2024屆高考英語考前沖刺得分練：短文改錯2024新題賞析
第15講 短文改錯2024新題賞析
新題賞析
全國新課標(biāo)
題一：
My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month. It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport.
We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath. What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing. The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish.
It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing.
題二：
Dear Mom,
Mother’s Day was coming. I’m sorry that I am abroad and can’t send your flowers, so I’m writing to you.
Mom, I know I have never expressed my thank to you before. But on today, at this special time, I just want to tell you loudly: I love you, Mom! Thank you so much by not only giving me life, but also teach me how to be a good person. Thank you for all you had done for me. Mom, though I may often say it, I do love you. Nobody can take your part in my heart. Whenever I am, I will always love you. Hope you good health and much happiness every day!
Your little girl,
Jennifer
全國I卷uch after I went to college a year ago. Whenever I think of
77._________
the old days, I feel very happily. I still remember when I
78._________
was child, you always held me in your arms and told me stories
79._________
till I fall asleep. We often went to the fields to enjoy the pleasant
80._________
view there. You told me the name of different plants and their
81._________
characteristics. Gradually, I became interesting in biology
82._________
and chose to learn biology when I entered into the college. Now
83.________
my friend Ann, together with me, are going to do field study
84.________
and the findings will be use as materials for our research. Since
85.________
we’ll do the study in our hometown, I hope to see you by then.
Yours,
Daisy
題四：
An English lady was finally decided that she really should
66_______
learn to drive, And after many attempts, she past her
67_______
driving test and told her husband that. To release，he
68_______
was going to drive him over to France for a holiday. But
69_______
then a week after the trip, she suddenly announced that
70_______
they wouldn’t take the holiday. “How did you change your
71_______
mind?” he asked her by surprise. “Well，it is all because
72_______
of the business of driving on right.” She said, “I have
73______
been practicing for three weeks now, but I still couldn’t
74______
get used to it-in fact, I’ve nearly killed three peoples。”
75______
全國II卷It was a chance of a lifetime to win the first
76_______
____
prize on the Story Writing Show. All I had to do
77_______
____
was to write a story or present it. My teachers
78_______
____
have been telling me how great my writing was.
79___
____
So if they had said was true, I would have a chance
80____
___
of winning the prize . What were better , I had useful
81.
help . There was Uncle Chen , gentleman living
82.
near my house , who was a very much famous writer
83
He agreed to reading my story and give me some
84
advices on how to write like a real writer.
85
題六：
Christie was one of my best friend at high school 76.
At that time, we often spend time together. 77.
Thank to her help, I made great progress in my 78.
study. Last year, she decided to study abroad. In 79.
other words, we would be separated for long time. 80.
Before her leaving off, I prepared a gift to show 81.
my best whishes to him. She said it was the best 82.
gift she has ever had. From then on, we’ve 83.
kept touch with another through e-mails. I 84.
look forward to see her again in the near future. 85.
第15講 短文改錯2024新題賞析
主講教師：林斌
北京八十中學(xué)英語高級教師
新題賞析
全國新課標(biāo)
題一：
1. visit-visited
2. but-and/so
3 to
4. comfortably改為comfortable
5. were改為was
6. for改為with
7. taking改為taken
8. dish改為dishes
9. such后加a
10. me改為mine
解析：
1.根據(jù)時間狀語last month可知本句時態(tài)是一般過去時，故動詞用過去式。
2. 前后文是順延或者因果關(guān)系，所以連詞用so或者and。
3. anywhere是指地點的副詞，前面不用介詞。
4. 修飾后面的名詞room，要用形容詞。
5. what引導(dǎo)的主語從句作主語，謂語動詞根據(jù)后面的表語決定，此處后面是單數(shù)，所以用was。
6. 動詞share常與with構(gòu)成搭配，意思是：和某人分享。
7. 非謂語動詞做后置定語，被修飾的詞和take之間構(gòu)成被動關(guān)系，所以要用過去分詞。
8. 由several修飾，后面名詞要用復(fù)數(shù)。
9. hotel是可數(shù)名詞，前面要加a。
10. 雙重所有格的構(gòu)成是of+名詞性物主代詞或者所有格。
題二：
1. was改為is
2. your改為you
3. thank改為thanks
4. on
5. by改為for
6. teach改為teaching
7. had改為have
8. may后加not
9. Whenever改為Wherever
10. Hope改為Wish
解析：
1. 指的是現(xiàn)在馬上就要到母親節(jié)了。
2. 此處動詞send接雙賓語，應(yīng)使用賓格形式，構(gòu)成短語send sb. sth.。
3.“表達(dá)感謝”應(yīng)為：express one’s thanks。
4. 在副詞today之前不用介詞，故去掉。
5. Thank sb. for…為固定短語“因…而感謝”。
6. 此處是but連接的用于介詞之后的并列的動名詞形式。
7. 全篇文章屬于現(xiàn)在的時態(tài)，故將過去完成時改為現(xiàn)在完成時。
8. 句意為：媽媽，雖然我可能沒有經(jīng)常說，但我確實很愛你。
9. 根據(jù)句意：無論我在哪里，我總是愛你的。
10. 動詞hope后不能接雙賓語，應(yīng)用wish符合語境和語法規(guī)則。
全國I卷
題三：
76. those改為these
77. after改為since
78. happily改為happy
79. child前加a
80. fall改為fell
81. name改為names
82. interesting改為interested
83.
