students communicate through computers or mobile phones．In school， teachers and students are taught and learned face to face．They each have their advantages and disadvantages．（線上學(xué)習(xí)和在校學(xué)習(xí)的不同）When students study online， they had better save videos of the class so that they can review what they don＇t understand．【高分句型一】Besides，students from different areas or schools can share learning resources．（推薦線上學(xué)習(xí)的方法）I hope parents pay more attention to their children to prevent them from spending time playing computer games．【高分句型二】I also hope to improve online teaching so that teachers and students can communicate better．（希望）（十）假如你是貝貝，你遠(yuǎn)在澳大利亞的筆友Andrew給你寫了一封郵件，告訴了你關(guān)于他們讀書周的事情，并想了解你的一些情況跟看法．請你根據(jù)他的提問，回復(fù)一封英文郵件．From：
Andrew@Australia． comTo：
Beibei@Suzhou． comWe will have a Reading Week next month． Every student should read a book and share it with others． I＇m not sure which book to read． I remember you like reading very much． Here are some questions I want to ask you．Can you tell me the reasons why reading is important？How much time do you spend reading every day？What kind of book do you like best？ Where do you get your books？Can you tell me something about the book you＇ve read recently and what you have learned from the book？I hope to hear from you soon．Yours．Andrew注意：1．詞數(shù)90左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

2．回復(fù)須包括所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．使全文連貫、通順．Dear Andrew，I＇m glad you will have a Reading Week．_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope you will find my answers useful to you． Write to me any time if you have other questions．Best wishes.Beibei【滿分范文】Dear Andrew，I′m glad you will have a Reading Week． （引出話題）I think reading is really important because it＇s really useful．【高分句型一】（我的觀點(diǎn)） It can not only improve our knowledge but also make us relaxed．（作用） I usually read for an hour every day． I like reading novels best．高分句型二 And I often borrow books from the school library． （我的做法）I have just finished a book about Robinson． It is a novel about how Robinson successfully survived after spending many years on a little island and finally went back to his family． From him， I learned that whatever we met， we should never give up．（我朗讀的書籍及給我的啟示）I hope you will find my answers useful to you． Write to me any time if you have other questions．（希望）（十一）初中三年，你在生活或?qū)W習(xí)中，一定取得過不少進(jìn)步，比如生活技能的獲得、學(xué)習(xí)方法的掌握、良好習(xí)慣的養(yǎng)成．請你任選其中一個方面，結(jié)合自身的經(jīng)歷，談?wù)勀闶窃鯓尤〉眠M(jìn)步的．內(nèi)容要求：
（1）字?jǐn)?shù)80﹣100字．開頭已給出．不計(jì)入字?jǐn)?shù)．（2）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名．How time flies! I have made great progress in my past three years．_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【滿分范文】How time flies! I have made great progress in my past three years．I used to be lazy and wasn＇t interested in English．（懶惰，對英語不敢興趣） Last year，my new English，Mrs Liu，had a long conversation with me． She gave me great help and encouraged me not to give up．【高分句型一】She taught me some good ways of learning English．（老師幫助我交給我方法）So I made a decision to study hard at English． For example，I take notes in class． I watch English movies as often as possible．【高分句型二】I spent much time learning English every day．（我用老師教的方法努力學(xué)習(xí)英語） Now I＇m glad that I have made some progress and caught up with others in my class．（取得進(jìn)步，跟上班上的同學(xué)）