考研英語復習資料考研英語作文范文的批改22
Having noticed the advertisement in todays BTV Channel 1,My interest in the position of news editor has prompted me to forward my resume for your review and consideration.
I feel that I have the qualifications necessary to effectively handle the responsibilities of the position.For one thing,I am presently a senior in good standing at Shanghai University.in the past three years, I have achieved satisfactory scores in my studies and been awarded scholarships several times.For another,I have more than two years of experience working as a part-time edit in Shanghai Book Company.
Thank you for your attention to my resume,I look forward to an interview to discuss further.
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming
考研英語作文批改點評如下：
Dear Sir or Madam,
I feel that I have the qualifications necessary to effectively handle the responsibilities of the position. For one thing, I am presently a senior in good standing at Shanghai University. in(i大寫) the past three years, I have achieved satisfactory scores in my studies and been awarded scholarships several times. For another, I have more than two years of experience working as a part-time edit(edit是個動詞，這里需要名詞editor) in Shanghai Book Company. Thank you for your attention to my resume, I look forward to an interview to discuss further. Sincerely yours, Li Ming(應該位于右下方) 點評：7-8分寫的很不錯，語言簡練，注意格式，加油! Having noticed the advertisement in todays BTV Channel 1, My(m小寫)interest in the position of news editor has prompted me to forward my resume for your review and consideration.
Having noticed the advertisement in todays BTV Channel 1,My interest in the position of news editor has prompted me to forward my resume for your review and consideration.
I feel that I have the qualifications necessary to effectively handle the responsibilities of the position.For one thing,I am presently a senior in good standing at Shanghai University.in the past three years, I have achieved satisfactory scores in my studies and been awarded scholarships several times.For another,I have more than two years of experience working as a part-time edit in Shanghai Book Company.
Thank you for your attention to my resume,I look forward to an interview to discuss further.
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming
考研英語作文批改點評如下：
Dear Sir or Madam,
I feel that I have the qualifications necessary to effectively handle the responsibilities of the position. For one thing, I am presently a senior in good standing at Shanghai University. in(i大寫) the past three years, I have achieved satisfactory scores in my studies and been awarded scholarships several times. For another, I have more than two years of experience working as a part-time edit(edit是個動詞，這里需要名詞editor) in Shanghai Book Company. Thank you for your attention to my resume, I look forward to an interview to discuss further. Sincerely yours, Li Ming(應該位于右下方) 點評：7-8分寫的很不錯，語言簡練，注意格式，加油! Having noticed the advertisement in todays BTV Channel 1, My(m小寫)interest in the position of news editor has prompted me to forward my resume for your review and consideration.