into
84. are改為is
85. use改為used
解析：
76. these days意為近來。
77. since意為自從……以來，主句中用現(xiàn)在完成時。
78. feel意為感覺，是系動詞，后面要跟形容詞做表語。
79. child是單數(shù)可數(shù)名詞，前面要加a。
80.指的是過去，所以要用過去式fell。
81. 后面指的是不同的植物，所以name要用復(fù)數(shù)形式。
82. 主語是人，對……感興趣要用be interested in。
83. enter本身就是及物動詞，后面不需要加介詞。
84. together with連接兩個主語的時候，后面的謂語動詞要和前面的保持一致，此處要和Ann保持一致，所以要用單數(shù)謂語動詞is。
85. 此處是被動語態(tài)，表示被用來，所以用be used。
題四：
66.去掉finally 前的was
67. past→passed
68. he→she
69. √
70. after→before
71 How→Why
72. by→in
73. right→the right
74. couldn’t→can’t
75. peoples→people
解析：
66. lady與decide 之間為主動關(guān)系。
67. 此處意為“通過”，應(yīng)使用pass的過去式。
68. 此處應(yīng)為妻子要帶丈夫去法國，應(yīng)用女性的人稱代詞。
69. √
70.
此處應(yīng)為在此次旅行之間，妻子就因不適應(yīng)右側(cè)駕駛改變了主意。
71
此處為丈夫?qū)ζ拮油蝗桓淖冎饕獠焕斫猓儐栐颉?/p>
72.
in surprise 為固定搭配，意為“驚奇地，驚訝地”。
73.
方位名詞前腰加定冠詞。
74.
此處應(yīng)為目前還不是要右側(cè)駕駛，應(yīng)用現(xiàn)在時。
75.
people本身就是復(fù)數(shù)名詞，不需要在后面加s。
全國II卷
題五：
76. √
77. on改為in
78. or改為and
79. have改為had
80. if后加what
81. were 改為was
82. gentleman前加a
83. much
84. reading改為read
85. advices改為advice
解析：
76. √
77. in…show “在……節(jié)目里”。
78. or表選擇，and表順接和并列。
79. 此處應(yīng)該指的是獲獎之前，獲獎是過去，所以此處要用過去的過去，即過去完成時。
80. what引導(dǎo)主語從句，在句中意思為“……的話”。
81. 不可數(shù)名詞謂語動詞用單數(shù)。
82. gentleman是可數(shù)名詞。
83.“非常出名”，very修飾形容詞，very much修飾動詞。
84. agree to do sth.“同意做某事”，to后跟動詞原形。
85. advice是不可數(shù)名詞，沒有復(fù)數(shù)形式。
題六：
76. friend → friends
77. spend →spent
78. Thank →Thanks
79. √
80. for a long
81. off
82. him →her
83. has →had
84. kept后加in
85. see →seeing
解析：
76. one of 后接名詞復(fù)數(shù)，表示許多的當(dāng)中的一個。
77. At that time“那時候”所以此處表示過去發(fā)生的事情。
78. Thanks to 是固定短語，“多虧了，因為”。
79. √
80. For a long time表示“一段時間”，固定短語。
81. leave 已經(jīng)表示離開之意，off多余。
82. 代詞使用要一致，根據(jù)上下文可知是女她。
83. 時態(tài)錯誤，主句中said是過去，所以從句中要用相應(yīng)的過去，所以應(yīng)為過去完成時。
84. 固定短語keep in touch with表示“與人保持聯(lián)系”。
85. look forward to中的to是介詞，后接動詞時要用動名詞形式。
第15講 短文改錯2024新題賞析
新題賞析
全國新課標(biāo)
題一：
My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month. It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport.
We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath. What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing. The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish.
It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing.
題二：
Dear Mom,
Mother’s Day was coming. I’m sorry that I am abroad and can’t send your flowers, so I’m writing to you.
Mom, I know I have never expressed my thank to you before. But on today, at this special time, I just want to tell you loudly: I love you, Mom! Thank you so much by not only giving me life, but also teach me how to be a good person. Thank you for all you had done for me. Mom, though I may often say it, I do love you. Nobody can take your part in my heart. Whenever I am, I will always love you. Hope you good health and much happiness every day!
Your little girl,
Jennifer
全國I卷uch after I went to college a year ago. Whenever I think of
77._________
the old days, I feel very happily. I still remember when I
78._________
was child, you always held me in your arms and told me stories
79._________
till I fall asleep. We often went to the fields to enjoy the pleasant
80._________
view there. You told me the name of different plants and their
81._________
characteristics. Gradually, I became interesting in biology
82._________
and chose to learn biology when I entered into the college. Now
83.________
my friend Ann, together with me, are going to do field study
84.________
and the findings will be use as materials for our research. Since
85.________
we’ll do the study in our hometown, I hope to see you by then.
Yours,
Daisy
題四：
An English lady was finally decided that she really should
66_______
learn to drive, And after many attempts, she past her
67_______
driving test and told her husband that. To release，he
68_______
was going to drive him over to France for a holiday. But
69_______
then a week after the trip, she suddenly announced that
70_______
they wouldn’t take the holiday. “How did you change your
71_______
mind?” he asked her by surprise. “Well，it is all because
72_______
of the business of driving on right.” She said, “I have
73______
been practicing for three weeks now, but I still couldn’t
74______
get used to it-in fact, I’ve nearly killed three peoples。”
75______
全國II卷It was a chance of a lifetime to win the first
76_______
____
prize on the Story Writing Show. All I had to do
77_______
____
was to write a story or present it. My teachers
78_______
____
have been telling me how great my writing was.
79___
____
So if they had said was true, I would have a chance
80____
___
of winning the prize . What were better , I had useful
81.
help . There was Uncle Chen , gentleman living
82.
near my house , who was a very much famous writer
83
He agreed to reading my story and give me some
84
advices on how to write like a real writer.
85
題六：
Christie was one of my best friend at high school 76.
At that time, we often spend time together. 77.
Thank to her help, I made great progress in my 78.
study. Last year, she decided to study abroad. In 79.
other words, we would be separated for long time. 80.
Before her leaving off, I prepared a gift to show 81.
my best whishes to him. She said it was the best 82.
gift she has ever had. From then on, we’ve 83.
kept touch with another through e-mails. I 84.
look forward to see her again in the near future. 85.
第15講 短文改錯2024新題賞析
主講教師：林斌
北京八十中學(xué)英語高級教師
新題賞析
全國新課標(biāo)
題一：
1. visit-visited
2. but-and/so
3 to
4. comfortably改為comfortable
5. were改為was
6. for改為with
7. taking改為taken
8. dish改為dishes
9. such后加a
10. me改為mine
解析：
1.根據(jù)時間狀語last month可知本句時態(tài)是一般過去時，故動詞用過去式。
2. 前后文是順延或者因果關(guān)系，所以連詞用so或者and。
3. anywhere是指地點的副詞，前面不用介詞。
4. 修飾后面的名詞room，要用形容詞。
5. what引導(dǎo)的主語從句作主語，謂語動詞根據(jù)后面的表語決定，此處后面是單數(shù)，所以用was。
6. 動詞share常與with構(gòu)成搭配，意思是：和某人分享。
7. 非謂語動詞做后置定語，被修飾的詞和take之間構(gòu)成被動關(guān)系，所以要用過去分詞。
8. 由several修飾，后面名詞要用復(fù)數(shù)。
9. hotel是可數(shù)名詞，前面要加a。
10. 雙重所有格的構(gòu)成是of+名詞性物主代詞或者所有格。
題二：
1. was改為is
2. your改為you
3. thank改為thanks
4. on
5. by改為for
6. teach改為teaching
7. had改為have
8. may后加not
9. Whenever改為Wherever
10. Hope改為Wish
解析：
1. 指的是現(xiàn)在馬上就要到母親節(jié)了。
2. 此處動詞send接雙賓語，應(yīng)使用賓格形式，構(gòu)成短語send sb. sth.。
3.“表達(dá)感謝”應(yīng)為：express one’s thanks。
4. 在副詞today之前不用介詞，故去掉。
5. Thank sb. for…為固定短語“因…而感謝”。
6. 此處是but連接的用于介詞之后的并列的動名詞形式。
7. 全篇文章屬于現(xiàn)在的時態(tài)，故將過去完成時改為現(xiàn)在完成時。
8. 句意為：媽媽，雖然我可能沒有經(jīng)常說，但我確實很愛你。
9. 根據(jù)句意：無論我在哪里，我總是愛你的。
10. 動詞hope后不能接雙賓語，應(yīng)用wish符合語境和語法規(guī)則。
全國I卷
題三：
76. those改為these
77. after改為since
78. happily改為happy
79. child前加a
80. fall改為fell
81. name改為names
82. interesting改為interested
83.
into
84. are改為is
85. use改為used
解析：
76. these days意為近來。
77. since意為自從……以來，主句中用現(xiàn)在完成時。
78. feel意為感覺，是系動詞，后面要跟形容詞做表語。
79. child是單數(shù)可數(shù)名詞，前面要加a。
80.指的是過去，所以要用過去式fell。
81. 后面指的是不同的植物，所以name要用復(fù)數(shù)形式。
82. 主語是人，對……感興趣要用be interested in。
83. enter本身就是及物動詞，后面不需要加介詞。
84. together with連接兩個主語的時候，后面的謂語動詞要和前面的保持一致，此處要和Ann保持一致，所以要用單數(shù)謂語動詞is。
85. 此處是被動語態(tài)，表示被用來，所以用be used。
題四：
66.去掉finally 前的was
67. past→passed
68. he→she
69. √
70. after→before
71 How→Why
72. by→in
73. right→the right
74. couldn’t→can’t
75. peoples→people
解析：
66. lady與decide 之間為主動關(guān)系。
67. 此處意為“通過”，應(yīng)使用pass的過去式。
68. 此處應(yīng)為妻子要帶丈夫去法國，應(yīng)用女性的人稱代詞。
69. √
70.
此處應(yīng)為在此次旅行之間，妻子就因不適應(yīng)右側(cè)駕駛改變了主意。
71
此處為丈夫?qū)ζ拮油蝗桓淖冎饕獠焕斫猓儐栐颉?/p>
72.
in surprise 為固定搭配，意為“驚奇地，驚訝地”。
73.
方位名詞前腰加定冠詞。
74.
此處應(yīng)為目前還不是要右側(cè)駕駛，應(yīng)用現(xiàn)在時。
75.
people本身就是復(fù)數(shù)名詞，不需要在后面加s。
全國II卷
題五：
76. √
77. on改為in
78. or改為and
79. have改為had
80. if后加what
81. were 改為was
82. gentleman前加a
83. much
84. reading改為read
85. advices改為advice
解析：
76. √
77. in…show “在……節(jié)目里”。
78. or表選擇，and表順接和并列。
79. 此處應(yīng)該指的是獲獎之前，獲獎是過去，所以此處要用過去的過去，即過去完成時。
80. what引導(dǎo)主語從句，在句中意思為“……的話”。
81. 不可數(shù)名詞謂語動詞用單數(shù)。
82. gentleman是可數(shù)名詞。
83.“非常出名”，very修飾形容詞，very much修飾動詞。
84. agree to do sth.“同意做某事”，to后跟動詞原形。
85. advice是不可數(shù)名詞，沒有復(fù)數(shù)形式。
題六：
76. friend → friends
77. spend →spent
78. Thank →Thanks
79. √
80. for a long
81. off
82. him →her
83. has →had
84. kept后加in
85. see →seeing
解析：
76. one of 后接名詞復(fù)數(shù)，表示許多的當(dāng)中的一個。
77. At that time“那時候”所以此處表示過去發(fā)生的事情。
78. Thanks to 是固定短語，“多虧了，因為”。
79. √
80. For a long time表示“一段時間”，固定短語。
81. leave 已經(jīng)表示離開之意，off多余。
82. 代詞使用要一致，根據(jù)上下文可知是女她。
83. 時態(tài)錯誤，主句中said是過去，所以從句中要用相應(yīng)的過去，所以應(yīng)為過去完成時。
84. 固定短語keep in touch with表示“與人保持聯(lián)系”。
85. look forward to中的to是介詞，后接動詞時要用動名詞形式。
